~Beyond the Border~ > Daiyousei's Cold Storage
[Challenge]This is where I make my stand
Iryan:
There is no reason
To type in haikus all day
It feels forced to me
And what UK said
about the last haiku line
Spring Summer Winter
There, are you happy?
It won't make it poetic,
It just feels forced, too
UncertainJakutten:
Possibly to you
But I find restored honor
In flowered haiku
Also:
--- Quote from: Purvis ---For the next week, all of your posts are to be made in haiku. Extended haiku is permissible. Do not forget the seasonal reference!
--- End quote ---
Moerin:
--- Quote from: UncertainKitten on December 09, 2010, 10:39:37 PM ---What's so hard to get
About the fact that NATURE
Is NEEDED for art.
Refer to nature
In your scribbles, and renew
As springtime flowers.
Otherwise, you both
Are insults to the aged art
Decay as carcass.
Oh, Naut has a point
Splitting haiku as logger
Is quite destructive
--- End quote ---
It is the only
Way I am allowed to talk
All week, remember.
Art can go to hell
For all I care if it stops
Communication.
Please bare that in mind
And don't go on about art
When you are not forced
To have to talk in
Haiku all week even if
It is just a joke.
Iryan:
--- Quote from: Moerin on December 09, 2010, 10:49:12 PM ---It is the only
Way I am allowed to talk
All week, remember.
Art can go to hell
For all I care if it stops
Communication.
Please bare that in mind
And don't go on about art
When you are not forced
To have to talk in
Haiku all week even if
It is just a joke.
--- End quote ---
Alternatively
Just make all your posts include
"Autumn". Problem solved.
Moerin:
Hmmm, that might work out,
Actually. Autumn should not
Be hard to shoehorn.