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| Hello Purvis:
--- Quote from: Blackraptor on July 11, 2010, 12:26:27 PM ---It's...over? Nuuuuuuuuuu! A 'The End' or 'Fin' would have been nice. Now...about a new story detailing the intricate tapestry that is Yuyuko and Mystia's mealtimes... --- End quote --- I don't believe in The Ends, myself. Generally, I find, there's always more story to tell. The trick is whether or not it'd be interesting or worthwhile to go into. As for the latter part: Request thread. |
| E-Nazrin:
Well... actually, I can understand wanting to leave it as a sort of "and so on" ending, but the one given here feels like a bit much of a cliffhanger to me - there's no detail about what Reimu's reaction to what Mystia's done is, and it cuts off right when that explanation would be made, rather than after Reimu's made her judgment and the story's at a relatively resolved 'between incidents' state. 'course, there's reasons to do that too, I guess, but a short epilogue wrapping that up and setting things up as implicitly continuing hijinx might work better. Maybe? I don't know. :ohdear: |
| Esifex:
I just wanted more bitch-Reimu, that's HIGHLY entertaining to read. |
| ray10k:
just one question: aren't the Prismriver Sisters going to want revenge for their broken violin? or isn't Yuugi going to want a rematch against Mystia/Yuyuko? edit: or, for that matter, isn't a certain two-tailed cat whose (official) role is to move around corpses going to cause trouble? |
| Hello Purvis:
--- Quote from: ray10k on July 12, 2010, 07:37:09 AM ---just one question: aren't the Prismriver Sisters going to want revenge for their broken violin? or isn't Yuugi going to want a rematch against Mystia/Yuyuko? edit: or, for that matter, isn't a certain two-tailed cat whose (official) role is to move around corpses going to cause trouble? --- End quote --- Plausible, maybe, and that's why she hired Utsuho. |
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