Maidens of the Kaleidoscope
~Hakurei Shrine~ => Alice's Art Atelier => Topic started by: SuperParadox on November 06, 2011, 09:05:32 PM
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Hello everyone! ...I really don't know how to start his topic
but anywho I have come, with art!
Just one for now though.
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An unfinished watercolour painting of Cirno I started in late September and never got around to finishing. Might restart it as I don't really like how I did the watercolours.
Critiques are always welcomed! (I like em harsh)
Edit - Click the picture for a better quailty... I don't know why the quality is that bad...
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YES I love watercolor painting. I suck at it so I get easily discouraged, but I'm happy to see that I'm not the only one, at least :<
You need more clothing folds, for sure-- Cirno's waist shouldn't be so unruffled, and her shoulders need to look like they're bending. Her arms look a little too short, even for her small stature. And her neck is a bit too... what's the word? Broad? Thick, maybe.
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Watercolor's pretty fun (Although I'm not good at it :V), and it yields some pretty unique results.
However, I think that Cirno's hands are a bit too small; Making them 1.5x bigger would be much better.
You need more clothing folds, for sure-- Cirno's waist shouldn't be so unruffled
I'd have to agree with Ruro here; there should be some lines indicating the ruffling of Cirno's dress as she moves, the way it is now gives it the flatness of a puddle of water. (I only say this because that's what I see when look at it, sorry. :ohdear:)
Although only add in a couple lines for clothing folds, you can show folds without lines just by adding shadows and highlights.
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Thanks for the critiques you two!
I agree, hands and arms are something I really need to fix and looking at the picture again, the neck also looks a bit too thick.
the way it is now gives it the flatness of a puddle of water. (I only say this because that's what I see when look at it, sorry. :ohdear:)
Oh no, don't apoligize you're right ;) the dress is painted pretty bad right now its something I also need to remember when i'm redrawing it.
I was planning on using highlights and shadows to show the clothing folds but I never got around to doing that (I should have drawn some in though lol)
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Update with recent ( 2 hours ago) drawings
Yuugi <3 - http://superparadox.deviantart.com/#/d4jbz9s (http://superparadox.deviantart.com/#/d4jbz9s)
NSFW realisim skecth - http://superparadox.deviantart.com/#/d4jbz02 (http://superparadox.deviantart.com/#/d4jbz02)
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Was "Realisim Skecth" deliberate?
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No, it was done from my mind, without a model so its pretty ...crap. Not to mention the anatomy mistakes in it.
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I think he meant the typo of "sketch" as "skecth."
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Oh derp. how I managed to spell sketch wrong about 4 times in a row and not notice is beyond me. It seems my fingers have a different opinion on how to spell things.
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The eyes of a drawing I was working on - http://superparadox.deviantart.com/#/d4je8pk
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Heres some more of my art. Sorry for the quailty.
(http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/9541/poop039yuyu.th.png) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/716/poop039yuyu.png/)
A WIP of Yuuka that I'll probably never get around to finishing
(http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/9009/poop022.th.jpg) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/209/poop022.jpg/)
A doodle of Marisa. Note that I don't draw hands.
Uploading more in a second. :V
(http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/455/idontknow0.th.png) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/546/idontknow0.png/)
An OC of mine I decided to doodle
(http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/7272/rau.th.png) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/810/rau.png/)
WIP of a Reimu watercolour
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The Reimu watercolour I'm 95% away from finishing (http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/2321/poop003.jpg)
Older Chrismas watercolour (http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/7634/poop006.jpg)
I need to get a scanner or something.