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[Music] Miracle∞Hinacle Fandub (with embarrassing singing inside!)
Gappy:
Yep, anything audio or graphically visual goes in here~ Welcome ^^
I'll add this to the directory later.
Sen:
Ahaha, sorry, I wasn't sure whether to put it in PSL or AAH. I know that song parodies usually went in PSL, so I went with that.
Dead Princess Sakana:
--- Quote from: SenSageUn on March 10, 2010, 03:33:08 PM ---Ahaha, sorry, I wasn't sure whether to put it in PSL or AAH. I know that song parodies usually went in PSL, so I went with that.
--- End quote ---
It's not really a parody, and you called it 'fandub' in the thread title, so yeah. ^^
Plus the song parodies in PSL were just text and never actually sung by anyone.
Gappy:
I really liked your lyrics so I tried singing it. Please excuse this poor attempt, I only had the opportunity to record it once (cause I was soon discovered by my fellow dorm dwellers and I don't think they'll let me record it a second time without suffering deathly embarassment XD).
So, for your listening displeasure~ http://www.mediafire.com/?izmwwywi4d0
Yes, feel free to laugh. It was uploaded for that exact purpose XD
Sen, you're not a terrible singer. Your version was at least ten times better than mine XD
I learned a few things today:
a) singing while trying to keep your voice down sounds horrible
b) My netbook's microphone is horrible
c) Not only did my audio recording and mixing silly-excuse-for-freeware record my voice funny, it managed to make my voice sound even weirder once I added the song in.
d) To never, ever sing ever again in my dorm, lest half the girls on my floor listens through the door
e) To never, ever record on my computer again, ever.
So, with regards to your project, from singing it myself, I have the following suggestions:
--- Quote ---Sometimes you wonder why you're even trying
You can't tell what is false and what is true
Sometimes it's enough to make you start crying
But I won't let that happen to you
--- End quote ---
This stanza doesn't flow very well, at least in my opinion. Too many syllables I think.
The last lines, 'A miracle from me' don't flow well from the previous lines for some reason. Rather, the 'a' is slightly jarring.
I have no suggestions for improvements though.... ^^;;
Well, good luck with the assignment!
N-Forza:
So does that mean my little voice acting casting call thread should be moved into here too?