Author Topic: My first script...  (Read 1862 times)

YummyLychee

My first script...
« on: September 23, 2010, 08:49:44 PM »
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So, this is my first script that I wrote in Danmakufu.

I copied used Helepolis's video tutorial (which told me to use tasks so now I have no idea how to use the mainloop) and the beginner/intermediate danmakufu tutorials.

I have absolutely no skill with music, so the bgm doesnt loop properly >.<
And I removed the #TouhouDanmakufu thing on all of the singles and the plural still worked (at least on my computer).
The CutIn is a little long too...

...I feel awkward... :ohdear:

Constructive criticism would be nice (please be gentle)

Also, is it just me, or is danmakufu's screenshot feature messed up?

Chronojet ⚙ Dragon

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Re: My first script...
« Reply #1 on: September 23, 2010, 08:57:12 PM »
To answer a few questions.
- Danmakufu hates music. It usually loops too early or too late. You have to experiment with Audacity if you wanna make a looping track. Currently there is no looping from the middle of a track to another part of it, but it will be included in the ph3 version of Danmakufu.
- #TouhouDanmakufu only makes the script appear on the menu so it will be selectable. The script still works without this line.
- Danmakufu's screenshot feature messes up when you have the default backgrounds or a black (#000000) background.

Now let's try the script!
Oh wow. Have you been drinking? This is so pretty and rainbowy~
Then again...

Review "Mewkyuu's ⑨ly Reviewing -Easy-"

Non-spells.
They all get the same comment. Yeah.
Just a reminder that using XX05 bullets (where XX = a colour) is never a very good idea. If they are grouped up and fill the screen, they will cause many clipdeaths and lots of slowdown.
Also, I tend to get walled by multiple XX05 bullets on the later non-spells.

Spell cards (overall)
HOLY FUCK I SAW MIMA IN THERE
Never. Ever, ever ever use additive bullets against a bright background.
Also, the spell declaration is quite long, and can get quite annoying.
When I almost beat a spell card, I usually tend to clipdeath and deathbomb, erasing the rest of the spell card along with part of the following non-spell.
Might wanna stick a SetInvincibility in the non-spells.



Anyways, it's quite nice for a first script(s), great job.
(`-`)-b
« Last Edit: September 23, 2010, 09:35:08 PM by Mewkyuu »

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Re: My first script...
« Reply #2 on: September 23, 2010, 09:00:29 PM »
1. You might want to fix your link ;)
2. I highly advise you do not host scripts on RapidShare. A resident danmakufu user (ohi Blargel) made a nice hosting website for everything danmakufu.

I have absolutely no skill with music, so the bgm doesnt loop properly >.<
Most people have trouble making music loop correctly in Danmakufu... Because Danmakufu is just plain bad at handling audio.

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And I removed the #TouhouDanmakufu thing on all of the singles and the plural still worked (at least on my computer).
#TouhouDanmakufu only means the script will appear in the menu, so you did fine

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Also, is it just me, or is danmakufu's screenshot feature messed up?
Yes, it is broken. Print-screen then paste into Paint to take screenshots.

Now for the script...

EDIT:
- HOLY ADDITIVE BULLETS ON BRIGHT BACKGROUND
- Multi-Colored Tri-Beam seems impossible even on easy... But that's coming from someone who can't 1cc SA easy so, take what you want.
- Ohgodcurvybullets
- Butterfly Spin is nice at first, but it's way too long, and the difficulty is always the same. Gets boring before the middle of the spell.
- And the final spell suffers from the "Tiny-graphic-huge-hitbox" syndrome (Danmakufu failure, not yours) and more additive-on-bright

Otherwise it's really good for a first script ^_^-b

Good job!
« Last Edit: September 23, 2010, 09:22:59 PM by Gamecubic »

Schezo

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Re: My first script...
« Reply #3 on: September 23, 2010, 10:34:30 PM »
Mainloop is just one big task that runs every frame and has a few "extras" built into it.

Zerro

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Re: My first script...
« Reply #4 on: September 24, 2010, 11:00:48 PM »
Oh hey this looks nice, what a cool first nonspell-OHHOLYJESUSWHATTHEFUCKISGOINGON

Tri-beam easy seems at least a little possible...got the health down to a sliver and got cornered  :(


Also animated sprites on your first scripts? Good job.
Life's a shmup, play on lunatic.

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Re: My first script...
« Reply #5 on: September 24, 2010, 11:36:02 PM »
Also animated sprites on your first scripts? Good job.

:P It's just a rotated yin-yang orb.

Chronojet ⚙ Dragon

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Re: My first script...
« Reply #6 on: October 08, 2010, 11:02:38 PM »
You really have to turn this into a script topic for yourself.

Anyways, I have a nice little review based on my playthrough as ReimuZ.



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