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| Alice★f:
Hello, everyone. I've been drawing digitally since September 1st of 2007. Now two things you should know about me: 1. I work very slow. 2. I work very FUCKING slow. 3. It's not over 'till it's over. That said, I do not upload until finals are complete.Here's my latest: I did the drawing in November 2009. I started lineart in December 2009. I started coloring in January 2010. ...and I have not finished since. It's March 2010 and I'm stuck. So, I need your help. Problems: I do not understand how to shade Reimu's dress. Light source is described in second image. I need to fix Reimu's chest. I do not know how to begin fixing... And obviously, her right hand needs a fix, but I can do that myself. These are the points that are keeping me from finishing. Lineart: http://tsundereworks.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/reimu-vs-okuu-lineart.png Color (January): http://tsundereworks.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/reimu-vs-okuu-first.png Light Source: http://tsundereworks.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/light-source.jpg Color (March): (I feel like I messed up bad...) http://tsundereworks.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/reimu-vs-okuu-color.png Please click the links for high resolution. Feel free to contact me @ greenvirus.deviantart.com All help and feedback is appreciated. Thank you. Help Reimu become beautiful. Now if you'll excuse me, I shall try to 1cc PCB. =/ [/] |
| ♛ Apher-Forte:
hmmm well, Greenvirus I think I seen you on the boards before (poosh), and I liked your digital works. I am picky with body shapes so I should tell you that is not how the female ribcage works, it is too chunky for a girl and the breasts look pasted on. I think the rest are pretty okay as a whole, the head may be a bit wide. If you trying the anime look you should shrink the way she has a wide head, and give her a wide face instead. As it is, the concept is there, but the head has no volume if you understand. keep up the good work! |
| Alice★f:
--- Quote from: Maryberry-F on March 13, 2010, 03:00:46 AM ---hmmm well, Greenvirus I think I seen you on the boards before (poosh), and I liked your digital works. I am picky with body shapes so I should tell you that is not how the female ribcage works, it is too chunky for a girl and the breasts look pasted on. I think the rest are pretty okay as a whole, the head may be a bit wide. If you trying the anime look you should shrink the way she has a wide head, and give her a wide face instead. As it is, the concept is there, but the head has no volume if you understand. keep up the good work! --- End quote --- Thank you very much. I will keep you updated when I do something new to the drawing. I guess it's time to dig out the anatomy books then! ^_^ Spoiler: /i never knew how the female torso worked ;_; |
| Autumn:
--- Quote from: GreenVirus on March 19, 2010, 05:05:42 AM ---Thank you very much. I will keep you updated when I do something new to the drawing. I guess it's time to dig out the anatomy books then! ^_^ Spoiler: /i never knew how the female torso worked ;_; --- End quote --- But the lines and coloring are very nice.^^ |
| Alice★f:
--- Quote from: Autumn's Revenge on March 19, 2010, 06:19:07 AM ---But the lines and coloring are very nice.^^ --- End quote --- Thank you so much However, Okuu is determined to finish |
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