Author Topic: Scarly's shitty scripts (Ex-Eirin 1.0.1)  (Read 2337 times)

Rin Kaenbyou

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Scarly's shitty scripts (Ex-Eirin 1.0.1)
« on: October 09, 2011, 02:38:36 PM »
Well, here I will put my scripts, which generally are pretty bad XD

EX-Eirin: http://bulletforge.org/u/scarly/p/danmakufu-ex-eirin/v/101
Began as an experiment and ended as a complete script  ^___^

Basically, Eirin throws planets at you... and a bunch of arrows too, dodge them!
A very random and hard script

Contains:

3 Non-spells
4 Spellcards


Shotsheet original made by Torchic038 (not use it without permission from the original creator)
Thanks Torchic038, for let me use and edit your Shotsheet

Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-swk6s4K5N4
my computer is crap and only going to 40 fps. if someone make a video of the script would be grateful! ^ _ ^

PS: sorry for my bad english
PS2: plural script. go to plural and seerch "Eirin lanza planetas" (yeah I'm spanish XD)
« Last Edit: October 09, 2011, 10:24:16 PM by ScarletKnives »
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Chronojet ⚙ Dragon

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Re: Scarly's shitty scripts (Ex-Eirin 1.0.0)
« Reply #1 on: October 09, 2011, 02:42:34 PM »
I'll try the script, hope to get a good replay.



First things first, your nonspells. I hate arrows. They have bad hitboxes, both in TD and in Danmakufu. I'm not too sure how to explain why, but something tells me they are as deceptive as Sakuya's knives.
Second: Your first spell. With this type of spellcard, I thought maybe the moons would actually curve in towards you. Thank goodness it didn't do that. Maybe you should put an indicator as to where your moon bullets would go. Also, arrow danmaku again. Very good job otherwise.

Your second nonspell. I don't like it - Eirin keeps running away (and it isn't helping that I'm using ReimuB...)
Pretty good second spellcard, actually. Nothing to say about this.

Third nonspell: Eirin's running away just becomes a nuisance, and it's pretty much impossible to move between the rows of arrows. I don't like this one.
Third spell: This is a bad card. Deceptive hitboxes + seemingly turning (?) bullets = disaster.

Fourth spell: Eh... I can probably see what you're doing here, but having a Keine + Utsuho card might not work as a final card. Also, bad hitboxes.

Quick note: Your backgrounds like to match with the color of the bullets. This means I can't see what's a bullet and what's part of the background. That should be fixed.



Now creating replay.
Replay created. http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7447212/thReplay/danmakufu/Eirin_replay00.dat

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« Last Edit: October 09, 2011, 03:17:33 PM by Konyllis »

Rin Kaenbyou

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Re: Scarly's shitty scripts (Ex-Eirin 1.0.0)
« Reply #2 on: October 09, 2011, 03:14:50 PM »
thanks!
taking note to change it into an updated version. (I will makeEirin move less in the 2 and 3 nonspells and other changes)

I accept suggestions (especially for the last spellcard), and I'm not very good with danmakufu, and exams are coming upon me.

and yes, you're right, the arrows are a nuisance, and the spellcard of Mars is impossible for me ... (Besides I'm not convinced by the fact that it is so similar to Neptune spellcard)

And the backgrounds, I will make them darker.
Atte: Orin, the most awesome cat (and catgirl)  you ever seen baby!

I love my master Satori, she's so warm and kind... and when I am in her bed with her, she does **** and **** with my precious body... Ahhhh... This feels too good, nyaaaa~
Wait! what are you thinking, pervert? she scratches my chin and pets my back, y-you baka!

Chronojet ⚙ Dragon

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Re: Scarly's shitty scripts (Ex-Eirin 1.0.0)
« Reply #3 on: October 09, 2011, 03:20:54 PM »
I'd like to add some things.
The last card is impossible to actually shoot down if you try to actually capture it legitly (no invincibility, etc. etc. etc.)
And, yes. The Mars card is technically possible but those rocks have very bad hitboxes. Just make the rocks a bit less dense in the rings.

Also, yeah. The concept of having changing backgrounds according to the planets (and the our Moon, but whatever.)  is really nice, but if the backgrounds were to be darker, the player would have a much easier time seeing the player. (Right now, I'm using the default players, so having white on light grey is... pretty unpleasant, to put it bluntly.)

Rin Kaenbyou

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Re: Scarly's shitty scripts (Ex-Eirin 1.0.0)
« Reply #4 on: October 09, 2011, 08:14:15 PM »
Well I changed a few things:
-Darker BG's
-Eirin is being quieter now in the nonspells (but continues to move randomly)
-Number of asteroids in Mars spellcard reduced (from 36 to 28)
-White moon arrows are now purple
-Reduced life in the Venus spellcard

will be right? or put more changes?
If there are changes that directly affect a spellcard I will need help (I will put the code here)
In fact, I have several ideas of spellcards that lengthen the script, but I do not know how to make them *cries* (would be spellcards of the other planets, and nonspells stars)
Atte: Orin, the most awesome cat (and catgirl)  you ever seen baby!

I love my master Satori, she's so warm and kind... and when I am in her bed with her, she does **** and **** with my precious body... Ahhhh... This feels too good, nyaaaa~
Wait! what are you thinking, pervert? she scratches my chin and pets my back, y-you baka!

Chronojet ⚙ Dragon

  • The Oddity
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Re: Scarly's shitty scripts (Ex-Eirin 1.0.0)
« Reply #5 on: October 09, 2011, 09:07:23 PM »
Well, where is the script? Right now there is no downloadable update.

Rin Kaenbyou

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Re: Scarly's shitty scripts (Ex-Eirin 1.0.0)
« Reply #6 on: October 09, 2011, 10:23:46 PM »
Well, where is the script? Right now there is no downloadable update.

Updated.
http://bulletforge.org/u/scarly/p/danmakufu-ex-eirin/v/101
Sorry for the delay
Atte: Orin, the most awesome cat (and catgirl)  you ever seen baby!

I love my master Satori, she's so warm and kind... and when I am in her bed with her, she does **** and **** with my precious body... Ahhhh... This feels too good, nyaaaa~
Wait! what are you thinking, pervert? she scratches my chin and pets my back, y-you baka!

Chronojet ⚙ Dragon

  • The Oddity
  • 今コソ輝ケ、我ガ未来、ソノ可能性!!
Re: Scarly's shitty scripts (Ex-Eirin 1.0.1)
« Reply #7 on: October 10, 2011, 01:19:57 AM »
One last complaint before I upload my replay.

In the Mars spellcard: Eirin moves waaaaaaay too much. I'm using ReimuB. What does that mean?

Anyways, http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7447212/thReplay/danmakufu/Eirin_replay01.dat

Rin Kaenbyou

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Re: Scarly's shitty scripts (Ex-Eirin 1.0.1)
« Reply #8 on: October 10, 2011, 03:49:24 PM »
One last complaint before I upload my replay.

In the Mars spellcard: Eirin moves waaaaaaay too much. I'm using ReimuB. What does that mean?

Anyways, http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7447212/thReplay/danmakufu/Eirin_replay01.dat

oops, I forgot to correct the movement of Eirin in the Spellcards, sorry
I'll fix it in the next major update (1.1.0 or 1.0.2)

By the way, I have other projects in mind (excluding UCS) but I need a helping hand to make them.

One is Sumire, my OC. Is a cute Bakeneko that can induce a man to madness.

The second is a script with memes, as Trollface, cereal guy or rage guy. Being a troll script, the seriousness is the last thing you see here.

Another is a crossover between Touhou and Madoka Magica, although the last is the most complex among the 3, and the less priority has.

If someone wants to help me I will be grateful :)

PS: I accept suggestions for the Eirin script
Atte: Orin, the most awesome cat (and catgirl)  you ever seen baby!

I love my master Satori, she's so warm and kind... and when I am in her bed with her, she does **** and **** with my precious body... Ahhhh... This feels too good, nyaaaa~
Wait! what are you thinking, pervert? she scratches my chin and pets my back, y-you baka!