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Song parody - Fairy's Paradise
« on: December 26, 2009, 08:18:28 pm »
This took about a day and a half to fully write out once the chorus got stuck in my head. Constructive criticism would be appreciated.

Fairy's Paradise
by Cirno featuring L.W.

As I fly on the surface of the Misty Lake
Everybody points and laughs and calls me a flake
'cause I've been flying and shooting so long that
Even Daiyousei thinks that my mind is gone
But I ain't never froze a frog that didn't deserve it
Be treated like a baka you know that's unheard of
You better watch how you're talking, and where you're walking
Or you and your buddies might wind up an ice block
I really hate to sing, but I gotta tell
As I grow I see myself in the bullet hell, fool
I'm the kind of fairy all the little youkai wanna know
on my knees in the night, saying prayers to Kanako

We've been spending most our lives, livin' in a fairy's paradise
We all soar through the skies, livin' in a fairy's paradise
Been freezing frogs in ice, livin' in a fairy's paradise
Donating bags of rice, livin' in a fairy's paradise

This kind of incident, they got me in
I can't live a normal life, because I'm not a human
So I gotta be down with the 9 team
Too much Bunbunmaru reading got me chasing dreams
I'm the strongest and the smartest of all fairykind
Got a spell in my hand and a gleam in my eye
As stage 2 bosses go they say I'm pretty bad
But I'm in UNL so don't go make me mad, fool
Dead parrot's nothing but a bullet away
I'm living life, graze or bomb, what can I say
I've cleared stage 3, but will I make it through stage 4
The way things are going I don't know

Tell me why are we so blind to see
Think we need to eat some more lamprey

We've been spending most our lives, livin' in a fairy's paradise
We all soar through the skies, livin' in a fairy's paradise
Tewi always tells lies, livin' in a fairy's paradise
Reimu's not very nice, livin' in a fairy's paradise

Power and the point cards, point cards and the power
Minute after minute, hour after hour
Everybody's flying, I have no idea where
If I use my powers, they may never make it there
They say I'm not that strong, but nobody here can beat me
If they can't beat Rumia, how can they meet me
I guess they can't, I guess they won't
I guess they're weak, that's why I'm strongest in Gensokyo, fool

We've been spending most our lives, livin' in a fairy's paradise
We all soar through the skies, livin' in a fairy's paradise
There are only four guys, livin' in a fairy's paradise
How is it that no one dies, livin' in a fairy's paradise

Tell me why are we so blind to see
That I'm so good in PoFV
Tell me why are we so blind to see
That the strongest is me

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Re: Song parody - Fairy's Paradise
« Reply #1 on: December 26, 2009, 09:11:50 pm »
I don't think this is the type of work that needs constructive criticism because 1.It's a short work that doesn't really lend itself to refinement and 2.It's pretty awesome as is.
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Re: Song parody - Fairy's Paradise
« Reply #2 on: December 26, 2009, 09:23:21 pm »
I gotta ask: If that's a parody, then what's the original song?
I wanna try to imagine how those lyrics would sound when sung.

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Re: Song parody - Fairy's Paradise
« Reply #3 on: December 26, 2009, 09:48:47 pm »
Here ya go.

It's awesome. Do more please.

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Re: Song parody - Fairy's Paradise
« Reply #4 on: December 26, 2009, 11:00:34 pm »
Thanks Pesco.

Now I can say: Awesome work Angry Colossal!
That lyrics are very nice, and the whole thing is totally singable.
I'll have to try singing this.

I agree with Pesco, do more.

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Re: Song parody - Fairy's Paradise
« Reply #5 on: January 02, 2010, 08:26:27 am »
now someone just needs to sing this, or have Hatsune Miku do it.
 

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