Go for some Saya no Uta.
No seriously, it's got quite a good story.
The reason why I didn't already suggest this is because I think Ghaleon's already played it. :V
you could try narcissus.its free.
I haven't, in my life, attempted a story of romance.
HOWEVER, when I was in school, people had this conception that if you liked Shakespear, you were smart. So like half my grade was pretending to enjoy it at one point or another, pretty pathetic IMO.=3c (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z7TODsQyx_k)
omg u guiz r we tlkan bout da VNs cause den liek evry1 shud paly dis wun its da bestest n MOStDEEP VN u'll EVUR REED!! (http://www.shrinemaiden.org/forum/index.php/topic,5728.0.html)
also technically it is romance :smug:
Oh hey Type Moon isn't dead (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wZrgId0ZUuE&playnext=1&list=PL433444F59D936840)
Holy shit, Aoko backstory?!You know this was technically the first story Nasu ever wrote :derp:
What the hell is this shit, Type-Moon, you on crack?!
You know this was technically the first story Nasu ever wrote :derp:
In other words their success comes from being random ?Not at all actually. Tsukihime and Fate both appeal to males and the previously mentioned combination of stuff hits all the right notes. Attractive women, powerful shounen manga like abilities, an unpredictable plot that keeps you locked in the story, and the fact that it stood out from many other VNs, all contributed greatly to it's success.