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~Hakurei Shrine~ => Alice's Art Atelier => Topic started by: Alice★f on March 12, 2010, 06:18:38 AM

Title: [Art] Lines of GreenVirus
Post by: Alice★f on March 12, 2010, 06:18:38 AM
Hello, everyone. I've been drawing digitally since September 1st of 2007.


Now two things you should know about me:
1. I work very slow.
2. I work very FUCKING slow.

3. It's not over 'till it's over. That said, I do not upload until finals are complete.Here's my latest:

I did the drawing in November 2009.

I started lineart in December 2009.
I started coloring in January 2010.
...and I have not finished since. It's March 2010 and I'm stuck. So, I need your help.

Problems:
I do not understand how to shade Reimu's dress. Light source is described in second image.
I need to fix Reimu's chest. I do not know how to begin fixing...

And obviously, her right hand needs a fix, but I can do that myself.

These are the points that are keeping me from finishing.

Lineart:
(http://tsundereworks.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/reimu-vs-okuu-lineart-thumb.png)
http://tsundereworks.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/reimu-vs-okuu-lineart.png

Color (January):
(http://tsundereworks.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/reimu-vs-okuu-first-thumb.png)
http://tsundereworks.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/reimu-vs-okuu-first.png

Light Source:
(http://tsundereworks.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/light-source-thumb.png)
http://tsundereworks.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/light-source.jpg

Color (March): (I feel like I messed up bad...)
(http://tsundereworks.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/reimu-vs-okuu-color-thumb.png)
http://tsundereworks.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/reimu-vs-okuu-color.png

Please click the links for high resolution. Feel free to contact me @ greenvirus.deviantart.com
All help and feedback is appreciated. Thank you. Help Reimu become beautiful.

Now if you'll excuse me, I shall try to 1cc PCB. =/
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Title: Re: [Art] Lines of GreenVirus
Post by: ♛ Apher-Forte on March 13, 2010, 03:00:46 AM
hmmm


well, Greenvirus I think I seen you on the boards before (poosh), and I liked your digital works.

I am picky with body shapes so I should tell you that is not how the female ribcage works, it is too chunky for a girl and the breasts look pasted on.

I think the rest are pretty okay as a whole, the head may be a bit wide. If you trying the anime look you should shrink the way she has a wide head, and give her a wide face instead. As it is, the concept is there, but the head has no volume if you understand.

keep up the good work!
Title: Re: [Art] Lines of GreenVirus
Post by: Alice★f on March 19, 2010, 05:05:42 AM
hmmm


well, Greenvirus I think I seen you on the boards before (poosh), and I liked your digital works.

I am picky with body shapes so I should tell you that is not how the female ribcage works, it is too chunky for a girl and the breasts look pasted on.

I think the rest are pretty okay as a whole, the head may be a bit wide. If you trying the anime look you should shrink the way she has a wide head, and give her a wide face instead. As it is, the concept is there, but the head has no volume if you understand.

keep up the good work!

Thank you very much. I will keep you updated when I do something new to the drawing. I guess it's time to dig out the anatomy books then! ^_^

/i never knew how the female torso worked ;_;
Title: Re: [Art] Lines of GreenVirus
Post by: Autumn on March 19, 2010, 06:19:07 AM
Thank you very much. I will keep you updated when I do something new to the drawing. I guess it's time to dig out the anatomy books then! ^_^

/i never knew how the female torso worked ;_;

But the lines and coloring are very nice.^^
Title: Re: [Art] Lines of GreenVirus
Post by: Alice★f on March 22, 2010, 12:33:01 AM
But the lines and coloring are very nice.^^
Thank you so much

However, Okuu is determined to finish