Author Topic: my latest short story {touhou related}  (Read 2614 times)

my latest short story {touhou related}
« on: January 15, 2013, 02:14:53 AM »
This is one of my most recent short stories and it is the only touhou based one. It is still a work in progress. Any suggestions are welcome. And if you could please point out my grammar mistakes because i suck at grammar but please give me the chapter of the story where the grammar mistake and the line. My story is about 15 pages long at this time so it would be hard for me to find it based off of just a sentence.
Thank you got taking time out of your day to read my short story.