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The Outsider Who Loved Gensokyo - A RPG/Visual Novel Project
Jeremie:
Oh, please go ahead if you wish. It's indeed the latest version right now. :3
Sahgren:
Just as a note in case you're insistent on keeping characterization canon, I'm fairly certain that Keine is actually pro-segregation between humans and youkai and straight up refuses to teach youkai. Her dragging in youkai "children" such as Daiyousei is a fanon thing. That said, like pretty much the rest of the alternate fanon-characterization, I doubt anyone is going to care if you leave it in.
Jeremie:
Yeah, it's fair to assume she's pro-segregation. I'm also aware that it's fanon but after reading some Touhou official materials, characters seems to be a little more open about a few things and some of Akyu's information gets proven wrong at times. I've been slowing down on the project because of this since Eientei is the next part I'm working on and I thought I'd read all of Cage in Lunatic Runagate. In this case, Keine's action was mostly just for laughs seeing how in canon, her efforts to educate children seems to have mixed results.
Reading CiLR kind of changed my perspective on the RPG project since I got to learn a lot more about some characters. I still have to finish the manga books with Sunny Milk, Luna Child and Star Sapphire which has a lot of interesting cameos as well. The one I'm not sure if it's worthwhile to go through before continuing is the stories that features Renko and Maribel. While I do plan to read them because of their role in the game, I'm not sure if there's any additional info about characters in Gensokyo to be found there.
Sahgren:
Luna Child seems to be stuck spamming Accelerate during the fight with the Three Fairies. She used an attack exactly one time over the course of the entire fight.
Grammar Nitpicking:
"be" should be "being"
Extraneous "n" at the end of "have"
Missing parentheses at the start of the line.
Should be "that is in" instead of "this is". The "If" at the start of the second line should be lower case.
Should be "haven't" instead of "never"
Missing "will" at the start of the line.
"the" should be "that"
"this" should be "that". Having "much of" and "big" at the same time is redundant. I recommend changing it to "big of a threat" or getting rid of the "big" while leaving the rest as is.
Edit: "equipment" in the status screen should be capitalized to match the rest of the categories.
iori98:
Haven't played this yet but was wondering if you could add a gender select option or is the game dependent on the mc being male. Sorry if this seems like a weird question :ohdear: