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[Music] Miracle∞Hinacle Fandub (with embarrassing singing inside!)
Sen:
--- Quote from: Neko-Yosei on March 11, 2010, 03:41:21 PM ---The best part is the *ahem*.
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* Sen cringes
--- Quote from: Neko-Gappy on March 10, 2010, 11:38:44 PM ---I really liked your lyrics so I tried singing it. Please excuse this poor attempt, I only had the opportunity to record it once (cause I was soon discovered by my fellow dorm dwellers and I don't think they'll let me record it a second time without suffering deathly embarassment XD).
So, for your listening displeasure~ http://www.mediafire.com/?izmwwywi4d0
Yes, feel free to laugh. It was uploaded for that exact purpose XD
Sen, you're not a terrible singer. Your version was at least ten times better than mine XD
I learned a few things today:
a) singing while trying to keep your voice down sounds horrible
b) My netbook's microphone is horrible
c) Not only did my audio recording and mixing silly-excuse-for-freeware record my voice funny, it managed to make my voice sound even weirder once I added the song in.
d) To never, ever sing ever again in my dorm, lest half the girls on my floor listens through the door
e) To never, ever record on my computer again, ever.
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Dammit Gappy, why is everything you do so cute ;-;
--- Quote from: Neko-Gappy on March 10, 2010, 11:38:44 PM ---So, with regards to your project, from singing it myself, I have the following suggestions:
This stanza doesn't flow very well, at least in my opinion. Too many syllables I think.
The last lines, 'A miracle from me' don't flow well from the previous lines for some reason. Rather, the 'a' is slightly jarring.
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I really wasn't sure what to do with the last few stanzas, but I'll keep that in mind. A lot of the last few lines do feel really rushed, but I wasn't sure how to cut down the syllable count without destroying the grammar :ohdear:
Amusingly, even though I haven't even told my mom that I'm singing in the show, she decided to get me singing lessons from one of her friends. Good timing, I guess!