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| The Untitled Chronicles of a Makai Family's Tribulations |
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| Gappy:
Thanks for the comments ^^ I've only just remembered a few things when I woke up this morning: A) I didn't give all the characters proper descriptions and introductions B) The part at the gates of Hokkai could use more descriptive narration. C) all in all, needs more work to actually work. |
| Solais:
Finally, I read this too... I should read these stories the day I discover them, rather than being always open in my browser, and being forgotten 'till weekends. Tis good. But it's the second story I read where Mima was in Makai. That's strange. |
| Bias Bus:
It does seem rough round the edges, but it's still fairly good to read (and I'm not saying this because I'm not only a Shinkifag, but a die-hard Makai loyalist :V), always wondered what those Makai folks were doing while Hokkai was being turned upside down... --- Quote from: Solaiston Beam on February 21, 2010, 02:06:50 PM ---Tis good. But it's the second story I read where Mima was in Makai. That's strange. --- End quote --- Mima in Makai is a common scenerio actually. Seeing as to how Mima's appearance effectively stopped after MS, I suppose fans assume that Mima's 'stranded' in Makai since the gate to Makai was sealed up shut after those events. |
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