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| [Music] GenericArrangements' Music: Track 3: Lonely Night ~ Illusionary Night |
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| Z_A:
At first I thought it was 8bit, but... well... please tell if I am wrong, but is that a square lead? I really like the chorus, all the instruments sounding together... It's fantastic, actually. The drums seem a bit too synthetic, but that's probably fine, as long as you're okay with it. As for the first part, which you composed on your own. Why don't you try and make a more exciting rhythm in the lead line? |
| GenericArrangements:
--- Quote from: Z_A on November 14, 2017, 02:27:28 AM ---At first I thought it was 8bit, but... well... please tell if I am wrong, but is that a square lead? --- End quote --- Yep. Square lead. In fact, square waves are the only kind of synth wave used in the arrangement. (I told myself to use more but everything flowed this way) --- Quote from: Z_A on November 14, 2017, 02:27:28 AM ---I really like the chorus, all the instruments sounding together... It's fantastic, actually. The drums seem a bit too synthetic, but that's probably fine, as long as you're okay with it. --- End quote --- Thanks! Also it's an electronic drum kit, and that's intentional. --- Quote from: Z_A on November 14, 2017, 02:27:28 AM ---As for the first part, which you composed on your own. Why don't you try and make a more exciting rhythm in the lead line? --- End quote --- Intentional. I needed the rhythms to be simplistic for... reasons. It's time I came back. I did say I'd be here monthly (which means i totally rushed this piece lol). Touhou Medley #1: LINK So I tried my hand at this, because I felt like making something actual cool, even though I gave myself the same amount of time as the last one (good going, me). I've never finished a medley, nor have I finished something this long. Nevertheless, here it is. Definitely amateur at some points, but as to be expected from me. I'm no professional lol. Also in exchange for the lack of the whole "loosely arranged" bit, I made the source of the melodies themselves obscure. This means instead of coming from an official Touhou game, they come from a fan game. I just randomly played this game again and remembered how good the music is. also this medley really made me realise just how awful the zunpet soundfont from thfont is rip |
| mads:
the new arrange is so upbeat and fun. what fan-game inspired you? I've never actually played any fan games (maybe one or two but never finished.) I don't know much about music but I like what you're doing, and concidering you said you have only been making these for abou 2 years I think you are heading in a really good direction (at least from a visual artist's point of view..?) There's improvement and it's nice to see. Also I think another reason not many people commented on this post is the policy that spammy comments are to be avoided. So just many might not know what to say other then "nice job!" and just won't comment at all. A lot of posts on the entirety of the forum are like that, not that it's a bad thing but something to keep in mind. I'm excited to see maybe a future rendition of UFO's title screen a shadow in the blue sky one day. :~) |
| GenericArrangements:
--- Quote from: transient mokou on December 05, 2017, 05:54:16 PM ---the new arrange is so upbeat and fun. what fan-game inspired you? I've never actually played any fan games (maybe one or two but never finished.) --- End quote --- I may as well say what it is (because the chances of someone actually knowing it is slim). Spoiler: Shoot Shoot Nitori, by Twilight Frontier Originally I was planning on not playing fan games, but the concept behind this one struck me as really fun and it definitely was. --- Quote from: transient mokou on December 05, 2017, 05:54:16 PM ---I don't know much about music but I like what you're doing, and concidering you said you have only been making these for abou 2 years I think you are heading in a really good direction (at least from a visual artist's point of view..?) There's improvement and it's nice to see. --- End quote --- Thanks! For my first year I only ever made sheet music but more recently I've been doing a bunch of mixing projects, and that's where I'm probably going to keep heading. --- Quote from: transient mokou on December 05, 2017, 05:54:16 PM ---Also I think another reason not many people commented on this post is the policy that spammy comments are to be avoided. So just many might not know what to say other then "nice job!" and just won't comment at all. A lot of posts on the entirety of the forum are like that, not that it's a bad thing but something to keep in mind. --- End quote --- I mean, I don't really mind, but I actually didn't even know or think about that. Interesting. --- Quote from: transient mokou on December 05, 2017, 05:54:16 PM ---I'm excited to see maybe a future rendition of UFO's title screen a shadow in the blue sky one day. :~) --- End quote --- That is a very nice song, and one of the best title screen themes in the series. I'll definitely consider it. |
| Z_A:
I thought that it did sound very much like Akiyama Uni! So, I guess I was right, then? Anyway, it's pretty good. What transient mokou said is correct, I'd like to give a more elaborate reply, but that would be quite a challenge. Your stuff is gradually getting better, that's all that can be said. still hope to see transcriptions from MS and PoFW |
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