Author Topic: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!  (Read 81468 times)

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #210 on: January 18, 2011, 06:30:55 PM »
>"So, you're here to collect energy too, huh?"

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #211 on: January 18, 2011, 06:32:27 PM »
> "I am a woman of many talents~"
>"Fine, don't tell me... Just... You don't know Paprika.  You don't know what she'll do to me if she finds out I screwed up!"
>She shudders involuntarily.

>"So, you're here to collect energy too, huh?"
>"I'm... Supposed to, yes, but..."
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #212 on: January 18, 2011, 06:35:26 PM »
>"More importantly, Paprika doesn't know what I'm gonna do to her if she doesn't knock this crap off."

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #213 on: January 18, 2011, 06:38:16 PM »
>"More importantly, Paprika doesn't know what I'm gonna do to her if she doesn't knock this crap off."
>"Hey, I don't like it either!  But anyone who gets in her way..."
>Lorelei turns even paler.
>"...I don't even want to think about that..."
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #214 on: January 18, 2011, 06:44:37 PM »
>"That's alright, I'll set her straight. Think of it like this. You know what happened to Mr Dlobok. And look at me? You wouldn't think I did anything other than go to the bathroom. Paprika has no idea what she's getting into. Now, as for you, I don't have any problems with you. I think you're a nice person. And I'd like to continue to think that."

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #215 on: January 18, 2011, 06:53:25 PM »
>"That's alright, I'll set her straight. Think of it like this. You know what happened to Mr Dlobok. And look at me? You wouldn't think I did anything other than go to the bathroom. Paprika has no idea what she's getting into. Now, as for you, I don't have any problems with you. I think you're a nice person. And I'd like to continue to think that."
>"Ah... Well, um... Th-thank you, but... Dlobok was nothing compared to her.  I mean, how can you even begin to compare a kobold to a w-"
>She stops suddenly, as if realising something important.
>"Wait, that was you who beat Dlobok?  But you look nothing like her!"
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #216 on: January 18, 2011, 06:55:40 PM »
>"I'm good at what I do. Like I said, Paprika hasn't got a clue what she's gotten into. Now, the ball's in your court, Lorelei. You don't like what she's doing, and I'm offering you a way out. It's up to you to take it."

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #217 on: January 18, 2011, 06:59:19 PM »
>"I'm good at what I do. Like I said, Paprika hasn't got a clue what she's gotten into. Now, the ball's in your court, Lorelei. You don't like what she's doing, and I'm offering you a way out. It's up to you to take it."
>"I... Well, I..."
>She looks at you as though pleading for her life.  Which she kinda sorta is, I guess.
"...Are you really sure you can do it?"
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #218 on: January 18, 2011, 07:00:46 PM »
>Hand on her shoulder.
>"Between the two of us? She won't know what hit her."

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #219 on: January 18, 2011, 07:04:10 PM »
>Hand on her shoulder.
>"Between the two of us? She won't know what hit her."
>She smiles ever so slightly.
>"Ah... Thank you.  I... I'm not exactly that powerful, or great at fighting, but I'll try to help anyway I can."
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #220 on: January 18, 2011, 07:29:54 PM »
>"The best way you can help right now? Tell me everything you know."

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #221 on: January 18, 2011, 07:31:05 PM »
>SOCIAL LINKS SOCIAL LINKS SOCIAL LINKS oh wait
>"Good, now cheer up you look really pale right now."
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #222 on: January 18, 2011, 07:52:11 PM »
>"The best way you can help right now? Tell me everything you know."
>"Well, uh... As you've probably already guessed, I'm... Not exactly human.  And neither is Paprika, nor her associates, and I'm guessing their master isn't either.  Uh... But they're planning to gather energy from the people of Sanctuary so they can revive this "master", whoever he is.  Apparently he was weakened a long time ago, and isn't quite up to full strength yet."
>She gulps nervously, before continuing.
>"But, uh... I'm guessing you want to know about P-paprika... She's... Not exactly the nicest boss one could ask for, ahah.  Mostly because anyone who fails her is..."
>She leans against the wall for support and mumbles something a few times under her breath before finally saying it out loud.
>"...Anyone who fails her is eaten alive."

>SOCIAL LINKS SOCIAL LINKS SOCIAL LINKS oh wait
>"Good, now cheer up you look really pale right now."
>You are now able to create Personas of the Empress Arcana!
>"Ah... I d-do?  Um... I g-guess I feel a little f-faint, ahah..."
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #223 on: January 18, 2011, 07:56:12 PM »
>"Yeah, she and I are going to have to have a talk. What does she do, as far as this whole plan goes? And where does she stay?"

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #224 on: January 18, 2011, 08:09:57 PM »
>"Yeah, she and I are going to have to have a talk. What does she do, as far as this whole plan goes? And where does she stay?"
>"She's... You could call her an advance force.  She's supposed to be scouting out the area and securing a good foothold so that the others can finish the job.  Um... The last time I saw her, she was hanging out at this bar in the bad part of town.  I think it was called... "The Monk's Hood"?  Or something?"
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #225 on: January 18, 2011, 08:16:08 PM »
>Check the time, how long til class?
>"What's she like? Other than cannibalistic?"

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #226 on: January 18, 2011, 08:29:28 PM »
>Check the time, how long til class?
>"What's she like? Other than cannibalistic?"
>You've got a couple of minutes left.
>"She's... Pretty aggressive.  She gets angry really easily.  And she's really strong even in humanoid form... Not only that, she can't be hurt by normal weapons, so she doesn't tend to hold back when she fights.  She's smart, too.  And if you really get on her bad side, she'll make it her duty to relentlessly hunt you down and devour you."
>She pauses for a moment.
>"...I'm sure I'm forgetting something, but it's probably not that important."
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #227 on: January 18, 2011, 08:34:18 PM »
>"And when not in human form?"

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #228 on: January 18, 2011, 08:40:02 PM »
>"And when not in human form?"
>"When she's not?  Then I'd forget what the three little pigs said and BE AFRAID."
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #229 on: January 18, 2011, 08:46:44 PM »
>"So she's a wolf, then?"

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #230 on: January 18, 2011, 08:53:27 PM »
>"So she's a wolf, then?"
>"Oh right, that's what I forgot.  I think.  But... But yes, she's a wolf.  I... Don't know if she's exactly like the legends say, but you should at least make sure you know what you're doing before you go after h-"
>The bell rings.  Looks like it's time to get back to class.
>"Oh, um... Maybe we should continue this after school or something..."
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #231 on: January 18, 2011, 08:54:52 PM »
> "So Paprika's not the big boss?"
> "You should tell her that eating people really isn't good for the waistline. It goes straight to the hips, ya know!"
> Is there any convenient meeting point after school nearby?

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #232 on: January 18, 2011, 08:59:10 PM »
>"Hey, let me get your cell number. Romana and I got a thing planned after school, but I can call you later."

Moerin

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #233 on: January 18, 2011, 09:05:06 PM »
> "So Paprika's not the big boss?"
> "You should tell her that eating people really isn't good for the waistline. It goes straight to the hips, ya know!"
> Is there any convenient meeting point after school nearby?
>"Nope... She's just one of four lieutenants for... Whoever this "master" is."
>"You... Don't want to know what happened to the last person who said that.  And they were just joking, too..."

>"Hey, let me get your cell number. Romana and I got a thing planned after school, but I can call you later."
>"Um... Right, here you go..."
>She writes down her number on a slip of paper for you.
>"I really hope this works out... Somehow."
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"For hearts long lost and full of fright, for those alone in blackest night, accept our ring and join our fight... Love Conquers All -  with violet light!"

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #234 on: January 18, 2011, 09:10:16 PM »
>Give her our number.
>Head back to class. If she walks along, "When are you due to meet her next?"

Moerin

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #235 on: January 18, 2011, 09:35:11 PM »
>Give her our number.
>Head back to class. If she walks along, "When are you due to meet her next?"
>You exchange numbers.
>Lorelei's next class is nearby your's, so she tags along with you for a short while.
>"Um... The day after next.  I just hope we can work out something before then..."
>With that, she waves you off as you head off to English.
>You never noticed it before now, but your seat is right next to Romana's.  Of course, you never even noticed her until this morning either.
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"For hearts long lost and full of fright, for those alone in blackest night, accept our ring and join our fight... Love Conquers All -  with violet light!"

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #236 on: January 18, 2011, 09:44:15 PM »
>"Business is all taken care of for now, Romana. Sorry to leave you hanging like that, but some things can't wait."

OkashiiKisei

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #237 on: January 18, 2011, 09:51:08 PM »
> "Say, Romana, what's the English teacher like?"

Moerin

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #238 on: January 18, 2011, 10:14:08 PM »
>"Business is all taken care of for now, Romana. Sorry to leave you hanging like that, but some things can't wait."
>"It's alr-right, I g-guess... Um..."
>She fiddles with her fingers awkwardly.

> "Say, Romana, what's the English teacher like?"
>"Um... W-well, he's, uh..."
>Unfortunately, before she can finish, the English teacher seemingly answers this himself by bursting through the door, rushing to the front of the class and posing dramatically.
>"HELLO CLASS how are we today alright today we will be looking over Tennyson's Charge of the Light Brigade (a personal favourite of mine) so let's begin!"
>He's... Very enthusiastic about his work, that's for sure.  He also has a vague English accent, but you're not entirely sure what kind it is.  He straightens his jacket before looking out into the class and pointing at...
>"MISS TRELUNDAR would you like to begin reading for us?"
>Romana squeaks loudly as her name is mentioned, and quivers.
>"Um... Y-y-yes, Mr. Hopkins... Uh... "H-h-half a l-league, half a l-l-league, half a league onw-w-ward"..."
>Romana eventually finishes her stanza, and someone else is called on to dictate.
>"Ah... Th-that was... H-he always p-picks me f-f-first..."
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"For hearts long lost and full of fright, for those alone in blackest night, accept our ring and join our fight... Love Conquers All -  with violet light!"

OkashiiKisei

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #239 on: January 18, 2011, 10:19:41 PM »
> "Has he always been as hyper as a Duracell bunny with ADHD?"