I liked the action scenes, but all the stuff in between was so rushed they might as well not have included it at all. For example, Cherno Alpha and Crimson Typhoon
, and their crews don't get any development at all. The
doesn't reach any kind of satisfying conclusion. Neither does the thing with the Coastal Wall--I realize it's just there to set up the main character's
~circumstances~ at the start of the story, but it'd still be nice to have some acknowledgment that the world is bigger than this self-termed "resistance" (against what? They're still fighting the same battle--if getting your budget slashed turns you into a "resistance," then every single organ of federal and state government is currently a resistance.)
Anyway, here's
a thing.