Too high dosage of colors! Must unsee...
Just kidding, my friend, that is quite great.
The coloring selection is great, kinda gives off that 70's vibe for all its glory in using 'warm' colors like orange/yellow and strong composition of background is also a plus. However, along with the posture of the figure, the piece gives some sense of confinement and unbalanced (little too heavy towards to the right). That would be the obvious reason why you used orange more heavily towards to the left.However, I still would assume you cropped some part of background or diverted from the original plan. If not, add more orange chunks of pixels to the left, it would
look more 'stable'.
I think your strength lies in using sharp angled straight lines, and that gives some character to your works. Now, I am seeing your attempt in blending more 'general, vanilla-flavored' style to your own. It certainly exudes different vibe than your previous works and that is my sole evidence of taking this pot-shot.Anyhow, it could be frustrating, but once you get it sorted out, it will blow some peoIple's mind off. I will certainly look forward to that.
Thank you for another addition to the thread, and keep those hands busy.
ps. Search 'ideolo' in Danbooru, I think the artist has similar strengths to that of yours.
ps2. I am a f-cking Neanderthal lost in the sea of modern technology, however, Photobucket gives me the code for links with thumbnail. Give some consideration about that.