Author Topic: [Music+Art] Making Melody Needs Love! Battle's Palette (OC Theme) (2/22/12)  (Read 71306 times)

Anunsew

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Title needs MOAR ellipses.
And wat.

PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS POST IS NOT REGULARLY UPDATED
Since I can be a bit lazy. >_>
My latest work can be found in the recent posts. They might also be found here, but don't always count on it.

This post is a Work-in-Progress. I do plan to update it fully when I get the time and motivation to do so.

MUSIC

Youtube
Originals:
Rin Satsuki's Theme:
Cherry Flavored Justice ~ Descending Red / (Requested by Precision/Anunsew and Coin Spire): The Penetrating Flame of Justice
Meimu Hakurei Theme: Eden of Phantasm ~ Fantasy Candy
Shiku (Requested by Coin Spire): Eye of Painful Death ~ Fourth Melody
Belisaria Yagami (Requested by BelisariaYagami): 穢れ亡き夢 ~ Ethereal Mind
Raiko Inabikari (Requested by MikiMikiDouga): The Oni of Raijin~A Striking Black Op in the Clouds of Darkness!
Aiki (Requested by Coin Spire): Because Children's Hearts are Purer, Their Wrath is Wilder ~ Second Lachrymose Rose
Sammy Miyako (Requested by ArmWarmerSponge): Reversed Looking Glass ~ Stopping the Tides
Miki Bandy (Requested by ninjaloser602): Quick, Precise, Stalking Death
Sumire Raikōji (Requested by Ruro): And Thou Shalt be Judged ~ Violet Reparation
Swerve (Requested by SwerveStarEx): Kindly Destruction ~ The Stealthy Calm Berserker
Jameson + DeSa (Requested by strawberrywitch): Triple Paradigm
Eva Lundahl(Requested by Just50001):械時計の歌 ~ Wounded Clockwork Doll
Umi no Charlotte (Requested by Naeten): ( 東方 OC Request) Twelve Nautical Smiles
Kamon Farenheights (Requested by Pikayo): Eclipsed Light within the Radiant Darkness

Re-arrange
秋霜玉 ~ Shuusou Gyoku
Girl's Magical Crusade
[西方 Arrange] Witches' Ball ~ Magus

トルテルマジック:
Witch of Love Potion

Touhou 1 ~ Highly Responsive to Prayers:
Iris
The "Alice in Wonderland Angel" ~ Swordsman from a Distant Star
Now Until the Moment You Die!
Civilization of Magic

Touhou 2 ~ Story of Eastern Wonderland:
She's in a Temper!

Touhou 3 ~ Phantasmagoria of Dim. Dream:
Lost Dream, Broken Dream (Final)

Touhou 6 ~ Embodiment of the Scarlet Devil:
Rumia Laughs in the Night
Somewhere By the Lake
Music Box for the Sleeping Princess
Tea Breaks
Invitiation by U.N Owen


Touhou 10 ~ Mountain of Faith
Hina, Will You Please Help Me?

Touhou 11 ~ Subterranean Animism
Unlikely Anguish ~ Last Remote

Non-Touhou arranges
Far East Hourai Illusion

OC Rearranges
( 東方 OC Request) 永遠寝ろ ~ Sweet Dreams

Medleys:
Different Shades of Autumn

Mp3
Rin Satsuki's Theme: Cherry Flavored Justice ~ Descending Red / Alternate Link / The Penetrating Flame of Justice
Meimu Hakurei Theme: Eden of Phantasm ~ Fantasy Candy / Alternate Link
Aiki Theme: Second Lachrymose Rose
Shiku Theme: Eye of Painful Death
Sammy Theme: Reversed Looking Glass ~ Stopping the Tides (Re-uploaded)
Miki Theme: Quick, Precise, Stalking Death
Sumire Theme: And Thou Shalt Be Judged ~ Violet Reparation / Remastered version
Swerve Theme: Tindeck Download and mp3 link
Eva Theme:械時計の歌 ~ Wounded Clockwork Doll

Touhou HRtP rearranges:
Shingyouku Theme: Positive and Negative
Konngara Theme: The "Alice in Wonderland Angel" ~ Swordsman from a Distant Star / Loop-friendly version
Sariel Theme: Now Until the Moment You Die! // Civilization of Magic ( Alternate Link ) / Loop version
Ending theme: Iris

Touhou SoEW rearranges:
Rika's theme: She's in a Temper!

Touhou PoDD rearranges:
Kana Anaberal's Theme: Lost Dream, Broken Dream
Ellen Fuwafuwaatama Aureus's Theme: Tabula Rasa ~ Silky White Paper
Reimu Hakurei's Theme: Oriental Love Consultation

Touhou MS rearranges:
Yuki's Theme: Crimson Dead!

Touhou EoSD rearranges:
Cirno's Theme: Somewhere by the Lake
Remilia Scarlet's Theme: Music Box for the Sleeping Princess
Flandre Scarlet's Theme: Tea Breaks / Invitation by U.N Owen

Touhou Fanmade work arranges:
東方 異世門 (Eastern Otherworldly Gate) Tracks
Track 1: A Usual Day ~ Serene Orient
Track 2: Uncanny Occurence
Track 3: Deep Within the Discovered Path
Track 4: Familiar Dream

東方幻妖風 ~ City of Distortion Tracks
Track 1: [url=http://tindeck.com/listen/hyxi]Mirage City

Track 2: Graceful Ambush
Track 3: Ultranegative Spiritual Spectrum
Track 4: Nightshade Spirit
 
Non-Touhou rearranges:
秋霜玉 ~ Shuusou Gyoku:
Witches' Ball

☆その他の作品 ~ ZUN's Strange Works:
Evening Oriental Magician
Far East Hourai Illusion v0.5 (this one's a bit bad, the other one is probably what you want) / Far East Hourai Illusion

Non-ZUN:
Deli Shop Quartet


Medleys:
Different Shades of Autumn

Searching the old posts, I've found out that someone made a theme of Rin Satsuki before, so I'm not altogether original. :3


ART
Well, this ain't really an art thread, so it's a little bit barren here.

Marisa Kirisame


Rin Satsuki


Remilia Scarlet


Sumire Raikōji


Poinsettia



Compressed update data now follows:
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Update (Forgot the date, but pretty sure it was 2010...right?)
Changed the Rin links to the higher quality version. Also cut the annoying 5 second silence at the end. -_-
Enjoy ^^

Update (What date is it today?...June...June...,er..June 27, 2010)
Added Fantasy Candy.
Well, my conscience says that it sounds good, but she's a bad liar. :/
Also added a Mirror link for those who have issues with MediaFire.

Update (July 7, 2010) Yay, it's Tanabata!
Added Eye of Painful Death.
Hooray for weird sounds!

Update (July 27, 2010)
Added Witch of Love Potion and Iris
I need some inspiration...

Update (August 10, 2010)
Added 穢れ亡き夢 ~ Ethereal Mind
I'm just necrobumphing anyway

Update (August 22, 2010)
Added Rumia Laughs in the Night
what

Update (August 30, 2010)
Added Iris mp3 download

Update (September 7, 2010)
Added The Oni of Raijin~A Striking Black Op in the Clouds of Darkness!
Exclamation points are moe~

Update (September 10, 2010)
Changed the Raiko links to higher quality upload.
That's the last time I'm going to mix music without eating anything for nearly six hours...

Update (September 15, 2010)
Added Aiki links.
Added download link for Shiku

Update (September 26, 2010)
Added mp3 for Lost Dream.
What, no Youtube?

Update (September 29, 2010)
Added mp3 for Music Box for the Sleeping Princess
Youtube link for Kana and Remilia
Changed the (NEW!) tags, because I was too lazy to do it last 26.

Update (October 6, 2010)
Added Youtube link for Miwako...
Added mp3 link for Tabula Rasa
I'm so dead.....>.<

Update (October 13, 2010)
Remixed Kana's re-arrange. Changed the links.

Update (October 29, 2010
Uploaded Erich's theme.

Update (October 30, 2010
GygesHina, will You Please Help Me? and Lost Dream Final, uploaded.

Update (November 17, 2010)
Uploaded Different Shades of Autumn.
Uploaded Tea Breaks.
Also had come to a conclusion that I hate updating this log more than anything else. :/

Update (December 5, 2010)
Uploaded Quick, Precise, Stalking Death

Update (December 11~12, 2010)
Added Rin Satsuki's Theme: Penetrating Flame of Justice
Added Rin Satsuki's Picture

Update (January 6, 2011)
Added Remilia's picture

Update (January 13, 2011)
Added Sumire's theme and Serene Orient

Update (January 18, 2011)
Added Uncanny Occurence

Update (January 25, 2011)
Added Deep Within the Discovered Path
Anunsew is working hard!

Update (January 27, 2011)
Added Far East Hourai Illusion version 2! XD
A~NUN~SUUuuuuuuuuuuu~

Update (January 28, 2011)
Added Sumire's theme on youtube and remastered version~
Added PaN mp3

Update (January 31, 2011)
Added Rika's theme on youtube + mp3!
A~NUN~SUUuuuuuuuuuuu~

Update (February 1, 2011)
Added Familiar Dream

Update (February 7, 2011)
Added Konngara's theme and youtube link

Update (February 11, 2011)
Added Poinsettia

Update (February 15, 2011)
Added Civilization of Magic

Update (February 17, 2011)
Added youtube link of CoM

Update (March 3, 2011)
Added Sariel's First theme

Update (March 14~16, 2011)
Added Swerve's theme

Update (March 28, 2011)
Added Invitation
Added Youtube link
Yes, updating the update log is not really interesting for me. :./

Update (April 1, 2011)
Added Marisa drawing

Update (April something, 2011)
Added Evening Oriental Witch
Fixed Fehourai link

Update (April 18, 2011)
Added Crimson Dead!

Update (April 30, 2011)
Added Track 1 and 2 of 東方幻妖風 ~ City of Distortion

Update (May 21, 2011)
Added Cirno remix.
Dropped New tags because I'm too lazy to keep updating them.

Update (May 27, 2011)
Added Reimu remix

Update (May 28, 2011)
Remastered Reimu remix

Update (June 5, 2011)
Added Cirno Youtube

Update (June 12, 2011) Yay! Philippine Independence Day!
Added Deli Shop Quartet and a rip-off of Marisa's theme >_>

Update (June 14, 2011)
Added Nightshade Spirit

Update (June 25, 2011)
Added Triple Paradigm

Update(July, 2011)
Forgot to update.
Added  a bunch of stuff, I'll probably update the list in August.
So lazy~


Update(August, 2011)
Added Last Remote and Eva's theme

Update(November, 2011)
Added some themes to the list

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It's far from professional, but I hope somebody likes it. ^^

Anyway, feel free to listen, enjoy, and comment about it (good and bad, though good comments would be nice...)

Holy Crap, the size tags STACK.


These works and other works in succeeding posts by this user/ 'Anunsew' or 'Precision' or 'undone12' are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License.
« Last Edit: February 23, 2012, 02:18:47 AM by Anunsew »

Solais

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #1 on: June 16, 2010, 10:11:17 AM »
I know a certain someone who will take you home.

Not to mention, how I'm working on a Satsuki Rin script. I wonder how this goes with that, it sounds more Final Boss-ish than the one I'm using now what I got from Nico.

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #2 on: June 16, 2010, 10:21:33 AM »
Hey, this sounds rather nice! I approve of it. However the fadeout at the end sounds... Weird.
Also I weep for you. Moerin, do your thing.

Anunsew

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #3 on: June 16, 2010, 10:45:34 AM »
The fadeout was done using note velocity, not with expression so...
*ehem*
Please forget the above lines...

Glad that someone likes it. ^^
It supposed to loop back to 0:20 after finishing the last chorus, so it doesn't really have an ending.

So someone is making a Rin Satsuki script on danmakufu?

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #4 on: June 16, 2010, 11:42:18 AM »
Aye, it's my very first amateur work. So it's not that great, but I learned a lot during making it. It's almost done, only two cards needed.

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #5 on: June 16, 2010, 04:27:03 PM »
I like it amigo. I was thinking of covering One way Accelerator at some point, but this sounds even better

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #6 on: June 16, 2010, 05:13:37 PM »
...!
:helepolis:
This may be a little abrupt and all seeing how we don't really know each other, but I want to marry you and have your children.  Like, seriously. >.>

Ahem... Oh wow... That's really, really good~  I mean, it's great to see stuff like this coming out for poor, forgotten Rin... Keep up the good work, please! 
The solution to all of life's problems!

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #7 on: June 17, 2010, 03:41:06 AM »
Thanks for the positive feedback.

I re-uploaded a clearer version on Youtube and MF, since the five second silence at the end bugged me to sleeplessness, and the Strings and Choir Ahs can only be barely heard. >.<

Links are on the first post.


I need more love to make another theme. >.<
*Girls are now gathering love*

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #8 on: June 21, 2010, 10:48:12 AM »
* Solais channels love.

Anunsew

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #9 on: June 23, 2010, 02:30:13 AM »
Thanks for the love. :3

I'm trying to experiment with weird instrument combination like Marimba-Rock Piano-Distortion Guitar. Currently studying Sanae's theme, Reimu's first theme, and Touhou 6's menu theme for reference as well.

Study, study, study...if I do it good, I'm gonna get a good melody. :D

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #10 on: June 24, 2010, 03:53:45 AM »
I say you've got great potential.

My main criticism about this specific piece of music is that it doesn't sound very... boss-ish. Unless it's not meant to sound boss-ish. There's also a few things I think could be improved, too, but I myself am not a very experienced composer either.

Edit: Oh yeah, and make better fade-outs :3. You could use Audacity or something instead of just putting dynamics marks every measure at the end, which is what I'm assuming you're doing with your music-making program.
« Last Edit: June 24, 2010, 03:56:35 AM by Bitz »

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #11 on: June 24, 2010, 05:28:47 AM »
I say you've got great potential.

My main criticism about this specific piece of music is that it doesn't sound very... boss-ish. Unless it's not meant to sound boss-ish. There's also a few things I think could be improved, too, but I myself am not a very experienced composer either.

Edit: Oh yeah, and make better fade-outs :3. You could use Audacity or something instead of just putting dynamics marks every measure at the end, which is what I'm assuming you're doing with your music-making program.

I'm still self-studying so I'm still pretty rough when it comes to composing. Still, I'm going to try my best to get the style just right for Touhou. :3

Audacity...hmm, why didn't I think of that? :O
« Last Edit: June 24, 2010, 05:42:34 AM by undone12 »

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #12 on: June 24, 2010, 11:56:26 AM »
...I envy you so much right now...

...It sounds SO MUCH like what ZUN would compose...

...

FFFFFF

Parsee instincts tingling...

But yeah, *gives love. LOTS OF IT*

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #13 on: June 24, 2010, 08:10:05 PM »
This sounds so great. It's incredibly pleasant to the ears. Now we just need a game with Rin in it!

I have to agree that the fadeout is incredibly awkward though.

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #14 on: June 24, 2010, 08:47:04 PM »
Well, for my Script, I won't use this, it's too un-boss like, but one of her cards have changed so much that I had to rename it, and I chose the name  Descending Red "Cherry Flavored Justice".
« Last Edit: June 24, 2010, 10:05:09 PM by 偶然の妖精陰陽師 »

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #15 on: June 24, 2010, 10:00:11 PM »
You sure are modest, man. This music is incredible.

I'm planning to make a Touhou fighting fan-game ( when I get someone that models on Blender/3DSMax well or I learn to do so, and also when I learn completely the XNA Framework ) and I intend to make one of it's characters Rin ( and also Mima ), so I hope you let me use this music as Rin's theme.


I think there's some problem with Mediafire, because I can't download this incredible music... Nothing happens after I start the download...
« Last Edit: June 24, 2010, 10:03:45 PM by Netwarrior »
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Anunsew

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #16 on: June 25, 2010, 08:18:23 AM »
Well, for my Script, I won't use this, it's too un-boss like, but one of her cards have changed so much that I had to rename it, and I chose the name  Descending Red "Cherry Flavored Justice".

Regardless, be sure to give me a link if you manage to finish the script. :3

Actually, the theme was purposely made that way because a friend of mine (a danmakufu scripter) wanted a very long intro that lasts up to 50 seconds (The first life bar is a Survival Card lasting 50 secs), then the main spell card he called [Flare] Kirin's Descent activates around the chorus 51 seconds in.

We never managed to make it sync properly though, so he kinda abandoned the script. :P

EDIT: I'm so useless with Distortion guitars. :/
I'm gonna go back to Strings where my heart belongs. :3
« Last Edit: June 25, 2010, 09:20:39 AM by undone12 »

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #17 on: June 25, 2010, 10:03:04 AM »
...if only I had your skills...and knowledge of whatever program you are using.

I am stuck with FL Studio...

Netwarrior

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #18 on: June 25, 2010, 09:38:27 PM »
I think FL Studio is better for people that are used to work with sounds and stuff.

I recommend using a simpler program, such as Anvil Studio or Encore.
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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love...lots of it!
« Reply #19 on: June 26, 2010, 02:33:56 AM »
...

*Girls are now recording uploading*
*Please watch warmly while you wait*
« Last Edit: June 27, 2010, 03:45:07 AM by undone12 »

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« Reply #20 on: June 27, 2010, 03:58:35 AM »
Eden of Phantasm~Fantasy Candy
Mp3

Well, it's mainly an experiment on my part. I was trying out some instrument sounds that I don't usually use (like Marimba and Violins). Still doesn't have the boss-ish feel to it though, but I'll try harder next time.

I also learned the difficulty of bad panning skills.  ???

I hope you enjoy it.
« Last Edit: June 27, 2010, 07:24:23 AM by undone12 »

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Candy...lots of it! (Candy Update)
« Reply #21 on: June 27, 2010, 10:35:21 AM »
Greatness.

It really doesn't sound boss-ish, more like the endings of the games. But I like it still.
(Hmm, I actually had plans to make a Meimu script too, a long ago...)

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Candy...lots of it! (Candy Update)
« Reply #22 on: June 29, 2010, 09:09:13 AM »
I still can't make variations and counter-points in melodies.

Anyway, I'll try concentrating on shorter, but more 'meatier' compositions on later works. :D

EDIT:
:O

Girls are now rendering.
...What have I done?
« Last Edit: July 07, 2010, 07:31:27 AM by undone12 »

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« Reply #23 on: July 07, 2010, 08:23:08 AM »
Eye of Painful Death ~ Fourth Melody

Someone requested a theme out of me via pm.
Well, here ya go. It's kinda rushed, but I think it turned out fine. I think.

Hey, I finished this on time for Tanabata! :3


Comment:
Meatier, no. Weirder, yes.
« Last Edit: July 07, 2010, 08:27:03 AM by undone12 »

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love, again!...lots of it!
« Reply #24 on: July 27, 2010, 05:41:21 AM »
Witch of Love Potion

I was bored, had lot of things to do recently, so I wanted to do something that doesn't eat a lot of time. I just played around with an old midi in my USB drive.

It's Witch of Love Potion from トルテルマジック (Toruteru Majikku or Torte le Magic, rough translate--correct me if I'm wrong. XD). Stage 1 theme, the stage which features an army of flying broomsticks.

Anyway, I hope somebody likes it. ^^


EDIT:
I found an old midi and decided to play with it a little. It's a little simple, but easily my favorite track from the Touhou series.

Iris

It's Touhou 1's ending theme!   :yukkuri:
« Last Edit: July 27, 2010, 08:22:46 AM by Anunsew »

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love, again!...lots of it!
« Reply #25 on: July 27, 2010, 08:45:11 PM »
Hmmm well theyre alright, but i really loved the Iris arrange. One of my favorites as well.

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love, again!...lots of it!
« Reply #26 on: July 27, 2010, 11:23:12 PM »
I really love your version of Rin's Theme. I just can't stop listening to it on my MP3 Player again and again.

The only setback about it it's that it's too short. It has less phrases that a ZUN-made song. Just compare the number of phrases in Necrofantasia and how they're related to each other and then compare it with Rin's theme. I mean, the song is nice as hell, but it lacks the epic-ness tone of ZUN-made music. I also think that the main phrase of the song ( the chorus, somehow ) isn't used up to it's full potencial... It has a good melody and gives an certain feeling of action, and a full feeling of  "Cherry Flavored Justice", but it's too small lenghted, if compared to other epic main phrases of  ZUN's music, like Border of Life's and Reach the Moon's main phrases.

Thus, the interlude between the first and last part is just too long. As for me, I don't think it's nice for an interlude to take almost half of the song's lenght.


If you could just grant me a wish, I would be very happy. The wish is: an opera-ish rearrange of Rin's theme. A very peculiar charactristic on almost all ZUN's music is that they become unspeakebly epic when rearranged so they look like classical music or an opera.
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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love, again!...lots of it!
« Reply #27 on: July 28, 2010, 05:55:02 AM »
The only setback about it it's that it's too short. It has less phrases that a ZUN-made song. Just compare the number of phrases in Necrofantasia and how they're related to each other and then compare it with Rin's theme. I mean, the song is nice as hell, but it lacks the epic-ness tone of ZUN-made music. I also think that the main phrase of the song ( the chorus, somehow ) isn't used up to it's full potencial... It has a good melody and gives an certain feeling of action, and a full feeling of  "Cherry Flavored Justice", but it's too small lenghted, if compared to other epic main phrases of  ZUN's music, like Border of Life's and Reach the Moon's main phrases.

Thus, the interlude between the first and last part is just too long. As for me, I don't think it's nice for an interlude to take almost half of the song's lenght.

I'm not too good with melodies, especially since I'm still inexperienced (I'm not kidding when I say that I have no musical background whatsoever). I'm trying to learn faster though, and that's what occupying most of my time right now.

As for the interlude, I made it that way so I can add melodies when I learn better melodic patterns. It's just a string of broken chords, just like what ZUN's baseline often sounds like. XD


If you could just grant me a wish, I would be very happy. The wish is: an opera-ish rearrange of Rin's theme. A very peculiar charactristic on almost all ZUN's music is that they become unspeakebly epic when rearranged so they look like classical music or an opera.

Opera-ish...I'll get to that level someday.  :3

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs--er..., right.
« Reply #28 on: August 10, 2010, 11:10:56 AM »
穢れ亡き夢 ~ Ethereal Mind

BelisariaYagami requested a theme for a fanmade character named Belisaria Yagami (eh~?), so I came to deliver (after weeks of musical salt blocks).

If you're not familiar with her (like me~it's like OCs are sprouting everywhere)

This one sounds a little bit different, maybe I'm learning? I still have a long way to go.

Seriously though, I hope somebody enjoys it.

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Re: [Music] Making Melodies needs Love, again!...lots of it!
« Reply #29 on: August 10, 2010, 09:11:31 PM »
Well that kid ya wrote it for seems to like it quite a bit, so id call it a success! Hey amigo, im thinkin of coverin your Cherry Flavored Justice at some point. Do I have your permission?