Author Topic: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]  (Read 133055 times)

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #720 on: January 25, 2012, 08:10:29 PM »
If you're so narrow minded as to only compare it to that, I'm kinda miffed. 'Holy Grail' is a metaphor for anything that's unachievable. Kanmaru was a human who sought 'perfection', which is unachievable. People automatically attributing the Holy Grail to one visual novel kinda make people who actually know anything about Arthurian legends sad, you know. And people automatically going 'oh fate stay night ripoff' when I mention one thing that's related to it kinda make people sad too.
Why does it matter anyway? The guy is dead and gone. He's not going to do anything.

and yes, obviously the ability to form ideals into reality is a fate stay night ripoff. Obviously the only application is making weapons like Shirou does, and obviously I totally copied the idea from there. His ability is influenced by that, sure. It's hard not to let things influence you. But I'm honestly offended if you think I'm just lifting it all from there.

Apologies for trying to help you out by getting a plot point that wouldn't mesh well with the rest of the story out of the way, by the way. Guess trying to help the GM with story flow is a bad thing. I'll just leave it for later so I can totally jack the plot with 'ohmygawd backstory guyz, I have to solve this' later on, alright?

Honestly...

Edit: Admittedly, it does seem like that. Yes, I like Fate/Stay Night. Yes, the examples I gave were very similar to Fate/Stay Night. Is it a problem that I gave you examples that would be easy to picture? Or do you want me to go into a complex description of how Tetsumaru's unawoken powers have begun and will subtly alter his body composition to something not-human yet not-youkai, ostensibly because his 'ideal' of 'himself' isn't restricted by such descriptions because he lives in Gensokyo? Or is that 'denied' because the character is now 'broken'? Or worse off, 'unoriginal'? I'm doing my damn best to make my character fit more easily into this RP, Sonae, but if you're just going to shoot me down when I go out of my way and kill off a character I wanted to use later just to help you out with story flow, then...I don't know what to say. I like Tetsumaru, as a character I put thought and time into creating, and I wanted to have fun with him. Right now, I'm not. Because you still haven't figured out what to do with him, and when I try to make it easier for you to do so by getting rid of the main obstacle, you shoot it down. It's a tad frustrating.
« Last Edit: January 25, 2012, 08:24:05 PM by Amra »
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #721 on: January 25, 2012, 09:20:48 PM »
Calling me narrow minded ^^' How harsh indeed.
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'oh fate stay night ripoff' when I mention one thing

It isn't just the grail.
And GYMO I'm not demanding he change it. I'm saying me as a person/player is vocalizing what i think.


Not to mention this is Japan, way back. Not Europe way back.
Maybe it's just a certain dislike I have for something I wont mention cause it'll cause a mutiny.

And I'm not Kat, so please, don't think of me that way.
And no I did not say you were Kat, so i didn't infer you steal everything from games/anime/w.e

People ^^'
What part of DICUSS WITH ME don't you understand?
I give credit to GYMO and Sour who have actually come forth to discuss and tell me about things.
I go to Marou to talk. and he knows more than the rest of you cause i've gotta bigmouth
Well I don't want to spoil everything for all of you, that'd be boring ):

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Edit:
:Lolhugetext.

Also I'd prefer if one single player did NOT take center stage.
I pormised fairness so yeah >:

Anyways waiting on Dorakyura and Marou.
Hanzo, Takuma  can approach Keine now.

Anyways, as far as it goes for references to mythology/history/all that stuff, there's plenty in my player roster.
Like the soon to 'appear' Nyx~


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Pretend edit.
Oh no. No. nononono oh pleas no ;-;

/sigh of relief!
Holy shit thought it got corrupted there.
/shoots Kat

Oh and, one more thing.
Amra, You're not allowed to have Tetsumaru learn to consciously use his ability. As are you not allowed to have sudden lame memory recovery.
Lets just say I've got plans~ Big ones~
Things you forget or close off lurk in your subconscious after all~
ufufufu~
« Last Edit: January 25, 2012, 09:36:38 PM by Sonae »

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #722 on: January 25, 2012, 11:06:06 PM »
You didn't exactly make it clear whether you were saying it as a GM or player. ==;

There was a hint in that dialogue, but it wasn't meant for Tetsumaru. The emphasis there was for us, rather than for the characters. Tetsumaru doesn't have anything

There's also a difference between the voice of the guy who writes the descriptions, who ostensibly knows everything, and the actual character. It's not as though he would in character describe it as a 'holy grail', it was just a metaphor I was using as a description. Like I said, 'holy grail' as in 'unachievable thing', not an actual tangible item.

There isn't going to be any memory recovery because there's no memories to recover. Kanmaru is a seperate person. Tetsu's life truly started at the 'age' of five. That's what I was trying to get at. Along with that, Tetsumaru wouldn't get any sort of hint that he has a power from that dialogue, would he? I understand I'm not allowed to let him use it until whenever.

Might I ask what you think I've ripped off? I honestly don't see it, beyond Tetsumaru's ability's vague resemblance to tracing and that one off mention of a Holy Grail which isn't the actual Holy Grail in any way.. You're looking into it more than I am.

The main purpose of the post was to just get his backstory, and all the possible, 'split personality', 'lost memories', and other possible stuff out of the way so that you, as a GM, would have an easier time working with the character. I understand that it's hard to plan stuff for a character if they have stuff waiting in the background like that. Apparently I didn't achieve that. ==

Edit: I don't know what you expect me to say when you point out one thing in total out of nowhere and then call it a ripoff. If there's a bunch of things, tell me about it at least.
« Last Edit: January 25, 2012, 11:15:52 PM by Amra »
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #723 on: January 26, 2012, 01:51:34 AM »
People ^^'
What part of DICUSS WITH ME don't you understand?
I give credit to GYMO and Sour who have actually come forth to discuss and tell me about things.
I go to Marou to talk. and he knows more than the rest of you cause i've gotta bigmouth
Well I don't want to spoil everything for all of you, that'd be boring ):

I cannot be on MSN all the time and I only use Windows Messenger, which complicates things.

I'm not going to DL MSN Live Messenger just to be able to talk to one or two people when I already have good contact with everyone on either IRC or Skype. Furthermore not everyone has the time to sit down and write a lengthy PM to clarify things with you.

I'd suggest that as a GM you are more flexible with how people can contact you. It's unfair on us as the players to be so imposing and yet not even open to more than two forms of contact.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #724 on: January 26, 2012, 02:02:33 AM »
You can ask me right here if you want. I really don't give a shit how you contact me. But that doesn't mean I need to sign up for every messaging site out there just to have  multiple contact methods.
Nor did I ask you to be online every day.
Nor did I ask it to be lengthy.

Ex.
Hey can my character meet Nitori?

And I would proceed to answer.

/sighs
-_-
Everyone so grumpy and srsbusiness.
Just cause I speak rough doesn't mean i mean it 100% of the time...
Well if you're all fed up with me then....

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #725 on: January 26, 2012, 02:08:59 AM »
I'm not really fed up nor am I angry at you. I'm just saying it how it is, because it's clear that there are some problems arising from a failure to communicate.

Everyone so grumpy and srsbusiness.
Just cause I speak rough doesn't mean i mean it 100% of the time...

To be honest, it looks like you are the one who is grumpy and frustrated.  :V I honestly have no problems at the moment except for Kat constantly harassing me to post, but misinterpreting what some other players are proposing and then proceeding to yell at them for it is something that's pretty worrying. I'm just concerned that the GM/player relationship is pretty shaky.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #726 on: January 26, 2012, 02:15:55 AM »
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And eventually, Nanaya fell asleep, making satisfied moans and Mmms.

-repeatedly headdesks-
-_-'

Well I say things as I seem em too. And that's why I be rough sometimes.

Proposing?
And you think I'm not worried about this shakiness? >:
Makes me lose motivation

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #727 on: January 26, 2012, 02:24:24 AM »
I never said that you weren't worried. Sorry if the implication was there.

I dunno. This conversation alone is a pretty big indicator of bad communication problems.

I'm patiently waiting for updates but since all I've been seeing are updates to other character's parts, it's no surprise I got impatient and posted what I did with Kat.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #728 on: January 26, 2012, 02:31:15 AM »
Okay. Here's my concern with you two.
One, I'm worried you two will go too fast and rush ahead to the shrine before the feast starts.
Youmu is there to help clean while Yuyuko eats watches.
I'll try to speed up Sour's scenario since I need to get a move on.
Second, you're romance is going so fast it seems like one of you will be naked the next time they sleep together x.x'

Orphea if you're out there reading this, you better be read to reply when the time comes.
If you don't reply by the time Sanaya, Laresa, Sora, Senri, Nanaya, Tetsumaru, Amaya, and Takuma are all there, then I'm going to move on without you. I've made everyone wait long enough already.

And I apologize but I'll start my reply tomorrow, I need some rest. For my body and mind.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #729 on: January 26, 2012, 03:27:11 PM »
Buffer post with nothing witty to say. Out of curiosity though, how many here have skype and use it as a chat client?
My first attempt at storywriting, looking for critique

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #730 on: January 26, 2012, 03:41:54 PM »
Okay first I apologize for the bumpy ride as of recently. I'm sorry it's gotten this way.

Anyways, Trance and Kat.
I have finished reading your posts.
Idk if delaying you to the next update would be wise or not... It might since I can prolly finish it today and post it.
But either way, I shall let you continue. But on one condition
That you two slow down your pace. Post in Moderation only.

Anyways, we're approaching a miniskip. So yeah...
The following is an estimation in lowest form. ? = unknown or unsure.

Posts Needed from;;
Sora x3
Sanaya x1
Takuma x2
Tetsumaru x?
Laresa x0
Kisei x0
Kohaku x1?
Senri x?
Nanaya x?
Hotaru x?
Amaya x2?
Yumiko x0

Miniskip is basically a minor time skip, not skipping enough time to be called a full one i spose.
Basically it'll be the Feast's start.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #731 on: January 26, 2012, 11:04:52 PM »
Buffer post with nothing witty to say. Out of curiosity though, how many here have skype and use it as a chat client?

I do, all the time, though I also use it for voice chat.

In fact, Skype is the only IM client I use on a regular basis.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #732 on: January 27, 2012, 01:54:50 AM »
I do use Skype for playing LoL with friends.

...Where's my game?

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #733 on: January 27, 2012, 02:00:38 AM »
I do not have Skype. Truthfully, I don't even know what it is.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #734 on: January 27, 2012, 04:38:58 AM »
It's pretty much a voice/text chat client that can call to other skype users or call to phones, and receive from the same. Quite useful. Popular IM as well.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #735 on: January 27, 2012, 05:04:41 AM »
Gracias.

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #736 on: January 27, 2012, 09:15:38 AM »
- writing stuff
- not clicking on "post"
- doing other stuff
- closing browser
- fail :derp:

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #737 on: January 27, 2012, 09:19:45 AM »
http://sadtrombone.com/ (pleasedonthitme :ohdear:)

Know the feeling, writing in notepad first is a rather good idea I find
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #738 on: January 27, 2012, 12:48:30 PM »
You can't recover if you crash while writing in notepad

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #739 on: January 27, 2012, 03:38:04 PM »
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #740 on: January 27, 2012, 07:57:36 PM »
No writer's block allowed. >:

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #741 on: January 28, 2012, 12:07:58 AM »
It's kind of late here but I'm finally at home  :ohdear:

so tired, I fall to sleep in front of the PC, now I have headache  :V being human in suffering.

was about to write to give the paper to Suwako because she "seems to want it", but that's bunnying right? I wondered what to do with the paper -.- hope that's ok since I was like "it must be the newspaper, I'm pretty sure" :D
« Last Edit: January 28, 2012, 02:13:06 AM by Dorakyura »

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #742 on: January 29, 2012, 09:12:40 PM »
Anyways sorry for delay, It's coming along. Albeit slowly.
The feast will begin soon -w-

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #743 on: January 30, 2012, 10:43:16 AM »
Sonae, can I sneak in a post or two before your update?

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #744 on: January 30, 2012, 03:47:48 PM »
Depends on the content I spose. If you think you can make it work without actually arriving at the shrine yet, then you can most likely go ahead.

Edit;
As long as you don't arrive at the shrine you're fine.

Anyways Since I've got a bigmouth and talk to much, I can't find the sprite requests for Laresa.
So GYMO
What color are Laresa's eyes? is her 'pack' a backpack? If so use Nitori's? Why does an image of her in a white tshirt and short jean like shorts with a extreme figure jump into my head?

@Nanananabatya
Is she wearing a tshirt and skirt, or a dress?

Since lolIfailatfindingthings, I'll need ppl to repost their requests, preferably with more detail too.
« Last Edit: January 30, 2012, 05:51:17 PM by Sonae »

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #745 on: January 31, 2012, 01:39:47 AM »
Yes, it's a backpack, and I believe I said blue eyes. And yes, using Nitori's is fine.

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #746 on: January 31, 2012, 11:51:38 PM »
What kind of miniskip do you want to do?

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #747 on: February 01, 2012, 11:27:37 AM »
Quick do the miniskip so I can have something to write instead of nothing man

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #748 on: February 01, 2012, 12:03:49 PM »
almost tempted to just make a filler post with hotaru s bro or something

...Where's my game?

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #749 on: February 04, 2012, 06:06:38 PM »
Well, If Hanzo and Dorakyura and Sour don't want another post we can skip to the feast
Though it'll take a while to write.

Also Yog idk ???