Author Topic: Post Your Artwork Thread V5 (Read 256124 times)

ふとくていなねこじょおう · « **Reply #210 on:** January 02, 2012, 01:54:12 AM »

Quote from: KrackoCloud on January 02, 2012, 01:47:04 AM

Well, I'll probably end up drawing a lot of Touhou characters, so that's... A lot of trolls. Just look at those Touhou+Homestuck posts Littleshrimp made. So many trolls.
Think I'll just do sessions for each game.

I don't know who littleshrimp is, though I've heard the name being mentioned a few times. And that idea is just perfect. :3

Savory · « **Reply #211 on:** January 02, 2012, 05:55:43 AM »

Still need feedback on my sketches.

Suikama · « **Reply #212 on:** January 02, 2012, 06:02:02 AM »

Quote from: ふとくていなねこじょおう on January 02, 2012, 01:54:12 AM

I don't know who littleshrimp is, though I've heard the name being mentioned a few times. And that idea is just perfect. :3

http://askminamitsu.tumblr.com/

KrackoCloud · « **Reply #213 on:** January 02, 2012, 06:18:25 AM »

Quote from: Savory on January 02, 2012, 05:55:43 AM

Still need feedback on my sketches.

I'm probably not the best source of criticism but oh well:
The Utsuho is really great! I love the hand for whatever reason!
The Cirno one is good, though you might want to add a few lines to her wings? They seem a little spatially ambiguous, and for a while I thought the other side of her wings was missing.
Nazrin is good too. Her mouth seems a little much to the right, which makes it seem like her mouth protrudes a bit from her face. Given, she's a mouse, so that might have been what you were aiming for, but I'm just putting that out there in case.

Quote from: Suikama on January 02, 2012, 06:02:02 AM

http://askminamitsu.tumblr.com/

Don't you fret about that! It's been covered.

EDIT

More Homestuck crossover - This time, Marisa and Reimu.

ふとくていなねこじょおう · « **Reply #214 on:** January 03, 2012, 01:19:14 AM »

Nice! (Though I was thinking Thief of Heart for Marisa...*shot*)

Savory · « **Reply #215 on:** January 07, 2012, 09:01:15 PM »

It's the year of the dragon after all! :derp:

What do you guys think?

Mеа · « **Reply #216 on:** January 08, 2012, 11:20:15 AM »

Quote from: Savory on January 07, 2012, 09:01:15 PM

It's the year of the dragon after all! :derp:

What do you guys think?

I've seen lots of pictures by you around here. I'd say it's pretty good.
Your style seems pretty well developed, and you seem very comfortable with it. Enough so that it's beyond minor technical things like proportions and what not.
I suggest trying to draw something that leaves the viewer with some kind of 'feeling', or something memorable.
Not saying that I'm like an expert or anything(since I have a lot to polish up on). Just saying that you seem 'good' enough to take 'a few more steps forward' now.

For example, adding a silhouette of a dragon behind her with 2012 somewhere in there would likely leave the viewer with the 'Oh, it's a happy new year of the dragon' kind of feeling (This would also better portray the reason why you drew this to begin with: because it's the year of the dragon). That, to me, would be a lot more memorable than just a pencil sketch of a character. This would also be more effective especially if the viewer isn't a fan of the particular character that you drew, in this case Meiling(whom I am not necessarily a fan of). [The good/bad thing about fan art is that 1) It's easier to portray the character of the character since it's already been established outside, 2) but because of this, the viewer already has pre-conceived prejudices(good or bad) of that character. As an example of this, I might like a picture you draw of Alice more than this, even if it might be the same/slightly worse. Which is why the impression you create in the drawing is as important as the character you draw. As another example, consider the differences between a moe Remillia and a charismatic Remillia picture. ... Hmm, did I get a bit side-tracked here? Oh well]

I'm not sure if all of what I said is entirely accurate since I don't really pay too much conscious attention to these things myself (since I'm working on my style first). Not to mention that I'm very inexperienced in this sort of this, so sorry if I'm wrong, or if I offended you in any way.

Savory · « **Reply #217 on:** January 08, 2012, 02:33:17 PM »

Thanks!

To be honest, I didn't really draw her so much for the current year, but just for the fact that I simply wanted to. Meiling is one of my favorite characters. I attempted to draw her months ago, but it came out so horribly that I gave up. This time I pushed myself to try again with, as you can see, better results.

チソウ タイゼン · « **Reply #218 on:** January 13, 2012, 05:54:14 PM »

http://db.tt/VzsBx1BE

Listening to Shanghai Alice for half an hour during the history final? Hahahaha.......

> Don't look at the thread
> Post
> Look at the thread
> Better Meiling immediately preceding

:fail:

Savory · « **Reply #219 on:** January 13, 2012, 09:05:47 PM »

Meiling WIP

Savory · « **Reply #220 on:** January 14, 2012, 05:35:58 AM »

Finished!

hourai · « **Reply #221 on:** January 15, 2012, 09:19:47 AM »

Ichirin wip ^q^
i should be studying for exams and what not but i can't help but draw touhou hmm

also french hipster mokou

Alfred F. Jones · « **Reply #222 on:** January 16, 2012, 07:16:45 AM »

Why French, out of curiousity? Just because? Looks nice, at any rate.

hourai · « **Reply #223 on:** January 16, 2012, 08:45:48 AM »

Quote from: Akemi Homururo on January 16, 2012, 07:16:45 AM

Why French, out of curiousity? Just because? Looks nice, at any rate.

I was aiming for more of a hipster/contemporary kind of theme, but I guess it changed a little;;;
It might also be because I speak a bit of French myself too..
Thanks! ^q^///

Savory · « **Reply #224 on:** January 17, 2012, 03:14:20 AM »

Have some Nuclear Fried Crow

Savory · « **Reply #225 on:** January 18, 2012, 04:09:07 AM »

Finished. This took me almost all day.

hourai · « **Reply #226 on:** January 18, 2012, 04:29:30 AM »

Unyu
That looks really good Savory. ^q^////

here's a genderswapped Keine from my ask blog.
also i made this for a friend

yorihime999 · « **Reply #227 on:** January 20, 2012, 05:05:41 AM »

[link removed]

This is My Work!!

I Decresed My Work........This is The Original http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=big&illust_id=24487215 It's Very Big...

Alfred F. Jones · « **Reply #228 on:** January 20, 2012, 08:43:12 AM »

Welcome, Yorihime! Direct links to images Pixiv don't work because you have to be logged in to see them. Just the Pixiv link (http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=big&illust_id=24487215) is fine.

yorihime999 · « **Reply #229 on:** January 21, 2012, 08:30:00 AM »

Thank you

I didn't knew that

ふとくていなねこじょおう · « **Reply #230 on:** January 22, 2012, 05:32:18 AM »

WHAT TIME IS IT?!

_{Time for me to realize Hazama's head is way too small *sob*}

I was bored in class so I filled up my page with these. I'll make 'em pretty soon. :3

DX7.EP · « **Reply #231 on:** January 22, 2012, 05:43:22 AM »

Quite an unusual mix! Now I won't be able to get Touhou or BB out of my head whenever I see Adventure Time on. :V

yorihime999 · « **Reply #232 on:** January 25, 2012, 10:28:56 AM »

Another Work
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=24603470
It's a mamizou ...

bennelsey · « **Reply #233 on:** January 30, 2012, 02:35:13 PM »

Quote from: yorihime999 on January 25, 2012, 10:28:56 AM

Another Work
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=24603470
It's a mamizou ...

love the style <3

no idea if it's unique, but i just love it lol

Skyler · « **Reply #234 on:** January 30, 2012, 10:10:12 PM »

Critique on this before I line it?

http://i44.tinypic.com/25s0cpc.png

This is meant to be an attempt at a more realistic style but not full-blown realism because I don't think I'm skilled enough for that yet. :V I'm just looking for things on anatomy like the length of the arms or the position of the head or whatever.

Also there's supposed to be a glowing orb of light in her right hand but I forgot it. I'll add it in later.

SuperParadox · « **Reply #235 on:** January 31, 2012, 12:40:42 AM »

I would reccomend making the braids a look bit less stiff. Other than that you're off to a good start.

Mеа · « **Reply #236 on:** January 31, 2012, 07:52:40 AM »

Quote from: Glimmer on January 30, 2012, 10:10:12 PM

Critique on this before I line it?

http://i44.tinypic.com/25s0cpc.png

This is meant to be an attempt at a more realistic style but not full-blown realism because I don't think I'm skilled enough for that yet. :V I'm just looking for things on anatomy like the length of the arms or the position of the head or whatever.

Also there's supposed to be a glowing orb of light in her right hand but I forgot it. I'll add it in later.

Hm, I'm not sure if I qualify for things like this since I'm not that good at realism, but here is a bit of a critique/tips-of-sorts that I did. Just personally, I don't really like blatant lips, so I would just suggest it by shading it. Kind of like the Baccano artist does Chane's (Black haired girl on the right edge) lips.
It really all depends on how much you want far along you want to go along the sliding scale of realism vs stylism. Baccano/Drrr art, as an example, would be around the middle, leaning more on the stylistic/manga side.

Savory · « **Reply #237 on:** February 01, 2012, 11:42:42 PM »

Speaking of ghosts...

チソウ タイゼン · « **Reply #238 on:** February 07, 2012, 08:34:48 PM »

So check out my horribleness

What do you think

Rin Kaenbyou · « **Reply #239 on:** February 11, 2012, 01:02:24 PM »

Ey guys, take a look at this: http://i.imgur.com/3wzHY.jpg

She is my Touhou OC (insert her name here-no name yet), she is a fortune goddess and a Kitsune (she hides all nine tails in one)
It's a base draw,

And look this: http://i.imgur.com/Wk97g.jpg
It's the process of shading at the moment is going at 10% (only skin yet)

What do thou think guys? horrible, isn't?