Maidens of the Kaleidoscope

~Hakurei Shrine~ => Alice's Art Atelier => Topic started by: Darkblizer on March 10, 2012, 12:53:37 PM

Title: [Art] HRGH 4 AM DARKBLIZER
Post by: Darkblizer on March 10, 2012, 12:53:37 PM

with that said I post this
(http://th02.deviantart.net/fs71/150/f/2012/070/d/b/sunset_waterfall_by_darkblizer-d4se10x.png) (http://fav.me/d4se10x)

Title: Re: [Art] HRGH 4 AM DARKBLIZER
Post by: CrowCakes on March 10, 2012, 02:41:59 PM

 :* Not bad! Pretty background, too. teach me I just noticed one thing, and it's the skirt. Personally, I found that the knee that was bulging looked weird. Maybe I'm just seeing things.

Title: Re: [Art] HRGH 4 AM DARKBLIZER
Post by: HakureiSM on March 10, 2012, 05:58:13 PM

Well, that's overall nicely done

Although indeed the bulge is in a very awkward position

Title: Re: [Art] HRGH 4 AM DARKBLIZER
Post by: pineyappled on March 10, 2012, 06:05:58 PM

Looks great, but her shoulder/chest area looks off.

Title: Re: [Art] HRGH 4 AM DARKBLIZER
Post by: Darkblizer on March 10, 2012, 11:45:58 PM

Ah, yeah, sorry.   I'm still kind of a novice at this ^^;   The bulge in the skirt is supposed to be her other knee, but I'm not too good at legs so that's probably why it looks weird . _.  Thanks for the input, though.

Title: Re: [Art] HRGH 4 AM DARKBLIZER
Post by: HakureiSM on March 11, 2012, 09:35:50 AM

Well it is pretty good for a novice. Probably better than anything I could do without a lot of effort. So just keep at it

Title: Re: [Art] HRGH 4 AM DARKBLIZER
Post by: Darkblizer on March 11, 2012, 05:12:46 PM

Speaking of keeping at it, someone suggest something else for me to draw please ` 3`

Title: Re: [Art] HRGH 4 AM DARKBLIZER
Post by: Alfred F. Jones on March 11, 2012, 07:53:00 PM

Draw Aya. I wanna see how you handle her wings.