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Re: Guilty Alice II : Thanks for playing! ;_;

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HakureiSM:

Oh I did read that, but I guess it didn't come off as strongly as you expected :V

Zil:

+2 Delfigamer
+1 EP

I think both are inventive and fit the theme nicely.

Gensou: I more or less agree with HakureiSM.
Kaze, Vento, Yookie: Admittedly not how you'd see the character acting normally, but they don't strike me as really being "reversals" of the characters' defining traits. That and changing the morality of the character seems kind of too simple, when you could do something funky instead.

Also Kracko I think you left EP out of the list?

Vyrien:

Friendly reminder for voters, I said role reversal not trait reversal.

I specified morality change in my example also:

--- Quote --- so say an evil character would be portrayed as doing something extremely kind or an obnoxious 2hu presented as sweet and demure
--- End quote ---

Sorry if that was not clear enough.

KrackoCloud:


--- Quote from: Zil on November 25, 2013, 12:18:43 AM ---Also Kracko I think you left EP out of the list?

--- End quote ---
Thanks for the heads-up.

+2 Delfigamer You pulled off the facial expressions and dialogue really well!

Invisible: Would've gotten my +1, but I'm hesitating because I don't know how well this fits the theme.
Zil: Fits the theme well. Some color could've brought a lot more life into this picture.
Genso: It would be nice if you had a translation :V
Crimson: Welcome to GA! Your drawing's off to a good start.
Vento: Your drawings are awesome as ever... I don't see how this is ooc though. Feels kind of like her HM portrayal?

DX7.EP:

+2 Zil
A role reversal and good reference in one!

+1 Delfigamer
It definitely weighs more towards the words to get the idea across. Neverthess it adheres well to the theme.

Yookie, KazeSenshi, Genso, Vento: See Haku, Zil, and Vyrien's responses.
Invisible: Makes a good attempt towards the theme. Technique is decent too, keep at it!
Genso: This requires a knowledge of Japanese, which wasn't an issue here but definitely was for others. Other than the switching of the sentence ending, though, she seemed very much standard.
Vento: Good colour work!

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