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| Tengukami:
I agree with Muffin about the mechanics of things being worked out here. Nice to see some thought go into that without it bogging down the story. Moves at a really nice pace, too. |
| Dorian White:
I remember seen your story on the Touhou image board. Good to see that it got the place and space it deserves. |
| IcedFairy:
--- Quote from: Sakoakuma Rurouni on February 06, 2010, 05:32:26 AM ---But yeah, this is hilarious work, well done. Now I feel bad that I wasn't able to catch up on updates back on Poosh, though I did stop posting there because I felt shy about showing up without White Rose content. --- End quote --- I'd glare at you sternly for this, if it weren't for the fact that I never post anywhere on Poolsh except for the fiction thread, and there only once in a long while. Heck I was considering not posting in this thread until I had an ending ready, until I realized that the ending was going to be out of place no matter what I do.... Maybe I could edit it into the last post after a little while so that people randomly wandering into the thread will have it all in one nice big lump. Meh. I'll see how it looks when I drop Chapter 6 of Three Days Bright on the board. --- Quote ---Regardless, you're here now, so I guess it all worked out \o\ --- End quote --- I've been tricked! Eh, whatever. --- Quote ---It's clear you've put some thought into how certain things actually work, i.e. little devils, Alice, etc ... also, I'm not sure why bloodthirsty-Yumeko is a surprise to me (possibly because I'm too used to Sakuya being perfect-and-elegant when she isn't being bloodthirsty). --- End quote --- Actually I worried a little with this one because I was making so much up from whole cloth, but with Makai you really have to because there's nothing to extrapolate from. I'm glad people found them entertaining --- Quote ---Also, you're doing the "Alice x Marisa, or would if Marisa was less immature" storyline. That's not usually my thing, but in this case the execution actually made me laugh. --- End quote --- You may be pleased (or displeased) to know I have no intention of settling the Koa, Patchy, Marisa, Alice love polyhedron mess in any of my main stories. This is for a wide variety of reasons not the least of which being that would mean I'd have to choose. Anyway I'm almost done with this story, but I feel I'm rushing it a bit too much, so I'm going to let it simmer a little more before I post the rest. |
| Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin:
Heh, well, I chose right away, but okay. :P And if you're worried about rushing, I heartily recommend you slow down a bit, yes ... |
| ♛ Apher-Forte:
I hadn't had time to comment, but reading the this whole thing thus far made me love Alice ever more, along with Koa. |
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