Hatate Quest! [Complete]

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

If it doesn't work the first time, you try again.
Except with more force.

If violence isn't solving all of your problems, you simply aren't using enough of it.
As the size of an explosion approches infinity, the number of problems it can't solve approaches zero. :V

[Momijibot]

>Nitori stares at you while you lecture her.
>Once you're done, she picks herself up again slowly and begins to walk away.

>_

Satori's eye is still open!
Regardless of how much force we apply, nothing's going to happen while her eye is open.
So I'd suggest something along the lines of

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>Grab Nitori again, hug her, say [someone else say something apologetic and heartwarming here], maybe give her a kiss. See if she reacts, and how.
>If she's still a blank state, this would confirm that it's do do with Satori's eye, more than anything else.
>Take her hand, lead her to the (hopefully) still-out-of-it Satori.
>Poke Satori's eye gently till it shuts.


If violence isn't solving all of your problems, you simply aren't using enough of it.
As the size of an explosion approches infinity, the number of problems it can't solve approaches zero. :V

Would help if we applied the explosion where the problems actually were, amirite :V?

[Kasu]

Momiji's idea looks solid.

EDIT:  Well then, I guess I'll post a modified version if everyone's fine with it.

> Grab Nitori again and hug her. See if she reacts, and how.
> If nothing of note happens, try kissing her.
> If there is still no reaction, take her hand, lead her to the (hopefully) still-out-of-it Satori.

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

> Grab Nitori again and hug her. See if she reacts, and how.
> If nothing of note happens, try kissing her.
> If there is still no reaction, take her hand, lead her to the (hopefully) still-out-of-it Satori.

>You grab Nitori to hug her. She tries to push you away weakly.
>Once you manage to hug Nitori, she stops resisting.

>_

[Kips McKipzerson]

>"i-i'm not hugging you b-because i l-like you or a-anything!"
>Guess we should apologize about snapping at her huh...

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

>"i-i'm not hugging you b-because i l-like you or a-anything!"
>Guess we should apologize about snapping at her huh...

I'm not updating this quest because I like you guys or anything. I just happened to have some time I need to kill, and this quest does that nicely. Don't misunderstand!
>Should you?

>_

[Kips McKipzerson]

>By should I mean will. Like right now. Seriously Hatate, Get your head in the game man. Stop speaking in third person tWHYAREYOUTALKINGTOYOURSELF

Seriously I cant think up a good thing for Hatate to say, to be honest. So dormio should do it instead because the voter(s) said so~

[Bio]

>By should I mean will. Like right now. Seriously Hatate, Get your head in the game man. Stop speaking in third person tWHYAREYOUTALKINGTOYOURSELF

Seriously I cant think up a good thing for Hatate to say, to be honest. So dormio should do it instead because the voter(s) said so~

Hi usually works.

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

>By should I mean will. Like right now. Seriously Hatate, Get your head in the game man. Stop speaking in third person tWHYAREYOUTALKINGTOYOURSELF

>You feel the need to apologize, to Nitori. Like right now.

>_

[Kips McKipzerson]

Dormio I will eat your firstborn.
>"Sorry for snapping at you like that. But seriously, whats wrong? You just seem... blank, I guess. Whatever you did, as long as you can like fix it, it'd be okay."
>like oh my gawd she just like killed that poor little birdieeee like what a meanie she should like redeem herself or something like OMGASH MY BFF TEXTED ME <3333

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

>"Sorry for snapping at you like that. But seriously, whats wrong? You just seem... blank, I guess. Whatever you did, as long as you can like fix it, it'd be okay."
>like oh my gawd she just like killed that poor little birdieeee like what a meanie she should like redeem herself or something like OMGASH MY BFF TEXTED ME <3333

>You hear a small whisper.
>"...There's no point..."

>_

[Kips McKipzerson]

>"The second somethings got no point is the second you're dead. And unless you're somehow like one of those creepy zombie fairies, I think there's still a point. I'm willing to help you get back on your feet, You just gotta tell me whats wrong."
>ponder murdering the parser
>Do we have any knowledge or any idea what Nitori could be so glum about?
>What kind of things did she do?
>Make a mental note that when Satori gets up, and if she has anything to do with this, She'll wish she was dead.

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

>"The second somethings got no point is the second you're dead. And unless you're somehow like one of those creepy zombie fairies, I think there's still a point. I'm willing to help you get back on your feet, You just gotta tell me whats wrong."
>ponder murdering the parser
>Do we have any knowledge or any idea what Nitori could be so glum about?
>What kind of things did she do?
>Make a mental note that when Satori gets up, and if she has anything to do with this, She'll wish she was dead.

>"Everything..."
>Killing the parser would probably be a bad idea. After all, the parser could fix everything instantly, provided you sign this contract.
>Do you know what she's so glum about?
>You know that Nitori was responsible for the border breaking. Evidently, she has also killed the hell raven.
>You seen her carrying a few items around the laboratory through the camera feeds, though you don't know the specifics of she was doing.
>Hell will seem like a relative paradise to the satori compared to what you'll do if this was her fault.

>_

[PX]

>JAM IT IN

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

>JAM IT IN

>What are you trying to jam, and where?

>_

[Tamashii Kanjou]

>"Will that's pretty vague; you have to start explaining from somewhere. I can't help you otherwise."

>"Hell, let us start with Utsuho. What happened to her and why is she in there?"

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

>"Will that's pretty vague; you have to start explaining from somewhere. I can't help you otherwise."

>"Hell, let us start with Utsuho. What happened to her and why is she in there?"

>"... Help... Far beyond help..."
>"... Killed her..."
>Nitori appears melancholic as she begins to turn away from you again.

>_

[Tamashii Kanjou]

>Force her back into eyesight; don't let go!

>"Ok, I want an actual line out of you. Why is she in there? Tell me what is going on."

[Momijibot]

>Force her back into eyesight; don't let go!

>"Ok, I want an actual line out of you. Why is she in there? Tell me what is going on."

Add before the quote:
>"No one is beyond help. No one. If you can't believe in yourself, then believe in the me who believes in the you."

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

>Force her back into eyesight; don't let go!

>"No one is beyond help. No one. If you can't believe in yourself, then believe in the me who believes in the you."

>"Ok, I want an actual line out of you. Why is she in there? Tell me what is going on."

>You grab hold of Nitori, you are not going to let her go.
>Nitori looks back at you with a sad expression on her face.
>"Don't... Don't believe in me..."
>"...Dead... I killed her..."

>_

[Tamashii Kanjou]

>"Yes, I know that. But you're not telling me why she is IN THERE! Surely you wouldn't put her in there if you weren't going to do something to her."

>Shake her a bit; not too much, but at least make it hard.

>"What were you planning on doing? And what did Satori do or say to you in there?"

>If she only answers in a couple of words again, slap her; followed by...

>"I'm trying to HELP you here!"

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

>"Yes, I know that. But you're not telling me why she is IN THERE! Surely you wouldn't put her in there if you weren't going to do something to her."

>Shake her a bit; not too much, but at least make it hard.

>"What were you planning on doing? And what did Satori do or say to you in there?"

>If she only answers in a couple of words again, slap her; followed by...

>"I'm trying to HELP you here!"

>"Pointless... Completely meaningless..."
>You shake Nitori a bit, you just want some answers here.
>"...A futile effort..."
>"..."
>You slap Nitori again, frankly, you're getting tired of this.
>"Don't deserve..."

>_

[Kips McKipzerson]

>"Look, We've all done horrible things. For all I know everyone in this god damned world could be a murderer. Everyone has our dark secrets, Dont let them hold you back."
>Comforting hug.

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

>"Look, We've all done horrible things. For all I know everyone in this god damned world could be a murderer. Everyone has our dark secrets, Dont let them hold you back."
>Comforting hug.

>Nitori shakes her head.
>"Unforgivable..."
>You try hugging Nitori again, to get the same reaction that you did the first time.

>_

[Kips McKipzerson]

>"Could you at least speak more then one word sentences?"
I have this feeling I know what to do, But I honestly dont want to hog the whole quest to myself. The fact I've barely got anything done doesnt really help me think of anything that isnt shot down because its too dumb or something.

I'll just blame dormio and his russian conspiracies and call it a day.

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

>"Could you at least speak more then one word sentences?"

>You see Nitori begin to mouth something before she stops.
>Help me... Ple...
>"...No point..."

>_

[Kasu]

> Grit teeth.
> "What did Satori do to you.  You have to tell me."

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

> Grit teeth.
> "What did Satori do to you.  You have to tell me."

>This is seriously pissing you off.
>"..."

>_

[Kasu]

> "Please NItori.  This is the only way I can help you.  If you tell me, we can try and fix this.  Together."

[Dormio Ergo Sum]

> "Please NItori.  This is the only way I can help you.  If you tell me, we can try and fix this.  Together."

>"...Can't fix..."
>Save me...
>"Impossible..."

>_