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~Hakurei Shrine~ => Alice's Art Atelier => Topic started by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 14, 2013, 08:51:28 PM

Title: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 14, 2013, 08:51:28 PM
I like to draw, even though I'm not very good at it.  :ohdear:

Regardless, I want to post my stuff. I don't draw Touhou that often, but I'll keep this updated with all my poop.

(also i dont have a scanner so i just take pictures with my iphone sorry)

Here's a Satori to start.

(http://imageshack.us/a/img545/188/1vvb.th.jpg) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/545/1vvb.jpg/)
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Kaze_Senshi on June 14, 2013, 09:13:43 PM
Hohohoho oho someone without scanner like me :P

Anyway it looks pretty good, you should valorize more your art and rotate your picture 90 degrees clockwise :O
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 14, 2013, 09:15:06 PM
Hohohoho oho someone without scanner like me :P

Anyway it looks pretty good, you should valorize more your art and rotate your picture 90 degrees clockwise :O
It's rotated on Imageshack.  :colbert:

The only reason why I put a filter on it is because it looks even worse without one.
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 14, 2013, 09:22:54 PM
Here are some crummy Instagram 2hus.

They're a little old, too. The Reimu is from a few months ago and whatshermermaid is from a couple weeks ago.

(http://imageshack.us/a/img707/6366/2p5b.jpg) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/707/2p5b.jpg/)

(http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/9394/b4ni.jpg) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/705/b4ni.jpg/)
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: pineyappled on June 14, 2013, 09:48:37 PM
I like the Reimu the most. Try using Paint.net or something similar to edit the colors instead of Instagram.
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 14, 2013, 09:50:58 PM
I like the Reimu the most. Try using Paint.net or something similar to edit the colors instead of Instagram.
I'll have to try that.

With the Instagram ones, I had only used it 'cause that was the only way to post the pictures efficiently to my blog. I know better now. Sort of.
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: HakureiSM on June 14, 2013, 09:54:12 PM
Don't use instagram mode pls
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Vyrien on June 14, 2013, 09:55:18 PM
You drew Satori so Vyrien approves +10

Keep it up, although instagram filter sux

and haku is a speedy shit
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Derpius Maximus on June 15, 2013, 09:59:45 AM
:O:O:O

The eyes are the most expressive part of the face.  I'm happy you put shadows around there to help draw our attention to them. It looks really good~

I haven't drawn in pencil in ages, so my input will be pretty minimal but you can probably improve the line quality if you try to practice making one large stroke instead of lots of little short ones when you draw.  I remember I used to do that and it resulted in kind of "hairy lines" OTL...

Also post something with colour?
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Delfigamer on June 15, 2013, 11:45:47 AM
you can probably improve the line quality if you try to practice making one large stroke instead of lots of little short ones when you draw.  I remember I used to do that and it resulted in kind of "hairy lines" OTL...
Erm (http://img-fotki.yandex.ru/get/4116/110955323.7/0_afe5d_7bfe4405_orig)...
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Derpius Maximus on June 15, 2013, 12:00:29 PM
Erm (http://img-fotki.yandex.ru/get/4116/110955323.7/0_afe5d_7bfe4405_orig)...

use a ruler and a sharper pencil?
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Delfigamer on June 15, 2013, 12:21:06 PM
No.
Quote
lots of little short ones
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Vyrien on June 15, 2013, 12:43:40 PM
Erm (http://img-fotki.yandex.ru/get/4116/110955323.7/0_afe5d_7bfe4405_orig)...

What on Earth is the point you're trying to make?
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Delfigamer on June 15, 2013, 01:03:01 PM
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you can probably improve the line quality if you try to practice making one large stroke instead of lots of little short ones when you draw
I am trying to say I don't fully agree with this.
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: pasu on June 15, 2013, 02:03:09 PM
actually yes longer strokes are better because you have the freedom to decide on line width and variety (and look neater)

agreeding with what maximum has said, nice job with shadowing the eyes to highlight them
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Vento on June 15, 2013, 02:14:56 PM
what is the picture with  incorrect perspective trying to prove
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Delfigamer on June 15, 2013, 04:23:56 PM
what is the picture with  incorrect perspective trying to prove
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you can probably improve the line quality if you try to practice making one large stroke instead of lots of little short ones when you draw
I am trying to say I don't fully agree with this.

actually yes longer strokes are better because you have the freedom to decide on line width and variety (and look neater)
Well, I guess you know better.
One of reasons why I don't do long strokes is because I cannot make correct shape by one move. If Angel Mode can do it, then he'll better listen to what you queens say, I think.
You are the Drama Queens while I am just the Youkai of Derp, after all. :derp:

Let's finish the discussion here.
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Vento on June 15, 2013, 04:31:42 PM
I am trying to say I don't fully agree with this.

Well, I guess you know better.
One of reasons why I don't do long strokes is because I cannot make correct shape by one move. If Angel Mode can do it, then he'll better listen to what you queens say, I think.
You are the Drama Queens while I am just the Youkai of Derp, after all. :derp:

Let's finish the discussion here.

1) what doesnt work for you may work for others

2) what doesnt work for you may work if you kept trying
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 15, 2013, 06:33:25 PM
holy smokes what just happened
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Vyrien on June 15, 2013, 06:49:02 PM
I'm not even sure, Maximus' suggestions seem pretty helpful though. I also suffered the 'hairy lines' issue he talks about. OTL
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Merp on June 15, 2013, 06:56:21 PM
I for one, fully support unclean lines :v
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 15, 2013, 06:58:04 PM
I'm not even sure, Maximus' suggestions seem pretty helpful though. I also suffered the 'hairy lines' issue he talks about. OTL
Yeah, it did! Thank you Maximus, I'll be sure to try that out.

As for posting something with color, I guess I'm too paranoid to color my drawings. Every time I do, I seem to mess them up beyond repair.
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Merp on June 15, 2013, 07:17:43 PM
Yeah, it did! Thank you Maximus, I'll be sure to try that out.

As for posting something with color, I guess I'm too paranoid to color my drawings. Every time I do, I seem to mess them up beyond repair.

You could try coloring on semi transparent sheets, something like http://puu.sh/3gqvu.jpg works perfectly.
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 24, 2013, 12:39:24 PM
I'm posting a wip so people can see something before I actually finish it and fuck it up with color.

Also instagram again, but this isn't entirely serious hence the angle etc.

Or Touhou.

(http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/7748/qsuv.jpg) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/849/qsuv.jpg/)



poses are hard and they frighten me so everyone will always stand stationary looking off sadly to the side

edit: im in love with boku no coconut head
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Tengukami on June 24, 2013, 12:44:04 PM
But your poses are good; they make the subjects look alive, and you have a good eye for how the body moves.
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 24, 2013, 12:49:04 PM
Thank you.  :ohdear:

I just wish I could step out of the box or whatever and actually attempt to do poses instead of just drawing the same thing over and over again.
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Kaze_Senshi on June 24, 2013, 12:59:25 PM
Thank you.  :ohdear:

I just wish I could step out of the box or whatever and actually attempt to do poses instead of just drawing the same thing over and over again.

Get out from your confort zone and draw a touhou doing a somesault jump :V

BTW nice job drawing eyes
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 24, 2013, 02:09:33 PM
Done with Boku no Coconut Head!! And no instagram!!

I was originally going to erase shit and color it in but I got scared.

EDIT: SHIT HIS ARMS ARE TOO SHORT

TAKIN IT DOWN UNTIL I FIX IT
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 24, 2013, 02:47:52 PM
ok i fixed it sort of

I didn't mess with the colors or anything, just took a picture.

(http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/3172/chq.JPG) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/197/chq.JPG/)

I know it's not that much better but it was fun to draw.
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: pasu on June 24, 2013, 02:51:26 PM
makes obligatory armin armout joke
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 24, 2013, 02:54:45 PM
makes obligatory armin armout joke
originally what i drew had teeny tiny arms he needed armi..............mplants

(also let me try and make this a little less huge)
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 25, 2013, 04:42:09 PM
These are old as dirt(like 7 months old) but a friend of mine colored 'em and I still really like what she did to my drawings.
(http://imageshack.us/a/img51/6730/qyo0.th.png) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/51/qyo0.png/)
(http://imageshack.us/a/img849/5748/jix.th.png) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/849/jix.png/)
(http://imageshack.us/a/img405/8117/q02.th.png) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/405/q02.png/)
(http://imageshack.us/a/img560/7824/ktu.th.png) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/560/ktu.png/)

But I don't color anything myself. I don't have a tablet, let alone a scanner anymore so......

EDIT: HOLY SHIT WHAT DID IMAGESHACK DO TO THE TRANSPARENCIES
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Suikama on June 25, 2013, 05:17:14 PM
>using imageshack
>2013

MODEY YOU GOTTA KEEP UP WITH THE TIMES
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: pasu on June 25, 2013, 06:09:53 PM
terumoko is my heart
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: ErASeR MOdER MAxiMUM on June 25, 2013, 07:14:56 PM
>using imageshack
>2013

MODEY YOU GOTTA KEEP UP WITH THE TIMES
im an old angry hag i dont keep up with ur trends
terumoko is my heart
TERUMOKO IS SO GOOD but i prefer yuyuko/youmu  :ohdear:
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: pineyappled on June 25, 2013, 08:59:33 PM
These are old as dirt(like 7 months old) but a friend of mine colored 'em and I still really like what she did to my drawings.
(http://imageshack.us/a/img51/6730/qyo0.th.png) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/51/qyo0.png/)
QTs
Title: Re: [Art] Mode Fart
Post by: Kaze_Senshi on June 25, 2013, 10:34:04 PM
but i prefer yuyuko/youmu  :ohdear:

^ yes


BTW nice dancing Rumia