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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #150 on: October 19, 2011, 12:25:20 AM »
Newan staggered to his feet. All around him, battles were raging. He moved forward, only to be stopped by Nazrin's dowsing rod. He looked over to see a fire in her eyes, a new determination he had not seen before. "Stand back, Newan. It's my turn." She stepped forward to meet the maid, who raised an eyebrow at her.

?Oh? The little mouse is going to fight the dog? This will be interesting.? Knives. Knives everywhere.

[What the hell do you think you're doing?]

[Don't worry. I have a plan.]

Nazrin grinned. ?What a one-trick pony. Defense Sign: Pendulum Guard.? Pendulums began circling Nazrin, firing out danmaku and protecting her. She flashed a grin. ?They say the best defense is a good offense. Let's test the inverse, shall we??

Nazrin charged Sakuya, dodging the knives  her pendulums did not deflect. Sakuya was able to maintain a safe distance, but was constantly on the move an unable to make any headway herself. Nazrin was unrelenting, surprising for her injuries. Nazrin was constantly on the move, as though seeking Sakuya.

Soon, however, the card ended, Nazrin stood, panting, facing her opponent. Her legs hurt more than she wanted to believe, and she winced, rubbing the wounds. This was her falter; she felt the knives in her back before she heard them. She stumbled forward before falling, a pair of knives stuck in her shoulders. ?Hm... Seems I missed.? Sakuya walked over, grinning.

?Kheh...? Sakuya looked down to see the mouse, grinning up at her. ?Rod Sign: Nazrin Rod.? A pair of lasers went down into the ground. The maid raised an eyebrow in confusion, just as the lasers came back around. The ace up Nazrin's sleeve; an undodgeable attack.

(OOC: Of course, we're working in three dimensions here, but since the games only work as two-dimensional representations of the actual battles (especially since you don't just fire a stream of bullets straight in front of you) I figure it still works the same.)

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #151 on: October 19, 2011, 05:05:00 AM »
(Will post when I reach back. Current using illigal school stuff.)

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #152 on: October 20, 2011, 12:51:18 AM »

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #153 on: October 20, 2011, 02:13:48 AM »
"W-what... do y-you want?"

Darkness rumbled deep within nothingness. A trail of red glows in the moonlight, it's path long and slithery. A flash of blue, and an unsettling yelp. There layed on the ground, a black hat, with two, long feeler-like frills trailing from the top to a distance towards the dripping, red path. Iku Nagae had reached the end of her line. Along with the Dragon's retreat, her powers slowly dwindled. Finally unable to halt the advancing scourge, Chaos spread like a plague. It enstrangled the local wildlife, people, youkai and even the plants were not granted any santuary. Corrupted and twisted into horrible abominations, everything touched by the Chaos became just a shadow of their former selves. A shell of nothingness. Their souls, forever lost? Who knows? Chaos descended upon Gensokyo like a raging wildfire, tearing through barriers and seals that Yukari and Reimu put up. It was surprising some of the higher-ups never knew of this onslaught. The yama, still "peacefully" working in hell. Remilia Scarlet still having her charismatic tea session in the mansion. Others who were informed had stepped up their defenses. The Hakugyokuro had many barriers set up, so much so that souls could not even enter it. Yuyuko alone, stood at the edge of the barriers, staring into Gensokyo from the skies above. Keine had protected the human village, but the removal of history did not halt Chao's advance. It rammed through like a bulldozer, cleaving the very soul of every human within existence itself. Keine stood to protect her village till the end. What happened to who, nobody knows.

Yukari had begun taking countermeasures to the rampaging Chaos infection. Her last resort was to use all of her power, along with Reimu's power. Forever sacrificing the ying-yang orb to colapse the border on itself, destroying everything and revealing Gensokyo to the world. Before the border would be remade with her own life. Yukari stomped around in her house, agitated and... Afraid. Chaos seemed to never stop. Would it die if even the border died? What would happen? She didn't know. Could the border even be fixed? Her hands shook, even as she grabbed a cup of tea. For the first time in her life, Yukari, the youkai the basically controlled all of Gensokyo, was afraid. So very afraid. Ran had gone missing a few days ago, and Chen sits atop the house, looking towards the horizon for signs of Ran. Mayohiga was never touched by the oncoming Chaos. She should have told the Yama. She should have informed everyone. It was, and would always be, her duty to defend Gensokyo till the end. It would not die now. It could not!

Myouren Temple basically... Left. As it's body was Murasa's ship, it could be changed back. However, it was not seen for quite sometime. Byakuren was still in Makai with Shinki, even after so long. Something had to be wrong. Maybe the seals broke? Maybe Chaos had entered Makai... First?

Down in Chireiden, the Oni still partied, still drank. They underestimated the oncoming, dreadful, terrible end that they would all face. They payed no heed to Satori, wasting their lives away. Yuugi herself guaranteed that she would be the one that would defend the city from Chao's coming. Okuu had calmed the Nuclear furnace, and the kappa had stopped the Industrialization project. Koishi awaited in the mansion with Satori. She missed Gale. So very much so. And also her hat. Her beautiful, badass and awesome hat.
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Tentacles began to emerge on the ground, trailing towards the prone, exhausted Iku. Her arms were cut, sliced by razor-sharp blades of darkness. She was completely exhausted both physically and mentally. She had no more power inside of her, and the only thing she could do was to submit to this abomination. The tentacles trailed up her legs. They curled up her arms, and slowly, pulling a tentacled blob out of the border's edge. Raising it's long neck and stretching it's sharp head, it split open into half, to reveal a toothed, black mouth. Red, streamlined waves covered it's head, acting like eyes. It slowly approached Iku, acidic, dark green liquid dripping from it's gaping maw. Iku yelped, once more. It would be her last. The Chaotic Spawn lunged.

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"Gensokyo... Is mine!"
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<Nietz> Anyway, sex toys alone won't come up to 11k.
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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #154 on: October 20, 2011, 11:03:39 AM »
((If I remember correctly. Remilia is in the Outside world, and Byakuren had already returned from Makai. Explain please))

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #155 on: October 20, 2011, 01:44:27 PM »
((If I remember correctly. Remilia is in the Outside world, and Byakuren had already returned from Makai. Explain please))

Who said Byakuren had returned? This I swear, it never happened. And oh no! You caught my secret for Remi~ Nanaya talked to Byakuren once during this Arc via her connection. Not her after she returned.

Since you've discovered it, I might as well reveal it all. Notice how Remilia isn't in the fight. Notice how Remilia never just tore through the building if she got corrupted. Chaos would abuse her body, mind and soul if Remilia was a Gensokyan. But Chaos has infected Gensokyo. After taking Keine, it gained knowledge of the vast beings in Gensokyo. And proceeded to make mirror images of them. It's first, trial and most unstable creation was Remilia Scarlet. This is the one The three Ns have seen. Everyone else truely IS from Gensokyo besides this Remilia.

So, most of SDM's main people are gone. And you probably will ask this: What about Meiling? Oh, don't worry. I have special plans for her.
« Last Edit: October 20, 2011, 01:51:15 PM by Youkai Jesus »

<Nietz> Anyway, sex toys alone won't come up to 11k.
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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #156 on: October 21, 2011, 02:19:24 AM »
If Gensokyo's part of the outside world again, that means Kanako has access again to all the faith she has in Gensokyo, right? Which would also mean that she'd know the barrier's gone, right?

Also, when we run into the chaotic versions of ourselves, are they supposed to share personality traits? Like, are they distorted or opposite versions of us personality-wise, or anything like that? Or will they just look like us?

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #157 on: October 23, 2011, 01:22:04 AM »
Bump.

Also, a tip: if people aren't posting for a while, don't wait for them. Some of the participants will drop out without saying anything. I've done a lot of these things before; trust me on this one. If you insist on waiting for everybody, this thing's going to die out before you know it.

Aya Squawkermaru

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #158 on: October 23, 2011, 01:28:17 AM »
Yeah. That, or they become unable to post for awhile. As a person who has been in that latter role (although, I usually alert other players of when I have to drop out or am unable to post for awhile) I can tell you that they don't like making the GM wait on them. From my experience, at least.

Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #159 on: October 23, 2011, 02:46:52 AM »
Bump.

Also, a tip: if people aren't posting for a while, don't wait for them. Some of the participants will drop out without saying anything. I've done a lot of these things before; trust me on this one. If you insist on waiting for everybody, this thing's going to die out before you know it.

Yews read my mind.

And ironically I imagined you'd say it rather than me.

Also. If EoG doesn't get a move on, soon enough I'll be a startin' my own RP.
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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #160 on: October 23, 2011, 04:54:13 AM »
In line with all this, what have you been doing while you aren't playing on Bnet, YJ? If you don't find time to update soon, then chances are you never will. Drag yourself if you have to, and like Guy said, don't wait if you have to, but don't let your RP rot.

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #161 on: October 23, 2011, 04:56:37 AM »
I'm fairly certain she's typing it up as we speak. It's just that she also plays Defense of the Shrine while she types.

Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #162 on: October 23, 2011, 05:08:26 AM »
I knew that. Also,

(OOC: Use strange stone idol.)

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #163 on: October 23, 2011, 08:33:35 AM »
Great. Even more to type. Rejoice! Your longass walls of text with BGMS arr coming today. Give me four hours. I have shit to do. @_@. If there are any plotholes, feel free to inform me of them. Ill answer your queries, whatever they maybe.

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #164 on: October 23, 2011, 12:29:59 PM »
"As I have been your beginning. So shall I be... Your end."

Aesera plummets within herself, Rin's mind, and the everlasting essence of Chaos within. No light is in the place. Aesera stands in the middle of complete darkness, not even able to see her hands when she puts it as close to her face as possible. It's just a dark, silent world in here. She had come this far, and she had to end it. Aesera began to walk, blind and unknowning. Deeper into the darkness of Rin's soul - No. Her very creation. Her existence. It almost seemed like hours of this dreadful silence, only the sound of her own breath echoed through this dark labyrinth. It seemed like an endless hallway rather then a maze. Aesera could go in any direction, but like always, through the torso, towards the heart. Straight.  She walked and walked, her footsteps heavy and almost scrapping against whatever material the floor was made of.

"There is no one left to save you."

>BGM: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3P5n35V3wQM

Aesera begins to run. Not knowning why, she just runs. Deeper and deeper into this lonely, isolated part of existence. A soul could never be this dark, this... Filthy. There was only black and corruption at every corner.  Aesera stops in her tracks. There's a weird sound from above. As if something was crashing down from the skies. If a soul had a sky, that is. Aesera looked up, into the darkness above. And there, a scarlet, shining light plummeting down at Aesera. It's size dictates that it would crush her before she could flee. But this is creation, existence! This is where Rin began. And where Chaos would end. Aesera grits her teeth, bending her arms low and forming the lance once more. But the instant it appears, it shatters apart, as if it was never allowed to enter. However, red energy begins to swirl around Aesera's hands and arms. The energy just like the one the lance was made of. They emit out of her palms like flames, and circle her fists like swirling water. Aesera tilts her head up, slamming her feet down to even the balance as the searing, meteror-like object heads towards her.

"Come!" She shouts, as the fireball of destruction reaches it's destination. Aesera raises her hands up high, right as the meteror hits. She's basically carrying a giant, molten ball. It burns and scorches her palms, the heat wanting to roast her alive. Red tentacles begin to form around the meteror, Aesera screams in pain, falling to her knees as the rock crushes her and ruptures the earth beneath her feet. Fear clouds her mind, but her will pushing on from within her heart. Even as she begins to sink bellow the cracking earth, she shouts and pushes with her strength and might, red energy flaring all across her body. The meteror begins to budge in the other direction, as Aesera shouts and puts her all into it. Rage begins to push against the fear in her mind, and she begins to punch the molten rock. As she punches and punches, her bones begin to crack. Her muscles begin to melt, and she can feel her very soul being burnt into ashes. But this will not stop her. Red energy flows into her body, right as her left arm just breaks apart and shatters like glass. With one last battlecry, Aesera punches the burning rock.

The meteror cracks and bursts into black flames, tentacles and green skulls. They float in the air for just a second, before they implode on themselves.

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"What do you want, Aesera? You have already failed at living once. You are a fool." A deep, rumbling voice says. Chaos.

Aesera lies on the floor, her arm terribly burnt and her body immobile, but still conscious. Rin falls to her knees in front of her, the darkness from her eyes fading away. Chaos has been banished. Aesera shuts her eyes and puts her mind to rest. She has done enough, anymore and only death will await her.

"What do you want, Aesera? You have already failed at living once. But you are my greatest creation." A loud, charismatic voice is heard. Azeri.

"I know you never wanted to do this. Your life was doing alright just the way it was. None of you wanted to do this. Hell, none of you wanted to even be our embodiments. And yet, with that thought, that is what makes you human. The key to salvation is humanity. That is what the Gods never had. As I have said before, I will say it again. All of you will one day, rise above us. And when we sleep till the dawn of the next recreation, the embodiments will be Gods. Mortal Gods. The very contradiction that prevents a paradox. And you, Aesera, you have what the others do not have. An unbreakable will."

Aesera's body begins to shine blue, runic lines begin to trail up her body, making strange symbols in a language unknown. Around her, a circle made of words is formed, and six lances - The ones Aesera could always make, lie in key points of the circles, floating, pointing towards Aesera. A red halo begins to form atop Aesera's head, glowing in spectacular light and power. Aesera's body limply begins to stand, runes cover her entire body, and she opens her mouth, breathing for the first time in this newfound power. This is the power. The power of an angel. Eight tentacles burst out from her black, before fading away and coming back as lines of pure light, forming some sort of shoulder plate on Aesera, before wings sprout from her back. But these wings do not have feathers like one would think an angel would have. These wings were just light. Red light. From the shoulder plate, forms a golden hood which covers Aesera's face. Now, only one lance remains, slowly forming into a sword. It is a plain sword, the blade is purely red, long and tipped with gold, the hilt is a dark blue, with a gem embeded inside. The gem is a shade of gold too. Although it looks plain, it has more power then Aesera's previous lances.

"Your power is that of a savior. And your blade is Auriel, The Sword of Hope."

The power suddenly implodes on Aesera, forcing her onto the ground. She coughs out blood and clutches her chest, right as a black, worm-like object pushes itself out of her throat, forming insect-legs and crawling up to Rin, and melts beside her.

(Aesera is unable to fight now.)
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Sakuya turns from Nazrin's fight. The curves in these arn't going to be able to give her any space. And with Rin down... Sakuya winks at Newan, before disappearing. There, in the place of Sakuya, was Newan. Nazrin blinks a couple of times. Surely this could'nt... The lazers were reaching at Newan at an incredible speed now. The precious seconds Nazrin took to figure out what happened would cost her. She could'nt stop the spellcard fast enough. But Newan was more alert then ever. His blade shot out from his gloves hand, and with a flew wide slashes, blocked the lazers. As they turn, they notice Sakuya standing beside Youmu, pulling her collar.

BGM: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A8uJZ2NLy4Q

"Hello, half-ghost. We meet again." Sakuya throws her towards Newan, who catches her right as his blade deactivates. Sakuya takes this moment to teleport behind Newan, leaving a flash of... Poker cards. With one swift lunge, she stabs Newan with a knife in his back. As Youmu drops to the floor, Newan slumps on Sakuya, his eyes beginning to close. Sakuya puts a finger on Newan's lips as he struggles to say something before he falls into his slumber.

"Shush. Time for you to die." Sakuya pulls another knife from nothing at all, and spins it in front of Newan's closing eyes. "Hmm. Let's paint the floor scarlet." Sakuya raises the knife up high, and brings it down. It connects, piercing Newan's torso cleanly through. The knife then begins to vibrate in Newan's chest, before every vein in his body is cut. Sakuya pulls out the knife, licking the blood from it's steel. "Mmm, just like the Mistress wanted." She drops Newan on the floor, and ignores Nazrin. She's too weak to be a match for her. Looking at Youmu, who has Roukanken out.

"My my, so eager to kill the one who tormented you quite some time ago?" Sakuya grins, and Youmu is silent. They clash, Youmu delivering the first strike as she charges at Sakuya, who blocks the Roukanken with a knife in each hand. She thrusts her arms forward, sending Youmu back. Sakuya runs forward, three knives appearing in each hand. She throws them, flying straight for Youmu's vitals. Youmu jumps back and flies up, Myon following right behind her. As she brings Roukanken to herself, Sakuya appears in a flash, her knives gritting against the katana, steel grinding. Youmu pushes forward, spinning and kicking Sakuya's arm as she launches herself away from Sakuya. Her blade begins to collect pink, pedal-shaped energy. Sakuya lands on the ground, throwing more knives as they fly towards Youmu.

Youmu does a flip in the air, effectively stopping her movement as her feet touch the floor. With a slash, a green, curved wave fires out from Roukanken, repelling the knives and going straight for Sakuya. Sakuya just grins, and jumps up, only to be met with another green wave. However, Sakuya is more then prepared. Time slows around Sakuya, the green wave almost reaching her throat as Sakuya lowers herself. With the wave out, she flies towards Youmu, wielding more knives. The two meet, steel singing in their hands as the long katana and the devilish knives meet. The two of them push against each other, their weapons grinding once more, before they jump back. Youmu is the first to initiate, her blade glowing pink as she swings, firing around eight arrow-shaped, pink beams directly at Sakuya, who dodges each of them perfectly. The beams however, curve and come at Sakuya from behind. Sakuya turns, and Youmu flies up into the sky, her blade now glowing green.

As Sakuya dodges the pink beams over and over, Youmu slashes once more, making many green curves flying at Sakuya. She notices, a knife appearing in each hand as she dashes through, grazing and grazing. The two meet after the onslaught, and their steel sing once more. They exchange blows, and go their seperate ways, Youmu crashing on the ground as a large gash on her arm forms. Sakuya lands on her feet, but not without an injury. A cut running up her arm beginning from her backhand.

Youmu and Sakuya look at each other, Sakuya's eyes filled with rage, while Youmu just stands here, waiting. Myon floats beside her as the Roukanken glows pink once more. Sakuya rushes forward as Youmu pulls out the Hakurouken, and brings them both down, making two long green curved waves that head for Sakuya. She jumps up, just to see hundreds of blue bullets firing straight up from the point of impact. As she grazes and grazes, Youmu runs forward, bringing Hakurouken down. It misses just by an inch as Sakuya moves, but Youmu still has the Roukanken, and she uses it. Another green curve fires out, hitting Sakuya's shoulder and pushing her down. As she slams into the ground, Youmu stands beside her, silent. Rhiseza runs over to Youmu, looking at the struggling Sakuya. Why is she weak now?

Sakuya begins to fidget on the floor, shivering and clawing at her eyes, as if trying to rip them out. Rhiseza looks over Youmu's shoulder, looking at Sakuya. Her eyes are pure black, her knives are shaking in her fingers. Instinctively, Rhiseza bends down, looking at Sakuya. Her eyes rapidly blink, before they stop. Staring blindly into Rhiseza's eyes in a deep gaze, the black arms on Rhiseza glow in their black light. The chains on her body attempt to pry themselves from her body and touch Sakuya. And, without hesitation, they do. As one of the chains touch Sakuya's arm, she begins to glow. Glow in the light of darkness.

Rhiseza stands alone in a dark, isolated room. Two blades, one shorter then the other, are stuck into the ground beside her. This triggers a memory. They're Youmu's blades. The Roukanken and Hakurouken. Rhiseza looks at them, before grabbing each one of them with her b- Wait... Her black arms are gone! So are the chains. Rhiseza looks around her. Only darkness at every side. She strides on and on, but each time she looks back, she always sees the blades. As if they were following her. Or she wasn't walking at all. Rhiseza begins to run, but still she makes no progress. The blades are still behind her, and she possibly had never covered any distance at all. Where... was she anyway?

Rhiseza walked back to the blades, her hand harmlessly floating above the hilt of the longer Roukanken. And, after moments of thinking, she grabs it. Nothing. Not even a sound. She grabs the hilt of the other. Nothing. However, as she begins to pull the blades out of the ground, voices begin to seep from the cracks the blades have made. Voices that penetrated her mind. Voices that will forever haunt her. Vision began to enter her head, clouding her vision. The last thing she saw was the swords vanish....

There she is, alone, lying on the floor. Sakuya, her puffy grey hair covering her face, her hands desperately grab and tug on a man's arm. The man's hair is totally grey, including his beard and mustache. Rhiseza walks closer to Sakuya, looking at her. She's much smaller, and her hair is shorter... And then, Sakuya's voice floods the room.

"I wanted to follow in father's footsteps and be a magician just like him... I was happy... But then that day just had to come. A sparkling, full moon, awoken by the sound of gunshots..."

There, the child-Sakuya stands beside her almost dead father, clutching a knife close to herself, crying. Her father lies there, silent and with a large gash wound on his chest. Slowly, a door is slammed open and another man begins to walk in. His skin is grey, his eyes are hollow and his fingers are claws. As he groans, he walks steadily to the child-Sakuya. Rhiseza stands there, holdiing the two blades of Youmu, silent, fearing that if she did anything, things would not go as planned. The child-Sakuya begins to waver Her hands begin to shake, as the ghoul begins to approach her. Rhiseza takes action. She runs at the ghoul, bringing the Roukanken down, slicing it in half. But the ghoul doesn't get hit. The blade goes silently through it's body like a ghost. She turns to the young Sakuya, who doesn't seem to see her, still shivering in fear as the Ghoul reaches out...

"God help me."

"Sorry, but God's away right now."

Rhiseza looked up towards the voice, but saw nothing. Nothing at all. She turned to the child-Sakuya, stop stood there, astonished by whatever vision her eye was able to capture.  She looked around, nothing. Even the old man's prone body had vanished. Only Sakuya stood there, gazing blindly to the skies above. And then, Rhiseza did the most foolish thing in her life. Bringing Roukanken down, she slashed Sakuya in half. Lightning began to rupture out from the large gash, engulfing Rhiseza. With the light now surrounding her, she managed to look at herself. Her limbs were black, and tentacles were wrapped around them.

"How?! How could you see the illusion through! You are the partner of Youmu... You should not be able to..." The lightning spiraled out of control, pushing Rhiseza further and further up. The voice began to soften as she ascended at great speeds. "How?! HOW?!"

Rhiseza falls to her knees, Youmu gripping on her shoulder, shaking her. Sakuya lies in front of them, smiling. Chaos has been banished.
(Since I gave you da pawah before you used your CC, let it be so.)
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Flandre cracks her hands, standing still, her stone gaze directed at Vante. As she swung her head to the side, her eyes just dripped with venom, that killing instinct. Her target is set. Flandre jumps up, calling for L?vateinn once more, but through the fire and the flames which it once had, all it was surrounded with now was pure, abysmal darkness. Flandre flew directly straight at Vante, her monstrous mouth wide open, her red eyes filled with battle hunger. Flandre charged straight, but was blocked as the Scythe came back, spinning around her. With one, long swing with L?vateinn, Vante's scythe was sent plummeting into the ground, where it promptly make a crack and jammed itself in.

Vante turned to his Scythe, still wielding his twin sticks. The scythe seems to be fading away now, slowly, but surely. Flandre takes this chance to attack, swooping down and swinging L?vateinn. The black flames twirl around Vante, who tries to block L?vateinn with his twin sticks. Why he would do that, who knows, but it was his only hope. He could'nt move, being surrounded by these flames and a bloodthirsty, corrupted vampire grinning in front of him. With a huge weapon.

"I ask! Why? Why are you doing this?"

The Corrupted Flandre halts her assault, but her grip on L?vateinn does not relent. She tilts her head up and looks towards the sky.

"You will never know, Mortal. You will never understand... Only through death and corruption will your race learn!"

BGM: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vhSxqZy0IGE

 Flandre spins around once more, reigniting the black flames and swinging L?vateinn at Vante, who expertly blocks the giant blade-wand with his two sticks. It's unbelievable that they could still retain their strength and endurance even against this weapon of mass destruction. Vante, begins to push Flandre back, using the strength of his armor to his advantage, Vante manages to just be a wall, slowly moving back, resisting the black flames. He is the only one who is protected by magical damage due to his armor. Strong physical attacks can skill penetrate the armor, as shown in his earlier fight with Meira.

With two swift strikes, Vante forces Flandre's grip on L?vateinn to falter just for a moment, allowing space to step in and hold down L?vateinn as much as possible. If it managed to get a clean hit on his chest or face, it would be all over. Vante releases his grip on one of the sticks, before his hand grabs down on L?vateinn, pushing it further with his strength. He was never this strong, even with the armor and powers granted to him. Why was he able to hold off this being of destruction? Vante's mouth opened, panting. The black flames scorched his hands, but that only made his grip tighter.

"Tell me! Why do you want everything dead and gone?!" Vante begins to grit his teeth from the pain. The armor over his hands begins to glow black from the immense heat. "You corrupt countless people! You murder everything in your path! What do you want to achieve?!"

Flandre's monstrous mouth snaps open, leaking black acid as she forces herself to pull L?vateinn up. With a battlecry, she pushes Vante over and pulls L?vateinn from his grasp. Flandre jumps up into the sky, shouting and screaming in that low, growling voice. The crystals on her wings burst into black flames, and so do her arms. She stares back at Vante, with a look of pure venom. She opens her mouth and roars, sounding like a thousand screams and howls. Just like how she "competed" with Mystia earlier. Flandre shakes her head violently, before growling, pulling L?vateinn closer to herself.

"Mortal! You can never comprehend our intentions!"

Flandre shouts, throwing L?vateinn straight at Vante. Vante jumps in, reducing the space between Flandre and Himself. Putting his arms up, he slams Flandre down to the ground, using gravity to his advantage as his entire body pushes the vampire into the rubble. As she lands on the ground, you do so too, now standing right above her. As you look down, Flandre begins to smile. Suddenly, Vante clutches his chest, falling to his knees right above Flandre. His armor begins to crack, pieces begin to fall off him his torso and shoulders.

"You may be an embodiment. But your chosen partners were never needed to fight us! To fight Chaos! They are a boon, and a bane, to us. Not even we know why the Children had to give you allies from Gensokyo. We can easily corrupt them all. And if we kill them, the embodiments die too."

That's right.

Why were each and every one of you paired up with a specific Gensokyan? What was it's purpose? If they were not ment to fight Chaos, what were they ment to do? Why were they even here?

So many questions, but so few answers. And every answer brings about new questions.

The stone idol drops out of a crack in your armor, landing beside Flandre. She doesn't seem to notice it as she grins wider and begins to laugh. "Listen, boy. Submit to us, and we will spare you of this misery. This plight. I promise that you will live a peaceful life under our rule."

Vante droops his head down, blood beginning to leak from a sudden emergence of a large slash in his chest. As he tilts his head to the right slightly, he notices Mystia. Lying on the floor, injured god knows when. Maybe during the fight. Blue crystals are impaled directly in her chest, about seven of them all in the same area.

Knowledge is what you seek, my creation. I was never the wisest of the four, or the most... respectable. I am Vuen, lastborn of God. And I will give you the knowledge... Of our plans.

Vante shivers, before colapsing on Flandre, who shouts for her final time. "Mortal! H-"

Vante stands alongside a white piece of armor. His own armor, walking and looking at Vante as they strolled deeper into the darkness of Flandre's soul. "You, my friend, are the most lucky of the others. You don't have to be put to the task of saving Flandre from Corruption. Hell, I'll do it for you." The armor grabs Vante's shoulder and shakes him slightly. "All of you want to know, why your partners have been useless so far. And let me tell you this. They are  not useless. They were not chosen to help you fight Chaos, but chosen to defeat something that awoke Chaos from it's peaceful slumber. Chaos was never evil! It was what made every mortal different. Their personalities, their likings, their favourites, they sins, and their kindness. Everything that differs from person to person is Chaos. Without Chaos, there would be no Life. And without Life, no Chaos."

The armor seems to sigh as it continues on. "The universe is split into three parts. The Creation, which is where all of this expanding galaxies are. The Astral/Elemental Plane, a completely different dimension where all of us rule and live. And the last part, The Evolution. That is where Chaos resides. It has a ruler, a kind hearted man of great power, rivaling God himself. But, a fraction of Chaos were rebelling against them, and they somehow managed to seal the ruler of Chaos, and gain his powers, now having conquered the entire dimension of Chaos, is proceeding to corrupt The Creation. Once done, they shall come to us."

"Gensokyo was made as a sacred land for one certain being to exist. The Dragon God. His name is Imagination. As he is what gives every human the power of creativity and thought. Yukari and the first Hakurei never knew that creating the barrier would trigger Chaos' invasion to accelerate a billion times faster. That was their first mistake. Their second mistake was sealing every "evil" youkai within Makai. By doing this, they sealed the unfortunate protectorates of Gensokyo, effectively leaving the border almost defenseless. If the border breaks and Imagination dies, Chaos can freely corrupt every mortal on Earth, before the entire universe."

"Whoever sparked the revolution for Chaos is the one controlling all of this. And your partners are key to stopping it. My siblings have suspicions on who it could be, but we have no confirmed evidence, so you have to find out on your own. Because us Gods, cannot touch Chaos, as Azeri has explained to Aesera." Just then, the armor seems to fade. It looks at it's slowing turning non-existent hands and sigh.

"Looks like my time in here is running out. Don't worry about Flandre or yourself or Mystia. I've healed you all at the cost of your Chaotic connection." The armor turns away. "Oh yes, and this excess energy from the connection... It should take effect soon after you wake." Vante, who had been silent for the whole encounter, opened his mouth, only being about to say one sentence.

"Thanks, Vuen." The armor seems to brighten up.

"Don't mention it, Vante. Now go, go and make us proud."

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Mokou and Cirno, glaring at each other, standing still and silent. Mokou's wounds were beginning to heal, and Cirno just stood there, waiting. Waiting.

"Immortal. Oh how long it as been to taste the flesh of one."

Mokou brushes her shoulder. "Psh. Like ya' can just try."

Cirno throws her head back, laughing heartily. "Immortal! You will make a great game today. Come, let us play..."

Cirno held her hand up, laughing and laughing as a sphere of ice began to form. "Denizens of Ice! Come to me!" From the ground, water began to leak up, forming small puddles on the floor. The sphere of Ice in Cirno's hand slowly began to widen too. The puddles froze over in a matter of seconds once they were in Cirno's gaze. Bulky rocks from the ground begin to rupture out, swirling around Cirno as they freeze, forming rising, black, crystalized beings. Tentacles cover their backs, and they have the same heads as the first few Chaotic Spawns that the others have seen before. Cirno laughs and laughs, the sphere in her hand finally taking form.

BGM: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EK2Gi5_C8wY

It has a long hilt, and a thick, rectangular head. A hammer. But not just any hammer. The earth around her seems to erupt more, burning hot magna spewing out slowly. As the magna reaches about a step of Cirno, it begins to turn blue, and cold. Very cold. The magma floats up and connects itself to the hammer, as many spikes of ice burst from the hammer, making it look more like a rectangular mace. Cirno's wings beat as her body begins to float. The Icy, Chaotic spawns rush themselves towards Mokou, only to be punched, kicked, and melted as Mokou began to walk, grinning as her body ignites with rejuvenated flames.

Cirno's ice wings flap and emit cold air, being visible in this red sky. Mokou's own, phoenix wings of eternal flames, beat on their own rhythm. Cirno and Mokou glare at each other, for the final time, and they charge. Mokou does a swift jump up, throwing her entire body with her right arm outstretched. Cirno pulls back her left arm, and in range, lets it fly forward. Their moves connect, their fists clashing against each other as Fire and Ice wrap around each other, each threatening to burn the other. Cirno jumps back, slamming her fists together as she throws up the hammer. Mokou rushes in, her entire body in blazing flames. Cirno effectively blocks around four punches before the hammer slams down in between the duo. Cirno kicks the hammer right as it lands, sending it flying at Mokou.

It whizzes through the air, cutting through the still-floating rocks, slicing the air as cold, frozen over air takes it's place. Mokou turns and runs, the hammer just rushing towards her, ignoring the apparent factors of gravity and physics. After a distance, Mokou spins around, her hand blazing with fires redder then even the sun. As her hand touches the hammer's hilt, she forces her fingers around it, catching it in mid-air. The frost and flame mingle around each other in a deadly dance, before each strikes out at the other, lunging with their fiery and cold tongues.  Mokou jerks violently as the hammer vibrates, the cold air seeming to devour her flames. Ice begins to form on her backhand, and finally, Mokou releases her grip, forcing her hand shut from the burning sensation. It's cold. In a burst of flames, the ice melts, and Mokou looks up at Cirno, who has the hammer in hand now. The frozen angel smirks, spinning the hammer in her hands.

"If you can't even hold Cryurion, what do you hope to achieve with battling me?"

"So you named your little toy? How old are you?"

Cirno makes an annoyed tsh, her free hand turning into a fist rather quickly after. She throws Cryurion into the skies once more, thrusting one hand forward, before a small of ice forms in it. Cirno throws the ball at Mokou. The immortal begins to glide towards Cirno, her flaming wings beating, scorching waves of fire emit from them, dashing forward and melting all the ice in the way. The ball, however, does not melt. As a single drop of water forms on the ball, it shatters into a wall of frozen icicles. Mokou is caught unaware, stopping her movement before making a sharp ascent. Cirno waves her hand, and the Icicles follow her. Mokou and the icicles accelerate fairly quickly, higher and higher into the skies they go, until they are surposedly out of view of Cirno. Just then, Mokou spins, her wings twirling around her body.

"I will show ya' what da' years have taught me!"

As the flames spiral around Mokou, they form a sort of lance, pointed at the tip, around Mokou's head. Her legs are supported by a huge column of fire,, before Mokou falls, letting gravity pull her to Cirno. Wings of flames burst from the sides of the makeshift lance, trailing down so fast that they actually thin down, making just a row of flame, making the lance look more like an arrow. As Mokou plummets towards Cirno, she notices that Cirno just stands there, looking at her. Laughing, Cryurion in hand.

"I'll play your fucking game, Immortal!"

Cirno shatters Cryurion's hilt, grabbing just the hammer's head itself, as black and blue tentacles burst from the ground, covering Cirno's arms. Cryurion begins to melt with her hand, forming a big, spiked gauntlet. As Mokou pierces through the air as she comes into range, her flames, instead of weakening, grow larger, inflaming the air around her, making it spark and burn. Cirno pulls her arm back, and thrusts her body forward, breaking the sound barrier right after she jumps. The two meet in mid-air, Mokou going head-first into Cirno's makeshift gauntlet. The two collide in a massive, spark-shaped explosion of blue and red. Shockwaves echo through the battlefield, shocking those still conscious, and making the silent, unmoving Patchouli tremble.

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Mokou lies on the ground, exhausted, weak, and broken. Cirno stands beside her, grinning as her completely burnt arm begins to regenerate with help of the blue-black tentacles that emerged from the ground. She bends down, looking at the immortal's face, still having that smirk on her own.

"Death, has finally caught up to you, Immortal."

"...N-Not... Ye...t..."

A loud piercing sound is heard, before things begin to crack and shatter. A large, yellow blade penetrated Cirno's defenses, cutting cleanly through her entire midsection. The pulsating energy blade sears and melts her insides, but physical damage is only the tip of the iceberg. As the now-alive Newan pulls out his blade, gold armor begins to form on his entire right arm and shoulder. With runic words written all over the gold metal, wind begins to form around Newan, covering his yellow sword. The gems on his armor and glove turn white, and as the winds push themselves apart, his blade is now blue. Blue, with a wicked edge. It's once, straightforward, sharp tip is replaced by a scythe-like blue claw. A claw with one jagged finger. As Newan impales Cirno's back once more with the weapon, he sighs, before pulling it out. But what he pulled out was none other then Chaos. A black, swirling substance which looked much like an orb covered with Tentacles burst from Cirno's back, forming into a shape much like the Chaotic Spawns. It lacks a green skull, though. Newan sighs once more, and the Chaos melts while impaled in his blade. As Newan too, colapses on his knees, his blade turns into the straight, yellow one it once was.

(Changable blades~!)
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Hirenko stood silent in the middle of the battle, looking at the carnage just these Corrupted people from Gensokyo have wrought. Rumia stands beside her, the Antichrist blade whispering tidings of doom to all those who could come near. Hirenko gripped her blade tighter, feeling it's eldtrich energy just pulsate within her hand. Back in the clocktower of the school, time itself had stopped. The swirling vortex had broken through the spacetime continuum just like how Sakuya can. Daiyousei roared in agony as the danmaku barrage rained down upon her, and burnt her green, energy-body even as they dissipate. With a long, low growl, the vortex bursts outward, engulfing Alice, Alyssa and Daiyousei herself in a giant burst of light.

Gale looked around in the darkness, avoiding the constant needles and danmaku that emerge from them. He could hear the annoying laughter from Koakuma, the crackling of her third eye. The deep breathing of a recovering Orin. Koakuma could possibly be the weakest, yet the most dangerous of the enemies that everyone fought. Along with the barrier's noise whenever Gale's light orbs hit, the shattering of nearby glass and crushing of rubble slowly began to grow. Things were happening outside. Things that he didn't know. Maybe the others had died. Maybe they lost, hell, maybe they won. Gale had to end it in a move, I mean, he had been given this power for a reason, and that would probably be to end Koakuma. Analysis.

She could pull souls out of their bodies. She can make needles and danmaku. She has an eye on her chest that gives her energy. She's impulsive and not that bright. She's also annoying and a pain in the ass. Clearly, this meant only one thing. Gale was surrounded by darkness, right? His body and his entire being was light. They could. No, scientifically, light is "stronger" then darkness. And so, it will work.

Patchouli floated around the battlefield, ruins all around her. Flandre, Cirno, Sakuya, even Rin, were down. The embodiments were stronger then expected, and their ability to remove Chaos from it's host's body was completely unexpected. It caught Chaos off guard, and then could mean the end for them. It never even began, yet. Patchouli landed on the ground, fear slowly creeping up her once-expressionless face. Chaos feared, but it knew, that eventually, it would win. Chaos could never die, Patchouli took slow steps back, her hands began to shake. The crystals on her dress began to tremble too. Fear filled her mind. Torment ran down her veins. Agony pulsed in her heart. Despair clasped her soul. Chaos was beginning to relent from it's own doing. It made Fear. It made Despair. It was the seven sins in one being. It was Evil itself. And yet...

Blood spilled over the ground. Black tentacles whose appearance almost exactly matches Chaos' own flung themselves out of the wound. The purple-haired girl looked down at her chest, feeling for a wound that could never be touched. Hirenko pulled her shadow blade out, along with a small, black orb. The crystals on Patchouli broke, split into a thousand pierces, and literally evaporated in the air. The now-clothless girl closed her eyes slowly, shutting the world away, as she fell on the ground. The orb pierced by the blade screamed and writhed in agony, before it broke into four, falling on the ground, squirming and melting.

All was silent in the field of ruin.

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Alyssa kneeled on the ground beside Alice, crying as Mira pulled gently on her shoulder, trying to comfort her with words that could never be heard. Shanghai and Hourai laid around  Alice, looking as dead as their master. Daiyousei, whose features are now visible even under that teal skin, leaned back on a pile of clockwork, her right arm and torso have been impaled by lances, still sticking out of her body. Slowly, she pulled the lances out one by one, revealing Danmaku burns on her own, real skin. The lances penetrated the teal energy.

As the last lance plops on the ground, Daiyousei's wounds begin to bleed. Blood flows down, covering the teal energy with a scarlet tint.

"W-We... Cannot lose... We are Chaos..." Daiyousei turns to the horizon, looking out of the shattered glass window.

"The Experiment has left. We have failed. She cannot hold..."

Daiyousei shuts her eyes, the teal energy compacting and releasing itself in every direction, threatening to burn the two girls into ashes. As Alyssa stares at the oncoming teal wave with tears in her eyes, a lone figure rises from the rubble and clockwork. It's hand outstretched, the teal waves pass harmlessly over the being, blocking Alyssa and Alice.

"You never had a connection. So I am here to save you." The figure turns it's head, looking at the little girl. "I am the Ethereal Seeker." The teal energy fades, and the figure begins to fade into existence like the teal energy. "My embodiment was never here. Yet. It'll come in time, little girl. Treat this as my favour to you."

The being fades away, and Alyssa appears in the ruined battlefield, along with the dolls and the unconscious Alice Margatroid. A lying Vante is quite near, and Gale stands above him.
-

Koakuma and Daiyousei's bodies lie parallel to each other, their breaths heavy, but steady.

Chaos is gone. But everything else is in ruins. The red sky fades back into dark blue.

The Time is 00:00.

The entire group, even the other Gensokyans, are in front of a shrine. The Hakurei Shrine.

Welcome to Gensokyo.

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #165 on: October 23, 2011, 11:47:49 PM »
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(Will continue. Give me a break ;_;)

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #166 on: October 24, 2011, 01:43:39 AM »
If Gensokyo's part of the outside world again, that means Kanako has access again to all the faith she has in Gensokyo, right? Which would also mean that she'd know the barrier's gone, right?

Also, when we run into the chaotic versions of ourselves, are they supposed to share personality traits? Like, are they distorted or opposite versions of us personality-wise, or anything like that? Or will they just look like us?

Also, using the chaotic connection is supposed to result in some sort of power, right? What did Aesera get?

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #167 on: October 24, 2011, 02:10:50 AM »
Give me a breaaaaak ;_; I'll finish it today. And answer your questions soon.

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #168 on: October 24, 2011, 04:01:25 AM »
...Did I just game over? Sad face. ;_;

Unless it goes to Newan's subconscious again and Xera's all "Nope, not gonna happen" or something, but I guess I'll have to wait and see.

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #169 on: October 24, 2011, 05:53:49 AM »
Holy shit this is long ;_;

Finished Aesera and Rhiseza. Moving on to Vante

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #170 on: October 24, 2011, 12:06:02 PM »
((Btw. I don't want to use my Chaotic Connection yet.))
((Will post something soon enough. I'm just not sure if YJ wants Cirno to be portrayed a certain way or not))
((Also. I repeat I do NOT want to use my Chaotic Connection))
((Do NOT Want!))

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #171 on: October 25, 2011, 03:48:20 PM »
This is taking longer then expected. Sadly, none of you are allowed to post until I am done. Hmm. So, still no questions on the plot and stuff? Also, finished Vante's part, revealing many key parts of Act Two and stuff.

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #172 on: October 25, 2011, 09:00:10 PM »
((Question. How many Chaotic Connections are you going to use up in this fight?))
((Is this going to be one of the tougher battles? Like, the toughest ones?))

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #173 on: October 26, 2011, 01:04:52 AM »
Techniqually, I have to use almost everyone's. And for the toughness of the fights, maybe, maybe not.

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #174 on: October 26, 2011, 01:10:01 AM »
((Why do you need to use almost all of them? : Since I cant see the reason behind it atm))

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #175 on: October 27, 2011, 12:01:32 PM »
After I leave tomorrow I'll only be back at home at like Monday or Sunday. So yeah just a heads up.
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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #176 on: October 27, 2011, 12:50:53 PM »
BLARGH THESE PEOPLE.

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #177 on: October 29, 2011, 03:20:16 PM »
Hey Kat. Idk if you'll get this, but me and Squawks discussed, and we bot think that the constant fighting is getting to be an annoyance.
I told him about my ideas and hopes for Arc 3, when we return to Gensokyo.
I'm hoping that we'll get a bit of time to relax for a moment. Return home, chill out, meet or greet those who we haven't seen in a while.
That our characters will be able to explore Gensokyo a bit, so we can know our turf.
I personally want Ranna to go to the netherworld so she can talk to her parents. Possibly meet Akyuu afterwards so she can learn about Gensokyo.
Squawks would like to also go to the netherworld so that he can have Newan talk to Nagisa.
I think everyone needs some training aswell.
So I think you should slow things down a little. Give some time for some character development and a bit of shenanigans.
Orin prolly is worried about Satori and Okuu. Youmu is prolly worried about Yuyuko. Nazrin is prolly worried about Shou. Kanako worried about Sanae and vice versa. Mystia is worried about her shop. Alice worried about her house.
We need a bit of time to slow down and relax and not get our guts ripped out.
Also if I may suggest, I've envisioned this scene for a while now, but when we get back to gensokyo, Byakuren should arrange a sorta swimming event, to relax and destress us. We'd go swimming and have a good time. Shenanigans are prolly inevitable.
But yeah. Fight fight fight fight gets really tiresome. That's why i despise Bleach.
Please do take this into consideration. -bows-

I'm guessing all of you have been thinking the same thing. About the shitloads of fighting and stuff. It's practically a war. However, of course, I've planned for whatever said above to be workin' I actually only accelerated this a lot because of the number of reserves we have. But, the constant fighting, as I know, Will and always be, somewhat of an issue. Do not worry, Arc III is more calm, more peaceful, and It'll only have one fight. At the end. The very end.

Arc III will also have it's own set of rules, as I will be permanently raising the standards that will be just touching the borders for Act Two.

If anymore of you have any queries, feel free to ask me. PM or not, It's alright. Also, the current fight will end right after I finish typing. And then, Gensokyo time.

Edit: It's done. Crow, you will get your skills after all this long character developement session. And also, I didn't put Gale's fight scene because I wanted a more "UNSEEN AWESOMENESS" thing~. Of course, if you request me too, I can write it in.
« Last Edit: October 29, 2011, 03:49:16 PM by Youkai Jesus »

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #178 on: October 29, 2011, 04:01:17 PM »
New Rules

1. Post Length

RPG Posts should be of adequate length, a minimum of 200 words, approximately seven lines. Posts that are just one or two lines in length are not acceptable. They don't help move the plot along in any way, and do nothing to help other characters either. On similar notes, scripts are not allowed, nor are lines of just dialogue. Equally, people cannot have 'posting conversations' where they hit refresh and post straight after someone else, and the two (or more) continue this so they have blocks of just them posting conversations between their characters.

For instance, posts such as:
"Sure you can" Said Tim

Are not allowed. Give your posts detail; add feeling, emotions and descriptions! Without these, an RPG might as well just be a conversation between two or more people, and it's just boring. Think of RPs as a story; without the details and your character's feelings, it would just be a conversation with nothing exiting happening. An RPG isn't just about moving a story along; it's also about your own character going on a journey, growing and developing, experiencing everything themselves in their own way. Each character will be thinking and feeling different things, so their experience is unique and different to everyone else's, which is what makes them special!


Alternatively, posts should NOT look like this, either:
Alex: Where did you find that Omanyte fossil?
Shannon: I stole it.
Alex: Oh. Well, that was stupid.

That is called script, and is not, in any way, allowed. If it's an MSN conversation or something like it makes sense, but otherwise, no, not up for debate.


So please make your post longer and more detailed, with description and feeling, and make it interesting! It's just going to be boring otherwise! I would say a fair minimum amount of lines would be around seven, shorter than that I would personally consider a waste of time, and you're better off not posting.

I hope this doesn't need to be repeated in the future.

2. Bunnying

Bunnying is taking control of another person's character and making them do or say things without the permission of the original creator. This can be difficult on forums such as these, as we do not allow conversations to take place over several posts. If we did, RPGs would go on forever and never get anywhere. Which is why we allow bunnying so long as it is only for moving along the plot or scene. Forcing a character to go somewhere, or do something, or do a lot of things over one or two posts is not allowed. Anything involving another persons character must be done in that characters style, with their personality.

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Add more "fluffyness" to your posts, a post such as a simple remark like,

(The second person to arrive was a new sight. Unlike the rest, this one wasn't mortal. Sisturnia looked at Alurmi, studying her unique features. "You know, I've been thinking that maybe only the forces of nature can help win the Sword of Destiny. With your coming, this makes it even more promising)

To...

(Indeed, someone else has. The second recipient was a strange yet beautiful sight to behold, nothing like any other race. A being of pure crystal.
"Hmm, I recognise you, somehow..." Sisturnia wondered, studying Alurmi's crystalline features with curiosity. "I could swear that once while I was gathering supplies for a ritual, I sensed an ancient presence, one that held the very wisdom of the ages. You give off that very same presence. A crystal Elemental, eh? Incidentally, I hear Mornain had quite a skill with turning things to diamond, if that is in fact true. You know, I've pondered lately, wondering if only the ancient forces of nature can win back the Sword of Destiny. Your arrival makes that proposition more promising than ever. I know you have never done something like this before, but perhaps you can consider that there are others in your very situation.")

And hell, the reply could even be shitloads long! Add more fluffyness!

(As the second one to arrive, Sisturnia had greeted me with respect. Much, much more then what she would give to an ordinary arrival. But it was too much, I never deserved this kind of respect. I did nothing to get it...

Along with great hospitality, this was actually enjoyable~

Hmm, I recognise you, somehow..." Sisturnia had said, all the while studying my crystalline features with curiosity. "I could swear that once while I was gathering supplies for a ritual, I sensed an ancient presence, one that held the very wisdom of the ages. You give off that very same presence. A crystal Elemental, eh? Incidentally, I hear Mornain had quite a skill with turning things to diamond, if that is in fact true. You know, I've pondered lately, wondering if only the ancient forces of nature can win back the Sword of Destiny. Your arrival makes that proposition more promising than ever. I know you have never done something like this before, but perhaps you can consider that there are others in your very situation."

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With a slight chuckle, I bow yet again at her compliment. Specifically the one about having much wisdom.

"Yes, I lived in Avalon. Ventured here years ago..." With a sigh, Alurmi turned away for a brief moment, remembering the blind bird that had arrived to her residence. The bird had given her the letter last, even though she was the closest. Surpressing the need to ask for later, Alurmi continued.

"I doubt there are... Others, in my situation, if you mean by my race." Alurmi gracefully pulled her hand up into the air, waving it around gently as the air around her hand began to form tiny, visible crystals.

"I... I am the only, intelligent Elemental in these lands. Or the lands which I have ventured in, which would be most of this continent which I have grow to love so dear." Alurmi sighed again, that constant sighing starting to make her look like a melancholic girl.)

This reply is written by me. Ever single one of my posts are at least this long. You do not have to follow how long I write, But you do have to write at least 200 words. With the allowance of Bunnying, you can now control ANY other character to an extent, even other Player's Characters. Just don't go too far. I've also allowed you to make up your own scenarios. Like how Sonae did earlier in the Dungeon-Crawler style Text RP. With the clock being 66:66:66, and other stuff. You can even encounter anything you want. The plot will now twist and turn the way all of you meld it to be.

Arc Three Begins

Will this be the end of all things?

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Re: The Elements Of Gensokyo: Act One, Arc 2ED and 3
« Reply #179 on: October 29, 2011, 04:32:26 PM »
Wait... Act Three begins? What happened to Act Two? Or finishing Act One? /so confused