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~Hakurei Shrine~ => Alice's Art Atelier => Topic started by: R4 on September 20, 2012, 08:59:04 AM

Title: [Art] Vanadium's Improvement Thread
Post by: R4 on September 20, 2012, 08:59:04 AM: Hello. I am a newcomer in these parts.

As a socially awkward person, I decided to just introduce myself via my very own art thread.

Also, feel free to point out anything that doesn't feel right to you so I can improve my skills.

I mostly use PaintToolSAI at the moment. I was a Photoshop user, but when I migrated to SAI, it feels an awful lot easier.

For starters, have a Shou.
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http://i.imgur.com/GBANR.jpg
is it just me or is she handsome in this?
Title: Re: [Art] Vanadium's Improvement Thread
Post by: pineyappled on September 20, 2012, 02:40:49 PM: Your coloring's nice.
Title: Re: [Art] Vanadium's Improvement Thread
Post by: Kaze_Senshi on September 20, 2012, 11:21:50 PM: Quote from: R4 on September 20, 2012, 08:59:04 AM
Hello. I am a newcomer in these parts.

As a socially awkward person, I decided to just introduce myself via my very own art thread.

Also, feel free to point out anything that doesn't feel right to you so I can improve my skills.

I mostly use PaintToolSAI at the moment. I was a Photoshop user, but when I migrated to SAI, it feels an awful lot easier.

For starters, have a Shou.
In my opinion her shoulders are pretty large, women have little shouders, and her chest is too flat, or you just wanted to make it flat :P

Anyway, welcome here :)
Title: Re: [Art] Vanadium's Improvement Thread
Post by: pasu on September 20, 2012, 11:37:59 PM: Might you be a fan of Stripe Pattern? It's a very nice Shou P:
Title: Re: [Art] Vanadium's Improvement Thread
Post by: Vento on September 21, 2012, 12:16:58 AM: ikemen
Title: Re: [Art] Vanadium's Improvement Thread
Post by: R4 on September 21, 2012, 08:36:05 AM: Quote from: kinoko on September 20, 2012, 02:40:49 PM
Your coloring's nice.
Thank you :3

Quote from: Kaze_Senshi on September 20, 2012, 11:21:50 PM
In my opinion her shoulders are pretty large, women have little shouders, and her chest is too flat, or you just wanted to make it flat :P

Anyway, welcome here :)
Those are quite intended. In my opinion, Shou looks like a pretty boy in UFO. So I drew her that way.
unrelated, but I noticed that you wrote "shouders" instead of "shoulders" there. Was that pun intended?

Quote from: pasu on September 20, 2012, 11:37:59 PM
Might you be a fan of Stripe Pattern? It's a very nice Shou P:
Yes, yes I am. I enjoy the less bloody stuff from that circle.

Quote from: venappo on September 21, 2012, 12:16:58 AM
ikemen
YES (http://dic.pixiv.net/a/イケトラ)
Title: Re: [Art] Vanadium's Improvement Thread
Post by: Kaze_Senshi on September 21, 2012, 12:32:45 PM: Quote from: R4 on September 21, 2012, 08:36:05 AM
Those are quite intended. In my opinion, Shou looks like a pretty boy in UFO. So I drew her that way.
unrelated, but I noticed that you wrote "shouders" instead of "shoulders" there. Was that pun intended?

It isn't intended to be a pun, my english is awful, thanks for the fixing :)
Title: Re: [Art] Vanadium's Improvement Thread
Post by: fondue on September 21, 2012, 12:54:01 PM: Make more art
Title: Re: [Art] Vanadium's Improvement Thread
Post by: Merp on September 21, 2012, 03:21:43 PM: Quote from: fonduemaster on September 21, 2012, 12:54:01 PM
Make more art

^^
this

also draw more boooooooooots and scarves/mufflers
Title: Re: [Art] Vanadium's Improvement Thread
Post by: R4 on September 23, 2012, 12:16:40 AM: Quote from: Merp on September 21, 2012, 03:21:43 PM

also draw more boooooooooots and scarves/mufflers

I'm not good at drawing legs yet, so boooooooooots will be troublesome for me. :3

Anyway, here's an Alice.
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http://i.imgur.com/bBvQH.jpg
a bit rushed though, third year of high school can be quite unforgiving :V
Title: Re: [Art] Vanadium's Improvement Thread
Post by: R4 on December 14, 2012, 01:55:22 PM: Epic bump. My school's being a jerk lately to us third years with lots of tasks... "Requirement to graduate", my ass.

Anyway, teach me to draw hands. I keep sucking at it. :V
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disturbingly wrong hand example: http://i.imgur.com/WUfw3.jpg
Title: Re: [Art] Vanadium's Improvement Thread
Post by: Zork787 on December 14, 2012, 02:03:37 PM: better than anything I could do :V though this might help? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CHZLop6fd3o&list=SPCD2CF65888663986&index=3