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| legwan-w-spioszkach:
Sorry, deleted. Check my dA for the remaining trash: https://legwan-w-spioszkach.deviantart.com/ |
| legwan-w-spioszkach:
Same as above. |
| legwan-w-spioszkach:
[the rest of the post was cropped the following is here to make sure what exactly was criticized below by an actually competent artist] [attach=1] I would like to have some help due to the eyes looking awkward and un-ZUN-like despite corrections. The rest of the art is fine for me, just not the eyes. |
| Pirate:
No my unenlightened friend, the rest of the art is not fine. You can maybe shift the left eye a little closer, make the eyes rounder, but it is duct tape fix. Study more if you want good, just draw if you want fun, do not expect good result. |
| legwan-w-spioszkach:
--- Quote from: Gengu Madamada on January 03, 2017, 08:51:40 PM ---No my unenlightened friend, the rest of the art is not fine. --- End quote --- Well, this is ZUN art. EDIT: I've seen errors. - The arms are off and should've been closer to each other. - The legs are badly positioned. I'll redraw it later. Yes, I'm still learning, no need to point me the errors. Besides, I'll probably drop the ZUN-style altogether due to my tendency to draw eyes smaller than it is required here. Gee, another edit and I had to strikethrough a sentence. It's rather obvious I tend to change my opinions and resolutions a lot, and that is the reason I haven't yet decided on a lot of stuff (like what fursona I'll have - probably none, but who knows). Besides THAT, I've redrawn that Reimu. Not much change except I drew her slightly more muscular. Buthcered one foot and will probably cut the feet for the publication on dA. Okay, I hope that's the last edit I'll do to that post. |
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