Thank you very much! Yeah, I'm not 100% satisfied with it myself, and I'm not really used to write more serious drama, so it's a little so-so at times. But it mostly works, I think.
I got the Japanese (quick) translation from a friend who works as a translator, but he's not a native, and I couldn't get it "touhouified", so it might be a bit off.
I had fun drawing slightly different outfits for Remilia for every scene, and the way Patchy's clothes, hat and hair slowly settles towards the current appearance. I had wanted to include Meiling as well, but it'd just be too long, and ending it when they came to Gensokyou seemed right too. Regrettably, the ending feels a bit cut off. I still need to plan my stories better beforehand, instead of just writing them on the go.
But I'm glad you liked it!