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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #780 on: March 18, 2013, 06:17:21 PM »
Basically, a nose tip is located in lower half of nose, not in higher. :V

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #781 on: March 19, 2013, 01:46:45 AM »
So it's really weird. I was starting this one while I was [supposed to be] studying and it was going well. Except now that I look at it, it just looks like a trap wearing a bra. Any ideas?

I think it's a bit of a combination of her face that looks a bit boy-ish, and because she looks really flat, but the bikini top looks disproportionately big?
Requesting critique/advice from anybody.
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #782 on: March 19, 2013, 07:55:59 AM »
So it's really weird. I was starting this one while I was [supposed to be] studying and it was going well. Except now that I look at it, it just looks like a trap wearing a bra. Any ideas?

I think it's a bit of a combination of her face that looks a bit boy-ish, and because she looks really flat, but the bikini top looks disproportionately big?
Requesting critique/advice from anybody.
After 5 minutes of looking on the picture while covering several parts with my hand, I've got no ideas better than "reduce the size of her leftmost bunch of hair, making her head more rounded" and "right eye". (Left is of picture)

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #783 on: March 19, 2013, 08:19:27 AM »
So it's really weird. I was starting this one while I was [supposed to be] studying and it was going well. Except now that I look at it, it just looks like a trap wearing a bra. Any ideas?
good luck trying to make a short-haired flat-chested girl not look like a trap.

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #784 on: March 19, 2013, 08:42:41 AM »
Try making her hands and nose smaller and giving her a bit of cleavage
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #785 on: March 19, 2013, 09:49:50 AM »
I was under the impression that she needs to be curvier? I don't like how it's one sharp turn, or maybe I'm just stupid.

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #786 on: March 19, 2013, 09:53:58 AM »
Try making her hands and nose smaller and giving her a bit of cleavage


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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #787 on: March 19, 2013, 10:08:57 AM »
WHERE'S THE MOUND OF VENUS

It shouldn't be that obvious unless she is wearing a g-string or something.
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #788 on: March 19, 2013, 10:33:12 AM »
Basically, a nose tip is located in lower half of nose, not in higher. :V

(mousedrawn lol)

Hmmm after I'll try to draw another pic with a better nose :P

So it's really weird. I was starting this one while I was [supposed to be] studying and it was going well. Except now that I look at it, it just looks like a trap wearing a bra. Any ideas?

I think it's a bit of a combination of her face that looks a bit boy-ish, and because she looks really flat, but the bikini top looks disproportionately big?
Requesting critique/advice from anybody.

This pic reminds me Hayate from Hayate no Gotoku (trap) :V
Maybe you could try to make her hips bigger or make her hands and right shoulder more round/more little?


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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #789 on: March 19, 2013, 11:20:00 AM »
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #791 on: March 19, 2013, 12:30:37 PM »
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(Thanks for the advice guys, I'll try and fix her up some time later)
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #792 on: March 19, 2013, 02:36:27 PM »


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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #793 on: March 19, 2013, 05:20:12 PM »

Now, tell me why this thing reminds me USSR's state emblem?

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #794 on: March 23, 2013, 12:20:46 AM »

Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #795 on: March 23, 2013, 06:55:09 PM »
I still feel kinda weird to pose thing that I drew in here  :blush:
but o well XD
just finished the remilia I drew for weekly alice event




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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #796 on: March 24, 2013, 02:34:39 AM »

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #797 on: April 02, 2013, 04:30:18 AM »
@Freeze: Pro-level as usual, but you seem to have messed up some of the convergence. It's a rather glaring mistake considering all your other backgrounds look fine...

@Kinoko: Cropped version of what?

Anyway, here is a train station. I kind of messed up the scale of the buildings in the upper left.

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #798 on: April 02, 2013, 04:40:36 AM »
Anyway, here is a train station. I kind of messed up the scale of the buildings in the upper left.

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #799 on: April 02, 2013, 04:59:39 AM »
Anyway, here is a train station. I kind of messed up the scale of the buildings in the upper left.
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #800 on: April 02, 2013, 05:59:08 AM »
ahhh! thx for the pointing out the mistake  :blush:
I think it was due to me croping the draft and forgot to double check the background
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it's like legoooo :getdown: :getdown: :getdown:

anyway dis is my process for the military alice weekly

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #801 on: April 02, 2013, 11:17:20 AM »
Anyway, here is a train station. I kind of messed up the scale of the buildings in the upper left.
Oh cool, ruler master :O

One question, I think that the most objects that you drew have the vanishing points in the direction of the blue arrows which I drew on the train. If I want to draw something "rotated" like that green MSPaint house that I drew how should I proceed with the vanishing points? Can you do a redline of its vanishing points in this picture? Thank you :)

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #802 on: April 02, 2013, 12:46:33 PM »
@KrackoCloud: This took about 12 hours - and if you count the original version that I threw out because it had even more mistakes (the most glaring one being the train being way too small), it was about 20 hours of work between "I'm going to do a train station" and "I have a train station that's about 75% correct". Note: the project that I did this for did not succeed -  at some point you have to know when to finish and move on, even if there are many mistakes remaining.

@Kaze_Senshi: The most important thing to remember is that your rotated object is a box whose top plane is parallel to the top plane of the box containing the train. Therefore, the vanishing points of the rotated object have to be on the same horizontal line as the vanishing points of the box containing the train. See here. Note that the left hand point is way too far to use a ruler on if you're drawing a physical picture - that's when you have to be good at guessing.

You can also see why the upper left of the original picture has so many mistakes: I messed up the convergence. I admit it's rather embarrassing for someone who claims to be good at perspective to make such an obvious mistake...


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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #804 on: April 05, 2013, 01:39:23 PM »
I don't draw too often, but here's something new.
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #805 on: April 05, 2013, 04:27:49 PM »
I don't draw too often, but here's something new.

That is a terrific Nazrin!

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #806 on: April 06, 2013, 02:59:32 AM »
That is a terrific Nazrin!

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Thanks!

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #807 on: April 06, 2013, 03:32:13 PM »
I drew this on Colors 3D the other day. Used Hero Wan Wan as a reference.
http://i45.tinypic.com/2ptp7xx.jpg

Looked much better in 3D, in my opinion.

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #808 on: April 08, 2013, 03:53:36 PM »
I don't draw too often, but here's something new.

Dat use of value, I'm mad jelly

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V5
« Reply #809 on: April 09, 2013, 02:42:01 AM »
I drew this on Colors 3D the other day. Used Hero Wan Wan as a reference.
http://i45.tinypic.com/2ptp7xx.jpg

Looked much better in 3D, in my opinion.
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