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| My Danmakufu scripts by JDude :P |
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| Zinochan:
I'll give you some opinion about your Marisa script. Nonspell 1: Pretty good, I like it. Easy. Spell 1: Boring, it should more big stars, and the big stars should be enemies that you can hit. Nonspell 2: Have a pretty obvious safespot. Isn't a good nonspell. Spell 2: Pretty good, but with a safespot. I like it. Nonspell 3: Not so creative (Sparen tutorials). You can use this pattern, but just spice it a little bit, like make that the stars are from below and their bullets have some gravity. I didn't like that Spell 3: Just a bunch of random bullets, but pretty fun to dodge. Nonspell 4: --- Code: ---while(Is_Nonspell4_Active){ MoveLeft; wait(60); MoveRight; wait(60); } --- End code --- Medium-good. Spell 4: First phase is pretty easy, just go at the side of Marisa, wait until bullets start appearing, go down. Second phase is pretty fun. Spell 5: I like that you can change the dificulty. Pacifist: Easy modo Normal: ISC^5 Remembers me Yukari's last spell. Pretty good. Advice: MORE COLOR PLEASE Put the sparks please. |
| Arcvasti:
Yeah, I'll second the more colour suggestion. Marisa traditionally has stars in every colour of the rainbow, not just yellow. |
| Lunarethic:
So I played your Marisa the General problem I see with your marisa script is that, If marisa isnt moving most of these patterns are static if you want me to be brutal about it, i think Marisa's patterns are uninspired and devoid of fun i was fastforwarding through all of it and that's when you start to see how static every pattern is. the bullets you picks are just yellow and green SMALL stars, you need to realize that Marisa has rainbow stars too, and lasers which this script has none of those. (the laser indicator in spell1 doesn't count) and there isn't any downtime. Marisa spews out bullets per frame nonstop. the on the one spell that has any sense of downtime which was "Cold Inferno" nothing else was happening either, it's still just Marisa firing nonstop she just waits for 2 seconds. Graphically i'd forgive you not doing 3D background yet that's perfectly fine, But then your background is just scrolling kinda fast, it's pretty disorientating and you seem to brushed some scribbles on it with photoshop or lord forbid, MS paint and called it a day. Spell background on the other hand is uninspired. the overlay is just..wierd and disorientating, the regular BG is just behind it. you would've been better off using her official Spell BGs. Nonspell 1 : the one time marisa moves, is she has to absolutely be directly above you, while unleashing hell on earth in the most abnoxious way possible Spell 1: meteors are always in the same place , further more Marisa is directly in line with one of those meteor paths. no. Nonspell 2 : safespot. nothing else happens ever Spell 2 : ...............................next nonspell 3 : dna helix , cool pattern but nothing else and that's not an invitation for you to use dna helix in your next script either spell 3 : i mean its nothing special. i wish you would've just gave it a more interesting pattern that, making her shoot at a 45 degree angle aimed at the player nonspell 4 : the way you spawn the stars looks bad, the pattern it makes isnt any better spell 4 : static, not much of a sprinkle now is it spell 5 : Yukari does this not marisa. Nice try tho |
| JDude :3:
NEW SCRIPT!! And it's Remake time! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Have you ever played Fidget Spinner vs Kirishima Twins? So, basically I did the same thing :blush: BUT, I made my "own" ideas Almost original patterns It's a rip~ception :V --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- If you missed the link, here it is again...dummy YATB ~ You Are The Boss! by JDude I want that everyone be 100% honest about my script, and don't hold back anything :blush: |
| JDude :3:
NEW SCRIPT!! Cirno's burning with anticipation! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I feel like most of the atacks, are original BUT, it's possible that some "creative" attacks might be from another game/script... In that case, please say what game/script the spell is copied... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- If you missed the link, here it is again...dummy Cirno Boss Fight by JDude I want that everyone be 100% honest about my script, and don't hold back anything :blush: You can say it was shitty, it was good, it was new, and etc |
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