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[Music+Art] Making Melody Needs Love! Battle's Palette (OC Theme) (2/22/12)
flamezero16:
Hmmm well theyre alright, but i really loved the Iris arrange. One of my favorites as well.
Netwarrior:
I really love your version of Rin's Theme. I just can't stop listening to it on my MP3 Player again and again.
The only setback about it it's that it's too short. It has less phrases that a ZUN-made song. Just compare the number of phrases in Necrofantasia and how they're related to each other and then compare it with Rin's theme. I mean, the song is nice as hell, but it lacks the epic-ness tone of ZUN-made music. I also think that the main phrase of the song ( the chorus, somehow ) isn't used up to it's full potencial... It has a good melody and gives an certain feeling of action, and a full feeling of "Cherry Flavored Justice", but it's too small lenghted, if compared to other epic main phrases of ZUN's music, like Border of Life's and Reach the Moon's main phrases.
Thus, the interlude between the first and last part is just too long. As for me, I don't think it's nice for an interlude to take almost half of the song's lenght.
If you could just grant me a wish, I would be very happy. The wish is: an opera-ish rearrange of Rin's theme. A very peculiar charactristic on almost all ZUN's music is that they become unspeakebly epic when rearranged so they look like classical music or an opera.
Anunsew:
--- Quote from: Netwarrior on July 27, 2010, 11:23:12 PM ---The only setback about it it's that it's too short. It has less phrases that a ZUN-made song. Just compare the number of phrases in Necrofantasia and how they're related to each other and then compare it with Rin's theme. I mean, the song is nice as hell, but it lacks the epic-ness tone of ZUN-made music. I also think that the main phrase of the song ( the chorus, somehow ) isn't used up to it's full potencial... It has a good melody and gives an certain feeling of action, and a full feeling of "Cherry Flavored Justice", but it's too small lenghted, if compared to other epic main phrases of ZUN's music, like Border of Life's and Reach the Moon's main phrases.
Thus, the interlude between the first and last part is just too long. As for me, I don't think it's nice for an interlude to take almost half of the song's lenght.
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I'm not too good with melodies, especially since I'm still inexperienced (I'm not kidding when I say that I have no musical background whatsoever). I'm trying to learn faster though, and that's what occupying most of my time right now.
As for the interlude, I made it that way so I can add melodies when I learn better melodic patterns. It's just a string of broken chords, just like what ZUN's baseline often sounds like. XD
--- Quote from: Netwarrior on July 27, 2010, 11:23:12 PM ---If you could just grant me a wish, I would be very happy. The wish is: an opera-ish rearrange of Rin's theme. A very peculiar charactristic on almost all ZUN's music is that they become unspeakebly epic when rearranged so they look like classical music or an opera.
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Opera-ish...I'll get to that level someday. :3
Anunsew:
穢れ亡き夢 ～ Ethereal Mind
BelisariaYagami requested a theme for a fanmade character named Belisaria Yagami (eh~?), so I came to deliver (after weeks of musical salt blocks).
If you're not familiar with her (like me~it's like OCs are sprouting everywhere)
This one sounds a little bit different, maybe I'm learning? I still have a long way to go.
Seriously though, I hope somebody enjoys it.
flamezero16:
Well that kid ya wrote it for seems to like it quite a bit, so id call it a success! Hey amigo, im thinkin of coverin your Cherry Flavored Justice at some point. Do I have your permission?