Anything is possible when thou practiceth the way of Tao and forsake wretched Buddhism.
Almost!
'-Eth' is a 3rd person suffix, and should be replaced with 'est.' Unfortunately for us, 'ignorest,' 'lookest,' and 'practicest' don't sound very nice. Maybe 'dost not heed' and 'followest?' I'm pretty sure 'looketh' can just become 'look.'
I think you might be able to use more 'art's as well, but I'm not too sure about the grammar behind that word.
I wish I was a bit more fluent in this stuff.
But, uh, on topic! >_>
The Ten Desires music has grown on me really quickly. I was surprised. Stage 4, Miko's theme, and Mamizou's theme are great.
Unfortunately, I still don't see much worth in the themes for Kaku and Futo. And I think in general, the only thing I like about Kaku is how she's all blue and owns Yoshika. Her theme and danmaku aren't too great, and I feel like Yoshika actually is more interesting.
Tojiko's still my favorite new character in this game. :Y