Author Topic: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]  (Read 133071 times)

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #540 on: January 06, 2012, 07:08:21 PM »
Well, there'd be at least some basic geography involved, obviously. And at least a brief overview of the major youkai races, that being the Kappa and Tengu. Not sure about the oni in that regard, as I think the only one that's been seen on the surface world for centuries was Suika, and even her, not by the general public, to the best of my recollection.

Though that does make me wonder how much she'd teach kids about the incidents of the games. It hasn't been that long; people would remember the scarlet mist, at least.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #541 on: January 06, 2012, 07:57:31 PM »
Well, the older people would at least.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #542 on: January 07, 2012, 12:17:11 AM »
40 years is a long time for Humans.

Also no there wouldn't be anything about Oni. Since theres not books on them or anything.

hm. I don't think she'd mention that people can go through the Barrier. That'd  make stupid kids curious.

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #543 on: January 07, 2012, 12:37:07 AM »
If she'd teach about the Incidents, she'd probably teach TH 6, 7, 7.5, 8, 10, 10.5 (to an extent- no Tenshi included), and 13. 11 was made of two parts, but the first can be ignored so that the topic is skipped entirely. 12 is just a ship appearing in the sky. I don't think that would be worth mentioning except for explaining the origins of the Myouren Temple.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #544 on: January 07, 2012, 01:11:02 AM »
Well I- wait. We don't even know what kinds of things she teaches.

From the looks of her cards...

...ugh icr their comments.

Anyways. 2nd info dump is coming. I apologize to everyone for this lengthy wait. After this next one there should only be two more posts-

Aaaah! then I need to write a big timeskip post

/dies of overwork

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #545 on: January 07, 2012, 01:23:57 AM »
Well, I always saw her as a general teacher, so maybe teaching the basics of everything? (Think the reader's digest version of the Incidents)
So that way if there are people who do want to know more about things later on, they can either ask after school, or go to Akyu if they know of the Records.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #546 on: January 07, 2012, 01:35:15 AM »
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/repeatedly headdesks cause her computer crashed MID UPDATE
AGAIN
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #547 on: January 07, 2012, 01:39:44 AM »
Ow, I know how that feels.
This laptop used to do that all the time on me. :colonveeplusalpha:
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #548 on: January 07, 2012, 01:56:42 AM »
You got your laptop fixed?

Also chicken scratch update is up.
bet no one will make any sense of it.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #549 on: January 07, 2012, 01:58:01 AM »
No, sadly.
But this old loaner stopped crashing.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #550 on: January 07, 2012, 02:07:38 AM »
Woops, forgot to mention this, but you know, you guys CAN ask questions about things in my posts. Or discuss your theories...

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #551 on: January 07, 2012, 12:11:34 PM »
Damn, it's been a while and I got lazy keeping up with the IC posts, though I can say it's an interesting read, though can you recap me on what happened in, like, the last 5 pages(or more if you can)?

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #552 on: January 07, 2012, 03:05:34 PM »
Oh my, you must have read my mind.
Or was I so tired that I told you without knowing?
Last night I was going to pm you and tell you that you can post and discuss here too~

Edit;
I apologize to everyone. I was mistaken. There will be two more posts after this next update.

Sour your marching orders are as follows.
Read to the end!

Also Can anyone tackle Dorakyura and tell him to post? I;m not gonna wait on him once I;ve finished. I think I've made you all wait long enough already.
« Last Edit: January 07, 2012, 06:30:57 PM by Sonae »

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #553 on: January 07, 2012, 06:53:16 PM »
Also Can anyone tackle Dorakyura and tell him to post? I;m not gonna wait on him once I;ve finished. I think I've made you all wait long enough already.

I have been doing that every time I get on Irc. :V.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #554 on: January 07, 2012, 07:12:36 PM »
Hm. maybe it needs to be harder.
Like wall smashing tackles...

And just for note. No, the humans of the village/player characters do not know Keine is a half beast

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #555 on: January 08, 2012, 10:40:12 PM »
Hey guys, UI screws are a horrible mechanic right?

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #556 on: January 08, 2012, 11:36:21 PM »
Congratz to Marou for conquering his greatest enemy.

Anyways!
Okay! We need to decide where everyone will be after the time skip so I can start writing.

Locations;;
Sora - At the SDM's Gate. Is with Meiling
Sanaya - Just leaving the Human village Dojo. Is with Tsukasa
Takuma - On his way home. Is alone.
Tetsumaru - Unknown.
Laresa - Is sitting in the teahouse alone, waiting for Keine.
Kisei - Is about to be rudely awakened by her parents.
Kohaku - Is finishing cleaning up at the shrine. Is with her trusty mutt
Senri - Is working at the tea house.
Nanaya - By this point has left the Moriya Shrine. Location currently unknown.
Hotaru - Will be taking a break near a stream at the foot of the mountain.
Amaya - Will be at the Moriya Shrine with Suwako and Kanako
Yumiko - Entrance pending.

Also by that point, Aya's newspaper article will have been fully distributed, so if you want your character to read it, you have to find one~
Though in the case of Amaya, Sanae will be bringing one home.
Senri and Laresa, there will be some in the teahouse, prolly being read by some random person.
Takuma will have one in his house.
Kohaku will be seeing it early but wont get the chance to object to it's contents.
Yumiko will be getting one later.
Hotaru will get a delivery.
As for the rest, mainly Sanaya, Tetsumaru, Kisei, and Nanaya. Read the first line.
Laresa could also be included in this group. As could Senri. But they can find it in the teahouse
« Last Edit: January 09, 2012, 12:08:50 AM by Sonae »

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #557 on: January 08, 2012, 11:48:43 PM »
A delivery from where?

...Where's my game?

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #558 on: January 08, 2012, 11:56:18 PM »
The Sky :3
Hotaru wont see it coming

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #559 on: January 09, 2012, 08:51:33 AM »
Nanaya will stay in the shrine. Rawr. She shall meet Kanako and stuff shall happen. :V.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #560 on: January 09, 2012, 11:19:50 AM »
This was long overdue. Just a copy-paste from an earlier post, but the name was changed due to obvious reasons.

Name: Shinsui Kyoki (狂気 浸水)
Appearance: She wears a white kimono that has a gray cloud motif at the hem of the dress and the sleeves. Her hair is also black, tied in a ponytail, reaching her back. Her eyes are also brown, but darker than Tsutomu?s.
Other: Kisei?s mother.  She helps Tsutomu run the shop but can never get used to the regular appearances of youkai at night in the Village. She spends more time with Kisei than Tsutomu does, but Kisei sees them all the time. While she exerts manual labor in the shop, she doesn?t like a single bit of Kisei?s violence. She goes out less often than her husband, but only because he has the easier time sourcing products for their shop.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #561 on: January 09, 2012, 02:11:51 PM »
Nanaya will stay in the shrine. Rawr. She shall meet Kanako and stuff shall happen. :V.

No She shall not ^^

Seeing as Laresa will be leaving the teahouse almost immediately after we resume, I want EVERYONE to be seperated.

Plus it's not like anything would happen if she met Kanako or not.

Hell I might change my mind and have Laresa leaving the tea house around then.

Anyways. Time Skip post will take forever a while to write. Don't expect it any time too soon. I'd say, maybe Wensday my time at the earliest.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #562 on: January 09, 2012, 10:58:48 PM »
This was long overdue. Just a copy-paste from an earlier post, but the name was changed due to obvious reasons.

Trance, is the name right?

Yeah, that is correct.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #563 on: January 11, 2012, 11:34:45 AM »
Should I give Sour a chance to reply to the events that happen in the next update? Before Timeskip? If I do that I can also write up a section to end Amaya and Nanaya's section since they aren't going to continue.

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #564 on: January 11, 2012, 12:04:15 PM »
Yes, go ahead. I'm getting impatient for an update. Don't shoot me.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #565 on: January 11, 2012, 01:44:03 PM »
Should I give Sour a chance to reply to the events that happen in the next update? Before Timeskip? If I do that I can also write up a section to end Amaya and Nanaya's section since they aren't going to continue.

I'm writing. :|.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #566 on: January 11, 2012, 02:17:49 PM »
Yes, go ahead. I'm getting impatient for an update. Don't shoot me.

As am I.

In other news. Need Ideas for appearances of some youkai that will show up.
If anyone thinks they got something unique, that'd be most helpful. since right now they all seem like expys

Since two people are taking their good ol' time with posting. I am going to close off the possibility and start writing a section soon.
I'm still working on Sour's. but the fact that I don't know Ran very well means I needed some research, which is done so yay.

blah blah ramblings...
« Last Edit: January 11, 2012, 04:38:19 PM by Sonae »

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #567 on: January 11, 2012, 08:03:34 PM »
Okay, so, my local internet providers's apparantly having some 'hardware trouble'. Haven't been able to connect since last night, and no guarantees it'll last long yet. So yes, go ahead. No sense waiting for someone with an unstable connection, and making everyone else wait.

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #568 on: January 12, 2012, 11:04:24 AM »
Welp. I'm still a workin on the update. Writing a Newspaper is hard ya know @@

Good boy YJ. /gives a treat
Not having to spilt you two up means less work for me o/
Where do you want to resume after timeskip? At your cave or in the village?

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #569 on: January 12, 2012, 11:58:06 AM »
Welp. I'm still a workin on the update. Writing a Newspaper is hard ya know @@

Good boy YJ. /gives a treat
Not having to spilt you two up means less work for me o/
Where do you want to resume after timeskip? At your cave or in the village?

CLEARLY IN THE UNDERGROUND HUE HUE HUE HUE!!!!!

I mean uhh. The village could do. Or a visit to Komachi. For her breasts.[/s

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