[Music] Miracle∞Hinacle Fandub (with embarrassing singing inside!)

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Sen:
Alright, so my school's biannual talent show is coming up in two weeks, and I have to sing something for it since everyone there is making me ;_;

So, after stressing out for a few weeks about what to do, I had an idea last night to do an English-version of Miracle∞Hinacle. It seemed like a good idea at the time!

So, I wrote out an English version that rhymes and stuff, and then recorded myself singing. Laugh at the attachment, it's hilariously awful. I tried keeping it true to the original lyrics but then I realized no one would know who Hina is, so it ended up turning into some fluffy song about rainbows and unicorns and shit :V

Link for those who haven't heard the original, and the original lyrics as well.

Oo-oo-aahh~

Sometimes you feel like you just can't get your way
Like things will never change or shift or move
Like all that happiness just ran away
But you know that that's simply untrue

If you leave it to me
I'll make you happy
I'll bring you...a miracle.
Happiness is

Just around the bend (and I'll bring you to it)
So I'll help you my friend (work together)
Lead the way
And we'll make a brighter day
Miracle in the end

There's a goal that you want to see (and that you deserve)
To be happy and free (just don't worry)
Take my hand
And we'll find your promised land
A miracle from me

Sometimes you wonder why you're even trying
You can't tell what is false and what is true
Sometimes it's enough to make you start crying
But I won't let that happen to you

If you let it be
You'll never be happy
I'll heal you...With a miracle
There'll be a

Brand new morning for you (looking forward to it)
Start the whole day anew (you deserve it)
I think it's time
For the sun to brightly shine
A miracle for you

All the sadness you see (doesn't have to be there)
Brushed away now by me (now it's all gone)
It's alright
Fly away into the light
A miracle from me

If you leave it to me
I'll make you happy
I'll bring you...a miracle.
But remember

I can't take all of your pain
Some will always remain
Even so
There is something you should know
You and I are the same

So go and fly through the sky (there's no limit for you)
Laugh, there's no need to cry (just be happy)
You can soar
You don't need me anymore
A miracle for you and I

Oo-oo-aahh~

Oh my goddddd ;_;

So, um, any help on making lyrics flow better, suggesting better lines, anything is welcome. Rewrite the whole thing if you want, just tell me what I'm doing wrong and how I can improve! The more detailed the better! Also, any suggestions for what to do during the big calm part near the end; I was thinking of singing "miracle" in different languages (miracle, milagro, kiseki, wunder, etc), but that doesn't really work well :(

(I apologize in advance for any bleeding ears ;-; )

Suikama:

Wee~

Also translated lyrics are here

Although your version isn't bad at all

Drake:
If you seriously do something this embarrassing in public you get 500+ balls points from me.

Yamachanadu:
I hear castration does wonders for singing voice actually :V

Sen:

--- Quote from: Drake on March 10, 2010, 03:09:53 AM ---If you seriously do something this embarrassing in public you get 500+ balls points from me.

--- End quote ---

I actually really do like the original Miracle Hinacle, but I can't exactly sing it in Japanese :V

--- Quote from: Suikama ---Also translated lyrics are here
--- End quote ---

I tried keeping the lyrics true to the original, but no one would really know who Hina is. So it ended up turning into some EVERYTHING WILL BE BUTTERFLIES AND RAINBOWS AND robot UNICORNS AND OH MY GOD I'M JUST SO HAPPY etc

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