I lurked on here for a few pages a few months ago, but now I have the time to draw something... *determined face*
Actually this is just a coloured sketch. Because I still hate lineart with burning passion.
here for more Tenshi
Also known as why I should never draw clouds ever again. Originally the hands weren't going to be there but then I was like 'I MUST CONFRONT MY FEARS' and stuck them on at the last minute. It made the arms look wonky too~
Some critique in case you're interested.
-Her head is squashed. Try to draw her entire skull, you'll realise that the hair actually cuts into it.
-Eyes are too wide apart.
-The shading on the hair looks a little wonky; feels like you kinda just airbrushed it over. The lines are otherwise pretty good.
http://www.elfwood.com/farp/theart/maeryhair/maeryhair.htmlCheck this out for more help.
-Her arms are bent the wrong way. I can't imagine how painful it'll be for her. For starters you could try using a mirror as reference for the arms or a camera. If you can't do that, a reference pose works too. The shading there is also pretty wonky. How do I describe it...sharp? Maybe you're trying that newfangled "cell shading", what ever that is, but overall it doesn't fit the way you coloured the dress and skin. You're better off going with the airbrush.
-Her hands are too small. Basic anatomy dictates that hands should be as long (from middle finger to palm) as the distance between the eyebrows and chin. Smaller is fine, but definitely not this small.
-Dress doesn't seem to be wrong. Not glaringly so, at least.
-Shoulders look wonky. Do you know how they work?
-I presume the choice of light source is to the (image) left. You need to emphasise that more on the overall shading.
I think that's it, I'm not an expert, but that's what I think is wrong. Brush up in anatomy and it should help you greatly. Hope this helps.