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legwan-w-spioszkach:

Sorry, deleted.

Check my dA for the remaining trash: https://legwan-w-spioszkach.deviantart.com/

legwan-w-spioszkach:

Same as above.

legwan-w-spioszkach:

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 the following is here to make sure what exactly was criticized below by an actually competent artist]
 
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I would like to have some help due to the eyes looking awkward and un-ZUN-like despite corrections. The rest of the art is fine for me, just not the eyes.

Pirate:

No my unenlightened friend, the rest of the art is not fine. You can maybe shift the left eye a little closer, make the eyes rounder, but it is duct tape fix. Study more if you want good, just draw if you want fun, do not expect good result.

legwan-w-spioszkach:

--- Quote from: Gengu Madamada on January 03, 2017, 08:51:40 PM ---No my unenlightened friend, the rest of the art is not fine.

--- End quote ---
Well, this is ZUN art.

EDIT: I've seen errors.
 - The arms are off and should've been closer to each other.
 - The legs are badly positioned.
I'll redraw it later.

Yes, I'm still learning, no need to point me the errors.

Besides, I'll probably drop the ZUN-style altogether due to my tendency to draw eyes smaller than it is required here.
Gee, another edit and I had to strikethrough a sentence.  It's rather obvious I tend to change my opinions and resolutions a lot, and that is the reason I haven't yet decided on a lot of stuff (like what fursona I'll have - probably none, but who knows).

Besides THAT, I've redrawn that Reimu. Not much change except I drew her slightly more muscular. Buthcered one foot and will probably cut the feet for the publication on dA.

Okay, I hope that's the last edit I'll do to that post.

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