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| Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin:
Yeah, this is just ... more awesome. |
| Hello Purvis:
--- Quote from: Tactician Esifex on July 02, 2010, 01:30:48 AM ---You know, Purvis, you should really write more often. And on a larger scale. You have a way with words, and you only barely need a proofreader (for example, I spotted one instance of typing 'oni' as 'on'). --- End quote --- This is the kindest thing that's been said to me in a long time. Although the last bit is a lie; I need a proofreader very badly because I am dyslexic as dammit and don't catch much of my own stuff. |
| Esifex:
--- Quote from: Purvisen Silver on July 02, 2010, 02:18:54 AM ---This is the kindest thing that's been said to me in a long time. Although the last bit is a lie; I need a proofreader very badly because I am dyslexic as dammit and don't catch much of my own stuff. --- End quote --- I happen to be a writer by hobby and reader by sport. How ya doin. For the subtlety-challenged: I'm willing to proofread for you. |
| E-Nazrin:
Yeah, I DO see some off tenses and misplaced words, but the writing's so good I barely care. Also, assertive Mystia makes me smile. |
| Kinzo the Astro Curious:
Action scenes are amazingly well thought out and im loving this little character development there~ Could pretty much imagine the whole thing all the way through. Its really well done. Just need to get gainax to make it now. (As I kinda picture yuugi as if they made her :L) Also, Reimu can go die now. :V |
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