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Touhu Fairytales: The Legend of Daidarabocchi
OkashiiKisei:
--- Quote from: Sakana on January 14, 2010, 05:51:10 PM ---I would have fleshed out the battle and all a lot more if I hadn't wanted to stick with the form of a fairytale.
It's just like 'Prince slays Witch', not further explanations on the battle. You'll have to imagine that yourself :V
(Oh wait, you did, and a pretty brutal one at that.)
On Darabocchi's appearance, I didn't intend for it to have any more meanings. I simply needed something to make her stand out, and for a generic fairy wings, hair and eyes are best to do that.
Though one of my thoughts that had no place in the story was that Darabocchi is indeed more adept to magic than other fairies.
This might be a reason why she could fight youkai by herself, but it might just be her courageous heart as well ;)
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It would be more symbolic and cute when it's because of her courage ;)
And yes, I know you went for that style of storytelling, and I full encourage that. It would only ruin the story if you added the things I just said. Those things were just me telling my thoughts :V And yeah, I probably did cross the line with that Dynamic Finish....
Dead Princess Sakana:
--- Quote from: OkashiiNaito on January 14, 2010, 06:31:59 PM ---And I yeah, I probably did cross the line with that Dynamic Finish....
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Freedom of thought. I won't hinder your imagination :V