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[Music+Art] Making Melody Needs Love! Battle's Palette (OC Theme) (2/22/12)
Bitz:
I say you've got great potential.
My main criticism about this specific piece of music is that it doesn't sound very... boss-ish. Unless it's not meant to sound boss-ish. There's also a few things I think could be improved, too, but I myself am not a very experienced composer either.
Edit: Oh yeah, and make better fade-outs :3. You could use Audacity or something instead of just putting dynamics marks every measure at the end, which is what I'm assuming you're doing with your music-making program.
Anunsew:
--- Quote from: Bitz on June 24, 2010, 03:53:45 AM ---I say you've got great potential.
My main criticism about this specific piece of music is that it doesn't sound very... boss-ish. Unless it's not meant to sound boss-ish. There's also a few things I think could be improved, too, but I myself am not a very experienced composer either.
Edit: Oh yeah, and make better fade-outs :3. You could use Audacity or something instead of just putting dynamics marks every measure at the end, which is what I'm assuming you're doing with your music-making program.
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I'm still self-studying so I'm still pretty rough when it comes to composing. Still, I'm going to try my best to get the style just right for Touhou. :3
Audacity...hmm, why didn't I think of that? :O
atoms2ashes:
...I envy you so much right now...
...It sounds SO MUCH like what ZUN would compose...
...
FFFFFF
Parsee instincts tingling...
But yeah, *gives love. LOTS OF IT*
RainfallYoshi:
This sounds so great. It's incredibly pleasant to the ears. Now we just need a game with Rin in it!
I have to agree that the fadeout is incredibly awkward though.
Solais:
Well, for my Script, I won't use this, it's too un-boss like, but one of her cards have changed so much that I had to rename it, and I chose the name Descending Red "Cherry Flavored Justice".