Author Topic: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku  (Read 14073 times)

PhantomSong

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Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« on: January 20, 2013, 09:26:00 PM »
Welcome to my little Danmakufu Corner~

I am a novice, but I do hope to get better! I know most of the basics of Danmakufu 0.12m so that's what I'm going to specialize in.
I tend to be an organized person so you'll several categories soon...  :derp:

PC98 Scripts:
Kana Anaberal Boss Fight


EoSD Scripts:
Random Patchouli Boss
Cirno Day 9/9/2013




IN Scripts:
Marisa Kirisame Contest Entry

PoFV Scripts:
PoFV Boss Rush.

MoF Scripts:

SA Scripts:
World Largest Sake Dish - Yuugi

UFO Scripts:

TD Scripts:

Fighter Games Scripts:

Player Scripts:
Hatate Himekaidou Player



Miscellaneous :
Perfect Cherry Blossom Reskin


Previews:

Upcoming Projects:
Yukari Boss Fight
Parsee Boss Fight
« Last Edit: September 09, 2013, 12:21:09 AM by PhantomSong »

PhantomSong

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #1 on: January 22, 2013, 03:08:07 AM »
Re-edited Yuugi's script.

Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #2 on: January 23, 2013, 09:57:21 PM »
Oh god. At first i thought this script is broken because every time i would instantly die. Decided to try it again and complain, but seems that first set of lazers are spawned so that i coulnd't even see them. After some attempts i was able to beat the pattern.

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #3 on: January 23, 2013, 10:26:06 PM »
...I can't last for more than a few seconds.

I suggest the following: Delay the lasers and blue shiny bullets so that they do not appear until after the opening spell cutin has disappeared. Use a counter variable in the if statement controlling their spawning, and set it so that there is enough time to react to the first wave of instadeath bullets.

PhantomSong

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #4 on: January 23, 2013, 11:18:22 PM »
Alright I did some slight edits, should work fine~

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #5 on: January 24, 2013, 04:48:32 PM »
Just to let you know, your Bulletforge username is Phantom Seng. That's not a typo, right? XD

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #6 on: January 24, 2013, 05:10:39 PM »
The spell has problems, but it is fun.  Getting used to the changing angles of the blue bullets is the hard part.
It's still not a bad idea to give more warning for the red bullets.  Increase their delay, perhaps?
The lasers are kind of the same, there's not enough warning.  This might just be inevitable without sound effects, though.

It doesn't instant-kill you at all anymore, though, so it must be improved from before.  That's really necessary for a card to be playable.

And I'm sure you know this, but your background has transparency issues during the cut-in.
I can't think of anything clever to put here.

PhantomSong

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #7 on: January 24, 2013, 11:39:38 PM »
Just to let you know, your Bulletforge username is Phantom Seng. That's not a typo, right? XD

No, that's not me... It's Phantom Song on there.

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #8 on: January 24, 2013, 11:49:35 PM »
No, that's not me... It's Phantom Song on there.

Someone called Phantom Seng uploaded your Yuugi script though.

PhantomSong

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #9 on: January 24, 2013, 11:52:28 PM »
Someone called Phantom Seng uploaded your Yuugi script though.

I know... and.... it's beautiful.... T_T

(I made my comment on it)

PhantomSong

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #10 on: January 25, 2013, 09:40:00 PM »
V2 on Yuugi's script in~

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #11 on: January 26, 2013, 02:43:33 PM »
Preview for Hatate Himekaidou player script available~

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #12 on: January 26, 2013, 03:57:03 PM »
Hatate Player Script:

I don't think firing from the bottom of the screen is a good idea... It just has too many flaws, and depending on the script, it may or may not work. Also, the shots are confusing, and it's hard to find Hatate. On a separate note, the SFX for the bomb are off by a few frames.

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #13 on: January 26, 2013, 04:34:01 PM »
Hatate Player Script:

I don't think firing from the bottom of the screen is a good idea... It just has too many flaws, and depending on the script, it may or may not work. Also, the shots are confusing, and it's hard to find Hatate. On a separate note, the SFX for the bomb are off by a few frames.

I think you're namely putting out the Unfocus shot. Yeah, it's hard to see her... This is only a Preview~ But the Focus should be fine. 

sound:
Bandicam was lagging, OR you didn't see the third wave of the bomb.

And I don't get what you mean when:
Hatate Player Script:

 and depending on the script, it may or may not work.

Explain?^

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #14 on: January 26, 2013, 04:44:18 PM »
Quote
Quote from: Sparen on Today at 10:57:03 am
Hatate Player Script:

 and depending on the script, it may or may not work.

Explain?^

Basically, what I mean is that when you have a script where you need to dodge very carefully at the bottom of the screen, the shots coming from the bottom obscure your vision and your hitbox. Also, some gimmicks may make having shots from behind you a liability. Basically, I'm against the idea of having such dark shots coming from directly behind you. Firing backwards is fine; having your own shots coming from behind isn't.

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #15 on: January 28, 2013, 04:53:02 PM »
Version 2 of Hatate Player preview's up!

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #16 on: January 28, 2013, 10:59:53 PM »
Version 2 of Hatate Player preview's up!

Look good!

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #17 on: February 05, 2013, 12:44:51 AM »
Yuyuko Saigyouji challenge script is up...

The challenge is from: Sparen's Coding Challenges

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #18 on: February 10, 2013, 12:31:26 AM »
Uploaded a random PoFV Boss rush  script.

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #19 on: February 10, 2013, 08:47:59 PM »
Ah, I'm always happy to see PoFV characters (and bullets) in regular ol' danmaku.

Hmm, well, my first impression:  "Oh my god, the background is white, the bullets are white, the player is white, I can't see anything!"  It looks like in Aya's background you've zoomed in onto a cloud!  Try changing SetGraphicScale(50,50); to SetGraphicScale(2,2); it looks a lot better!  (Although the bullets still kind of blend into the clouds...)

Once Tewi's background comes in, I start to get a head-ache because it's going way too fast.  That might be okay if it speeds up gradually (actually that might be kind of cool,) but when it's all of a sudden it's just too much.  Also, I'm not at all sure if the background cutting part way is intentional or not.  (It also looks bad, though.)  Unfortunately, Tewi's card is also tragically easy.

The backgrounds get a lot better after the first two.  Actually, I commend you for having different backgrounds for everyone.  There are a few mistakes, but it was definitely the way to go.  But anyways, Yuuka's card is the first one I liked, too.  It reminds me of Mitori's first survival spell.  Hmm, actually, with cards that make you spin around like this, it makes the most sense for them to be survival spells.  Unless you're using homing bullets, they take forever to damage.  Then again, if you had Yuuka take a break from time to time, it would give the player a chance to just shoot at her.  It would be cool if the circle of bullets in the center broke up at that time, too.  Anyways, I really enjoyed the flower bullets from PoFV; It's nice to see Yuuka using them again.  (Although there seems to be some problem with the big flower's graphics?)

The rest of the spell are quite fun too.  Reimu's seems impossible at first, but once you learn how to approach it it becomes a fair challenge.  Komachi's spell is all about listening for the audio cues, and, well, I haven't gotten far in Shiki's spell, yet.  Overall it's a good script.

I can't think of anything clever to put here.

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #20 on: February 10, 2013, 08:56:20 PM »
There are... a lot of issues with the script.

Aya: Can't see anything
Tewi: Background is problematic
Yuuka: OK
Reimu: ...OK
Komachi: ...? Died on first try
Eiki: She died when I collided with her hitbox.

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #21 on: February 10, 2013, 10:59:17 PM »
Nice PoFV boss rush! I really like the remix you used too :D It was challenging and fun!

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #22 on: February 10, 2013, 11:15:00 PM »
There are... a lot of issues with the script.

Aya: Might be changing the background...
Tewi: Background is problematic
Yuuka: OK
Reimu: ...OK
Komachi: ...? Died on first try
Eiki: She died when I collided with her hitbox.

Aya: Changed
Tewi: Slowed it down
Komachi: Well just listen for the "woohf"
Eiki: It's a Last Word... (I still need to increase the Points earned XD)

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #23 on: February 10, 2013, 11:17:53 PM »


Once Tewi's background comes in, I start to get a head-ache because it's going way too fast.  That might be okay if it speeds up gradually (actually that might be kind of cool,) but when it's all of a sudden it's just too much.  Also, I'm not at all sure if the background cutting part way is intentional or not.  (It also looks bad, though.)  Unfortunately, Tewi's card is also tragically easy.



Tewi: The gaps were there on purpose. It's suppose to be paths, being the spell is called "Lost in the Bamboo Forest" I also slowed it down.


Version 2 up!
« Last Edit: February 10, 2013, 11:26:13 PM by PhantomSong »

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #24 on: February 13, 2013, 01:57:19 AM »
PoFV boss rush suggestions:
Aya: Darken the bullets? Because the player shots are white.
Yuuka: Maybe put the flower circle closer to Yuuka for more space to dodge?
Reimu: Maybe make the ying-yang orbs smaller if you can? I don't know.
Komachi: Darken the pink bullets. And make the gold ones curve less?
*And thank you for not spelling Yuuka like Yuka :D
« Last Edit: March 31, 2013, 02:42:19 AM by Qwertyzxcv »

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #25 on: February 13, 2013, 09:02:41 PM »
PoFV boss rush suggestions:
Aya: Darken the bullets? Because the player shots are white.
Yuuka: Maybe put the flower circle closer to Yuuka for more space to dodge?
Reimu: Maybe make the ying-yang orbs smaller if you can? I don't know.
Komachi: Darken the pink bullets. And make the gold ones curve less?
Yuuka is the only possibility... But that's just for it being difficult.

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #26 on: March 31, 2013, 12:37:45 AM »
Apologies for the lack of updates, school and stuff piled up rather fast, but Hatate Himekaidou Player is available for download!
Also a random Patchy Fight is up!
Also new projects are among us!  :derp:
« Last Edit: March 31, 2013, 12:44:31 AM by PhantomSong »

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #27 on: March 31, 2013, 02:37:50 PM »
The Hatate player is pretty cool~
Patchouli:
Solar Reflectors: The concept is nice, but I feel that the card would be more interesting if the yellow bullets weren't random, but actually had a pattern. Maybe making them slower would be a good thing too. Also, hugging the bottom gives you a lot of free graze.
The anti-safespotting attack (aimed bullets when the player goes above Patchouli) shows that you've caught a potential huge safespot (which is good), but I'd prefer having Patchouli fire yellow bullets up as well as down.
Neap and Spring Tides: Looks good and is fun to dodge, but maybe having the "safe area" (that the lasers don't reach) would make it better. I don't think it's easy to pull off correctly, though.

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #28 on: March 31, 2013, 03:32:49 PM »
Patchouli Script reactions/opinions:
First spellcard: You kill me for going above Patchouli? How evil
But seriously, the card feels hard at first but by camping the absolute bottom it becomes almost too easy as well as giving the player hypergrazescores.

Second spellcard: Do I get bonus points for capturing the spellcard by circling around Patchouli the whole time? :V
Can be ignored though because the spellcard is easier to do the normal way. Also, what is the point of the lazers? Eyecandy? Camping the spot below Patchouli would probably be the safest approach even without the lazers being there.

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #29 on: March 31, 2013, 06:03:50 PM »
Patchouli boss fight:
Intro- The life bar loads twice?
S1- Could be more creative. And those bullets aimed at the player at the top of the screen could be faster.
S2- ow my eyes. It was good though!
And the timer lasts too long.
It could use more spells and non-spells.
Other than that, it was great! :D