You've improved a heck of a lot since I last checked, Aoshi! All-around, even
The jealous-of-reimupits sanae pic was a really good lineart, the lines seem so cleanly done. Looked at more in older pages of the thread, its very nice~
Some feedback of that Ellen:
I love the look and style you're using, and the use of folds is good! ^_^ The only problem I see here is that the lower legs are a little bit too short, proportionally. Evening it up a with her upper legs can make it look better. Looking at the realistic-art reference material I have, the lower leg isn't supposed to look any longer than the upper, unless drawn from the side. Though they do look quite different from there
Her right hand's ring and pinky seem oddly merged. that little line that I suppose shows where they bend is noticeably disconnected from the base parts, making it look like a stray line. Connecting those (and not having it stray onto the dress) would fix it, if I'm right.
I hope I helped! ^_^ I don't have anything interesting to say like the others, so I could only come up with this. *goes elsewhere*
