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Guest of the Moon Princess: CYOA Story - FIXED!
FinnKaenbyou:
I hadn't even noticed I picked up the winning item until about my tenth try :V
Anyway, this is pretty cool. Nice work.
sera:
(Response to Tengukami's PM, since I'm not allowed to send personal messages yet. Sorry about the bother)
The 'possible to give a gift without receiving first' applies to the [redacted].
Tengukami:
--- Quote from: sera on April 03, 2010, 01:08:33 AM ---(Response to Tengukami's PM, since I'm not allowed to send personal messages yet. Sorry about the bother)
The 'possible to give a gift without receiving first' applies to the [redacted].
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This isn't a bug but a feature. I am relying on the reader to be honest about what items they've acquired, because I can't have "locked" sections of the story that can only be unlocked if you have passed a certain story arc.
In other words, if you are given the choice of the three different possible items that you could have, choose only those ones you actually have.
sera:
Hmm, that makes sense; I guess most readers wouldn't choose a gift they hadn't picked up yet, anyway. Again, sorry for bothering!
Tengukami:
It's not a bother. I'm trying to make the most fun CYOA that I can, so it's appreciated.
EDIT: Prefaced the story with a note about item collection, thanks.
EDIT: Thanks, Purvis. That's a good point. I will add pauses in the dialogue where the protagonist responds.
EDIT: 'Talking to self' type dialogue fixed.