~Hakurei Shrine~ > Kosuzu's Grand Bookstore
Mystia Lorelei vs. The Hunger (NSFW?!)
Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin:
Yeah, this is just ... more awesome.
Hello Purvis:
--- Quote from: Tactician Esifex on July 02, 2010, 01:30:48 AM ---You know, Purvis, you should really write more often.
And on a larger scale.
You have a way with words, and you only barely need a proofreader (for example, I spotted one instance of typing 'oni' as 'on').
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This is the kindest thing that's been said to me in a long time. Although the last bit is a lie; I need a proofreader very badly because I am dyslexic as dammit and don't catch much of my own stuff.
Esifex:
--- Quote from: Purvisen Silver on July 02, 2010, 02:18:54 AM ---This is the kindest thing that's been said to me in a long time. Although the last bit is a lie; I need a proofreader very badly because I am dyslexic as dammit and don't catch much of my own stuff.
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I happen to be a writer by hobby and reader by sport.
How ya doin.
For the subtlety-challenged: I'm willing to proofread for you.
E-Nazrin:
Yeah, I DO see some off tenses and misplaced words, but the writing's so good I barely care.
Also, assertive Mystia makes me smile.
Kinzo the Astro Curious:
Action scenes are amazingly well thought out and im loving this little character development there~
Could pretty much imagine the whole thing all the way through. Its really well done. Just need to get gainax to make it now. (As I kinda picture yuugi as if they made her :L)
Also, Reimu can go die now. :V