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Kips McKipzerson

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #60 on: April 12, 2011, 05:24:31 PM »
If it is the end I'm going to smack you.
If it isnt I'm still going to smack you.

Watch out for when I smack you :V

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #61 on: April 12, 2011, 08:38:56 PM »
gdi i had to look up blue waffles asdgd i hate you cirno...  :V well anyways i find these shorts to be really well written. Im loving the character portrayals as well  as the  story itself.  Srry for not posing earlier i was too lazy to post -_- but yeah i found these shorts to be rather enjoyable.
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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #62 on: April 13, 2011, 09:08:22 AM »
@Kips
I shalt graze thy smack and increase my High Score!

@ShadyKoopz
Sorry, I did warn you at least twice... and the main character, too, mentioned something about not trusting a troll...
Sorry again, though. I didn't mean it  :(

*Barney*
Hey, kids. Remember: never trust trolls... And remember kids, I love you~

I apologize once again on Cirno's behalf. She doesn't mean it. She's just a troll, that's all...

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Short #8?9, Part 10(It's not over yet...)(/14)

Meanwhile, on the way to Kourindou?

?ACHOOO!?

?Woah, Cirno. You alright there??

?Eye just have a slight feeling that??

?That??

?That somewhere out there, somebody is talking about me??

?You mean the man back at home??

?No, eye don?t know. But eye just can?t shake off the feeling that somewhere out there someone just expressed their hatred towards me??

?There, there Cirno? Don?t worry. I?m sure it?s just your imagination??

?Yea, eye hope so??

----------

"Oh, hey there... uh... sorry but what's your name again?"

"..."

She turned to look away as if she never saw me.

"Oh yeah! Alice!"

"Oh I remember you now. You're that guy from the village who stalked me."

"I'm no stalker! I just had stuff to ask you, that's all."

"Uhh... Nice w-w-weather we're having..."

She keeps stammering. Is she nervous or something?

"Yeah... But it's kinda hot today."

"Y-y-yea..."

Suddenly she paused for a moment. She put her hand on my chest... and...

She pushed me down!

"Ow, what was that for-"

"WEEEEEEE!!!"

A gust of wind blew against my face as I thought I felt the earth tremble below me, but no, it was just the wind... or whoever is riding the wind.

"Sup, Alice?"

It was another blonde girl, looking about Alice's age.

"Hi. A friend of Alice's? I better take my leave now. Bye."

I turned my back to them and got back to picking the mushrooms.

I slowly walked away as I left the two friends alone. From afar I could still hear them talking.

"Alice, who was that guy anyway? Were you-"

"No, Marisa. Don't misunderstand. There's nothing bet-"

"Shh... I believe you... Because I love you..."

"Marisa..."

"Alice..."

"Marisa, can I- can you, you know..."

"Close your eyes..."

"Marisa..."

"Alice... I love you..."

I felt my heart pounding, about to burst from my chest.

I can't take it anymore.

I looked back.

...

"Eavesdropping on girls is no good..."

Wha?

"What did you think we will do? You sick man! You really remind me of a certain fairy living at the Misty Lake. A man like you will surely enjoy her company."

"Oh you mean Dai? She's a little too annoying to be a good companion..."

"Haha, so ye' know 'er? Is she really dat annoying?"

"Trust me; she's pretty damn annoying to be around sometimes."

"Haha. You're not bad, maybe we should hang out sometimes. Kay then, see ya around!"

I heard Alice in a soft voice.

"Wow you can really socialize well, huh?"

"Thank the kappa, Internet and Facebook!"

"You're actually willing to pay extra for Internet bills, huh?"

"Hehe, of cuz' I am! So where were we?"

"Where were we whaaAAA-?"

I heard a loud smooching sound in the distance.

Did they really? Or did they not? Dai, I blame you for all these thoughts overflowing my mind!

I ate some of the mushrooms on the way back.

Mmm~...

Salty...

But really good. It's even better than junk food! And it?s nutritious too!

...

"Hey I'm back... Sunny? Star?"

They're still here?

*snap snap*

They blinked after I snapped my fingers.

"Oh hey there."

"Cirno's not back yet?"

"Nope."

"Hey, you wanna do something?"

"Like what?"

"Something to pass the time..."

"Coming out from you guys, I say it's a prank?"

"Yes!"

"Yea sure why not. What's the plan then, girls?"

"We'll ring doorbells and hide before the owners show up!"

"That's a great idea, Sunny!"

"Just one problem, girls. Where are we supposed to find houses with doorbells here?"

They looked at each other and smiled.

?Star, I?ll explain it to him. You go get Luna??

?Will do.?

?You see, there?s this big house down this lake that?s really? uh? well, BIG. It?s totally different from our homes here. It has a very big metal gate outside too! I?m sure the owner?s a really big and important person. If we manage to pull a prank on them, how great would that be??

She said with her usual cheeky smile.

?I don?t know, maybe it isn?t really a good idea??

?Sunny, Luna?s asleep. Should I wake her up? Or we can just go without her.?

?Yea, let?s just go without her??

?

?Girls? I don?t know if this is a really bright idea??

?Awww, come on, party spoiler!?

?Yea, just have fun!?

?I have a bad feeling about this??

And soon we came upon a huge mansion and damn was it big. It looked like a very olden Western-styled mansion, with a big clock on the top floor, just like what we see on television.

?You girls settle this quick okay? I shouldn?t have come here in the first place??

?What? You chicken??

?BUCK BUCK BUCK!?

Sigh.

?Okay, you girls go on ahead; I?ll just stand out here and stay on guard??

?Great plan!?

Well I?ll just let these girls settle this little prank as soon as possible. If anything bad happens I?ll probably just apologize to the mansion?s owners.

I watched as the two fairies flew over the gate, slowly sneaking to the front step.

I looked around for a while to examine the place.

It?s really beautiful. It has a huge garden around it, although the atmosphere here is a little creepy, but overall it?s still a pretty nice place to live in.

I looked around a little more until I saw someone?

I put my hand over my head to block the sun?s rays as I squinted my eyes to see who it was in the distance.

It was a girl, leaning against a tree, asleep.

This is a bad idea after all. I think I?m just gonna tell Star and Sunny to get back right away.

I turned around to face their direction?

...I was about to call them back...

?until?

?

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« Last Edit: April 17, 2011, 07:27:46 AM by CS »
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Kips McKipzerson

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #63 on: April 13, 2011, 09:19:44 AM »
And then he died from the cancer.

THE CANCER END ONE
RETRY FROM START?
Yes
>No
:V

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #64 on: April 13, 2011, 09:38:30 AM »
Gasp! How did you know he had cancer?

Oh wait he didn't... he mustn't... or else he'll miss the big fight between Yuka and Cirno! And Mima!

...oh wait that won't happen... or will it?...  :V
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Kips McKipzerson

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #65 on: April 13, 2011, 09:58:23 AM »
Gasp! How did you know he had cancer?

Oh wait he didn't... he mustn't... or else he'll miss the big fight between Yuka and Cirno! And Mima!

...oh wait that won't happen... or will it?...  :V
If Yuuka dont win, I'll brofist you.
As in, the pink cloud brofist.
that hurts
A LOT

Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #66 on: April 13, 2011, 10:28:03 AM »
I guess that's Meiling under the tree. But, of course, I'm probably very wrong, and it's someone completely different.

On a completely unrelated note, I tried writing. I got a first chapter done, but the second is taking FOREVER. So it's actually a good thing you don't put too much words in a chapter, CS.

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Kips McKipzerson

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #67 on: April 13, 2011, 10:37:13 AM »
Hey, Crow, Try listening to some music in the background while writing. I'm actually working on a Maribel fic myself, my first dedicated project.

Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #68 on: April 13, 2011, 11:37:35 AM »
I tried doing that before while answering homework. It didn't help. Oh BTW what happened to your thread for stories/etc?

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Kips McKipzerson

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #69 on: April 13, 2011, 11:43:46 AM »
Way back there in page 2 or somethin'. I'm going to try and write the rest of the chapter today and post it there, if not to show it off but to moreso ask for help on what to change.

Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #70 on: April 13, 2011, 01:47:20 PM »
There's something I've been wanting to ask. Does posting stories on PSL work the same way like in Fanfiction.net? Do I just create a new thread for the story, or do I have to do some other stuff before that? (I'm getting absolutely no feedback for my story on FF.net.)

And I just remembered that the protagonist of the ongoing story was sick.
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And then he died from the cancer.

THE CANCER END ONE
RETRY FROM START?
Yes
>No
 :V
hee hee hee

Crow's Dumping Ground of Art

"So I never have to worry what tomorrow will bring, because my faith is on solid rock; I am counting on God."

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #71 on: April 13, 2011, 02:01:33 PM »
You know what? That'll be a really nice twist ending.

But then again, where's the fun when you are already expecting it? :V

Next part is already done, no he didn't die of cancer (yet(?))
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Kips McKipzerson

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #72 on: April 13, 2011, 06:39:14 PM »
Not cancer.
THE CANCER
Also yay.

Crow, Pretty much just make a thread. If you really want, You can make an "all around" thread, for shorts and fics alike, even oneshots. If you really think you can update often, then make a thread just for that one fic.

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #73 on: April 14, 2011, 09:19:22 AM »
Short #8?9 Part 11(there isn't gonna be a big showdown between Cirno and a certain ancient youkai whose power level is over 9000  :V ... or is there?... I lied  :V ... or did I?...) (/14)

?until?

?I heard a loud voice from inside the mansion?

The girls looked at each other, giggling.

The voice filled the air as it echoed in our heads?

?ZA zazaza??

The girls looked at each other as Sunny showed Star a puzzled face.

?WARUDO dododo??

?

I blinked.

?AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaa?..?

The two girls screamed but within a second or two, their screams slowly faded away into nothing.

From where I stand, I looked at the two girls, now lying on the floor, upon the front step. Standing a step away from their bodies, bloodied and mutilated beyond recognition, was a single girl.

I could only watch in horror from afar, as the girl with shoulder length silverish hair looked at the two bodies.

I gasped.

She looked up and turned her head to me.

I decided to run away, but?

In the blink of an eye, literally, she appeared before me. How did she?

She was looking at me with her cold, blue eyes.

?Darn fairies. Ahem. So, kind sir, do you happen to be an acquaintance of these two??

Her voice was monotone that I could not feel a single hint of emotion in it.

She grabbed hold of my arm.

I blinked again.

When my eyes opened, I felt like ?letting it all out? when I was to behold the gruesome sight before me?

????

There was blood everywhere?

Their eyes were wide open; three of them at least?

One of Sunny?s had a knife right through it, right into her skull?

Their mouths were really wide open, covered in blood?

Star had three knives embedded into her skull?

Let?s just say it wasn?t a really pretty sight?

?Hm? So do you know these two??

???

Who is this girl?

?Excuse me??

??how could you do that??

?Hm??

She raised an eyebrow.

?HOW COULD YOU!??

Suddenly as I looked back at their bodies, they started fading away into tiny balls of light.

?No? Sunny? Star? NO!!!?

?So, I assume you do know them, sir??

?How could you do that to them? What did they do wrong? It was just a little-?

?As little as pranks can be, they tend to end up getting out of hand and creating a huge mess for my maids and me to clear up.?

I looked at the girl. I had just realized that she was wearing a complete maid uniform, head to toe, with a few bloodstains on her face and some on her apron.

?How could you??

?Hmm? I see you?re a friend of the fairies, sir??

What is this? Who is she? I could not even sense a hint of guilt from her voice.

?I guess these two have learnt their lesson. Sir, if you have any other fairy friends, would you please kindly inform them not to come and play pranks on the Mistress? She hasn?t been in a very good mood lately and I don?t want to see you or your friends hurt or anything.?

What does she mean? Who does she think she is? She just took away two lives and all she can think about is this Mistress of hers?

?Well, I don?t know who you are, but how could you do that? You could always just advise them NOT to play such pranks, instead of? of? ARGHHH!?

?I?m sorry, sir. That was to discipline those girls. If I hadn?t had done that, they will never learn.?

?Learn? You just KILLED my friends? HOW COULD Y-?

?Ahem. Excuse me. Those two are just fairies. Their lives aren?t wor-?

?JUST fairies? How could you say that? You?ve just taken away two innocent kids? lives!?

?I?m sorry, sir. I apologize for such a gruesome sight just now, but I hope you pass my message to your friends back at home, okay? Thank you. Now if you?ll excuse me, I have some work to do??

Who the hell does she think she is? Were Star and Sunny?s lives worth nothing at all to her? Did she think they were disposable?

I couldn?t take it anymore. I curled my hand up into a fist and lunged right at her.

?It?s useless??

In a split second, she disappeared and I lost balance, before falling face first onto the cold hard ground.

?Sigh. I can?t believe how useless of a bodyguard that girl is, always sleeping on the job.?

I climbed back up on my feet, ready to charge at her once again.

But then she took notice of my plan to attack her from the back.

She looked back at me, and her eyes started glowing red.

I blinked and when my eyes opened this time, everything around me had changed?

That rock! Didn?t we walk past it on our way to the mansion?

Wait, how did I get back here?

I?m lost?

With the think mist here, I know I can never find my way back. And without Sunny and Star?

Oh?

Why?

Why didn?t I just stop them when I had the chance?

Why didn?t I just tell them it was a terrible idea in the first place?

Why did I realize it too late?

WHY!?

What makes a fairy?s life less valuable than any other person?s? They?re just the same as us.

Who was that girl?

Well, I know I won?t be able to make it back there without a guide.

I couldn?t even give my friends a proper burial. They disappeared right before my eyes?

Star. Sunny. May you two rest in peace now?

I only know the way back to Cirno?s house from here.

I?d better warn the others to not go to that mansion ever again, never again?

I never wanna see anyone hurt like that? ever again?

?

I got back home.

I turned the doorknob.

Tears were streaming down my face.

?Oh, welcome back??

I looked up?

My eyes widened?

?
« Last Edit: April 17, 2011, 07:28:16 AM by CS »
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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #74 on: April 14, 2011, 09:28:35 AM »
So, I was wrong, but not far off. Sudden tone change caught me by surprise. I liked it.

Guessing time! Sunny and Star were the ones to greet MC.  :o

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #75 on: April 14, 2011, 09:52:34 AM »
Sunny, Star, Sakuya, Cirno, Pedobear... Oh whoever can it be? I wonder...  :V
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Kips McKipzerson

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #76 on: April 14, 2011, 01:13:46 PM »
Whelp.
Those damned faeries should'va told him they are immortal in the first place.

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #77 on: April 15, 2011, 02:41:50 AM »
@Kips
I shalt graze thy smack and increase my High Score!

@ShadyKoopz
Sorry, I did warn you at least twice... and the main character, too, mentioned something about not trusting a troll...
Sorry again, though. I didn't mean it  :(

*Barney*
Hey, kids. Remember: never trust trolls... And remember kids, I love you~

I apologize once again on Cirno's behalf. She doesn't mean it. She's just a troll, that's all...

Oh no i wasn't blaming you it was my curiosity to blame.  And ive nearly forgotten about it so it's alright.  anyway yeah who could it be at the door...im thinking it's dai  :V no real reason :derp:
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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #78 on: April 15, 2011, 10:14:00 AM »
No one's at the door. He opened the door himself and was surprised at the person/people who greeted him...

Gonna end it soon...

==========
Short #8?9, Part 12(/14)

?Hey there??

?B-But! How? What did you do? What happened? How did- I don?t get it??

I kept wiping the tears off my face.

???

I looked behind the two girls.

?Well, I see you understand what I meant now, huh??

I thought for a little while?

??Besides, we fairies have something you don't..."

???

There was nothing but silence in the room.

My eyes got wet again?

?Sunny! Star!?

I ran up to the two and hugged them.

?Group hug~?, Dai said as she joined in and wrapped her arms around us.

After a few minutes, Dai released her arms and so did the rest of us.

?Hey, it?s getting kinda stuffy in here; I?ll be getting some fresh air outside??

Dai left the room.

“Yeah, we better get home now??

?Hey? we?re really sorry about just now??

?Yea, we should?ve told you??

They waved at us and left the room as well.

I turned to look at Cirno, who was silent the whole time, hiding her face under her hair and standing in one corner.

?Cirno??

I walked up to her. I put my hands around her and pushed her face to my chest.

?Cirno??

This is it?

?Cirno??

I was sobbing?

But still?

I have to tell her?

?Cirno? I??

I knew this was my only chance to say it?

?Cirno? I-I??

Whether it be a dream or reality itself, I don?t care anymore?

All I know right now?

?is that?

?Cirno? I lo-?

?I know? you didn?t have to take so long to find the guts to say that, I already know??

?Cirno??

?Yea??

?Whatever you do? please? please, I beg of you? don?t leave me??

She held on to me tighter as I, too, tightened my arms around her.

?I don?t ever wanna see that happen to you??

The picture of the two girls flashed before me once again.

?Cirno, don?t ever let something like that happen to you??

?I? I promise? I won?t??

?Don?t ever break that promise, okay??

?I won?t? Hehe, I am the strongest, remember??

?Cirno??

I heard Cirno muttering.

?Hey, kid. You know what? I-?

But I didn?t really make out what she said, so I interrupted her.

I shouldn?t have?

?Cirno, I want this dream to last forever? I wanna be with you till the end of time. I don?t care if I don?t wake up anymore??

And with that, Cirno let go of me and pushed me away from her.

???

And then she left with tears on her face.

?Cirno, wai-?

But before I could finish she slammed the door behind her.

What was that all about?

I guess even though she acts a little more matured, she?s still a little kid?

?

She was seated on a rock, silently sobbing.

?Cirno??

As I called out, she turned to look at me and wiped her tears off.

I walked up to her and put my hand on her head. I gave her a soft pat.

?Cirno, what?s wrong??

?*sob sob* nothing? eye?m fine??

?Cirno? at least? can we continue our normal lives, like before? I?m sorry if I said or did anything that hurt your feelings??

?It?s okay. Eye?m sorry too for running off like that.?

She smiled at me, but then it seemed like it was forced on her face.

I felt bad for doing whatever I had done to make her sad.

?C?mon, let?s go inside. I can feel the rain droplets already.?

?Yea? let?s??

?That?s not the Cirno I know??

?Ahem. HAHA, WEAK MORTAL! Afraid of a little rain, eye see? Let?s go inside then, and we?ll have some fun, if you know what I mean.?

And she gave out her usual grin.

That?s the Cirno I know?

I guess our days are just going to continue, huh?

I don?t wanna wake up from this dream? ever?

?

?Morning, Cirno. Dai, you?re here early.?

Cirno was looking at her screen.

?Morning trolling again??

Dai nodded her head.

?Hey, Dai? Just wondering, though??

?Hm??

?When you use the internet, you always visit those? ummm? you know what I mean? but then, doesn?t it say you need to be over 18? Don?t you think it?s a little too early for you to go to su-?

*SMACK*

She smiled back at me.

?Don?t ever ask that again, okay??

Ah~

I wish these days will last forever?

It?s so fun teasing Dai, fooling around with the other girls, and most importantly, being able to be with Cirno?

I don?t want these days to end?

Never.

I don?t wanna wake up.

Oh how I wish this were all real?

?

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« Last Edit: April 17, 2011, 07:28:23 AM by CS »
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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #79 on: April 15, 2011, 10:29:45 AM »
Hey, the ending is in past tense. Oooooooooooooooooooh... Part 12 feels incomplete; maybe you should have combined it with the next part.

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Kips McKipzerson

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #80 on: April 15, 2011, 12:37:57 PM »
Ah, the perfect blend of serious and humor.

CS

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #81 on: April 15, 2011, 04:14:46 PM »
@Immaterial Crow
All according to keikaku (TL Note: keikaku means plan)

Just wanted to end it with him starting another average day... until the next part comes in...
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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #82 on: April 16, 2011, 10:06:39 AM »
Short #8?9, Part 13(/14)

I heard voices coming from inside Cirno's room.

I walked towards it, silently to make sure they don't hear me, and then I put my ear against it.

"Please, Dai. Please."

"I don't know."

"All ya' need to do is take care of him whenever he goes outside if eye'm not around, in case anything happens."

"Cirno, I haven't seen you this serious in a very long time. At least tell me what's wrong with him going outside."

"Sigh."

And there was silence for a very long time, what seemed to be ages, which was suddenly broken when the door opened inwards and I landed right in front of the little ice fairy?s feet.

"Eye don't mind you listening. Just don't make it look so awkward by eavesdropping like that, it?s weird."

"Hold on?"

I got up on a sitting position.

"What is this about Dai taking care of me when I go outside?"

She looked away for a second.

"She's back," she said softly.

"What? Who?"

Dai gasped.

"You mean her?"

"Yes..."

"What are you two talking about? Who is this 'her'?"

"Her heart is as dark as the void around her, her eyes as crimson as the blood of the people who actually do see her, and her power is..."

"What?"

Cirno put on her usual grin again.

"...over NINE THOUSAAAAAND!!! Her claws and teeth are as razor sharp as a BlendTec blender, she is just..."

"Who is she?"

Cirno's smile quickly faded.

"Sigh. Eyemma go outside for some fresh air now..."

Cirno left without turning back.

"What's up with her?"

"Hey..."

"Huh?"

"Have I ever told you the story of how I met Cirno?"

"No, not that I can recall..."

She took in a deep breath.

"Well, you see..."

I sat down, listening attentively.

"It all started when I was first born here. I was lost out here in the lake, with the mist making everything worse.

I was scared and no one was there. It was dead silence...

Everything went from bad to worse when I was attacked by some random fairies living nearby. Not just the fairies, actually. In fact, everything around me scared me. I couldn't spend a single second without insecurity. I hated my life?

Until she came along.

She stretched out her hand to me and held my hand tight.

I remember those words she said to me back then. I'll never forget them. They were the first... and last... time anyone has actually touched my heart.

"Are you lost? Take my hand, and I'll show you the world... my friend..."

And that was the only time in almost two hundred years, that I've actually had someone regard me as their friend..."

I felt a tear in my eye as I forced it back in, before pushing myself up and giving ol' Dai a big, warm hug.

"Idiot. Who do you think we are? Sunny, Luna, Star and even me. What do you think we are to you?"

Her eyes became watery as she wrapped her arms around me and eventually burst out in tears.

"What are we to you?"

"I don't know."

"What do you take those three girls as?"

"They don't consider me a friend, either. We're only 'partners in crime'-"

"Then what about me? What am I to you?"

"I don't know! Cirno has been my one and only friend. She protected me from the dangers out there. She took me in. She helped me build my own home. She taught me everything I needed to survive here. She was my one and only TRUE friend! And then you had to come into the picture. You had to ruin everything! Now look at what you did! Cirno's leaving me because of you! What am I to her now? She doesn?t even care about me anymore! Am I to be made of wood? Like those trees out there in the forest?"

"She isn't leaving you. She's asking you to follow her. She wants to show you another person in the picture, for you to befriend. Dai, I am your friend! Don't ever forget that."

"Don't you get it? She doesn't take you as a friend??

?Wha??

?She loves you! And she's doing her best to show you that!"

I was surprised at what Dai had just said. Does she really mean it?

"Apparently someone out there doesn't want Cirno to have her happiness..."

"Who?"

"Sit down."

We both sat on Cirno's bed.

"Over a thousand years ago there lived a great youkai who terrorized everyone, humans and youkai alike. She roamed the world, in search of food and causing chaos wherever she went. Her thirst for blood and her hunger for destruction never stop no matter what. Just the mere mention of her name would instill fear into the hearts of all. However, that name of hers has been long forgotten..."

*CRASH*

What was that?

Both Dai and I rushed downstairs, only to see Star, panting and covered in blood.

"What happened?"

"T-t-t-that t-t-thing... Luna, Sunny, t-t-t-t-they..."

"Get a grip of yourself, girl! Take a deep breath, girl. Easy? Take it easy??

She took a few seconds to catch her breath.

?Ya? okay? Now can you slowly tell us what happened?"

Star was still panting, but managed to relax a little and started talking.

"She said something about ?the beast?? some ?number of the beast?..."

"What?"

We took Star into the house and let her lie down on the couch before heading out.

Dai grabbed my hand as we rushed over to the fairies? home.

"Do you know about the number of the beast? Ever heard of it? It?s pretty much known by any old youkai or even any human who has studied the history of this place. It?s a number they used to represent one of the most powerful youkai in Gensokyo? The second, to be exact?"

I thought for a while.

"Yea, I think I do... You mean 666?"

"No, I mea- oh no..."

We looked at the three fairies' home, wrecked and ravaged as two bodies laid on the floor. Everything was a mess.

That very scene the other day came into play again, flashing before my very eyes as I looked at the horror which lied before me.

Luna twitched.

"Luna! Are you oka-"

She suddenly attempted to talk in a weak voice.

"Run..."

"What was that?"

Dai looked at me.

"I think she said... run..."

We looked at each other after realizing her message and quickly turned back, only to find something which made Dai drop her jaw in fear. Her eyes widened as she trembled. Her legs shook without stop.

On the walls were written in the still-wet blood of the fairies: ⑨⑨⑨

...

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Next part will probably be the last...
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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #83 on: April 16, 2011, 12:54:00 PM »
demon cirno
power of love cures her
super happy angry sexy times are a go.

Thats the next chapter, called it :V

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #84 on: April 16, 2011, 01:34:00 PM »
demon cirno
power of love cures her
super happy angry sexy times are a go.

Thats the next chapter, called it :V

Good guy turns out to have super-powered evil side, cured by the love of her friends, and everyone lives happily ever after?

Too cliche.  :V
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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #85 on: April 17, 2011, 12:13:04 AM »
Omg someones on a rampage.  And someones gonna die:V
But yeah gj as always
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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #86 on: April 17, 2011, 07:43:22 AM »
It's here...

Note: May contain a certain scene inappropriate for minors (mentions of "going deeper", female-on-male action, lots of screaming, etc)
You have been warned...

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Short #8?9, Part 14(/14)

"Hey..."

Dai softly whispered to me, still trembling.

"Find Cirno, quick!"

"Huh?"

"You heard me. Go back home and find Cirno!"

"If you're thinking about leaving you behind then forget it. I'm not gonna leave you behind like this. We'll leave together!"

Dai held onto my hand. I could feel her hand shaking as well.

"Hold on tight..."

Together we got out of the house as stealthily as possible.

"I think I know where Cirno is..."

"Where?"

"That one place she goes to when she's sad. This time, I bet it's because she's afraid to face her..."

"What do you mean? I still don't get it."

"Sigh."

She kept silent for a while.

"Cirno used to be one of the most powerful youkai out there, back in those days. She gained respect from many, human and youkai alike. She's kind to everyone. However, one tragic day, everything was taken away from her. That one youkai who came to her territory, killed everyone right before her eyes, leaving her traumatized. The youkai mentioned her own name, which terrified even the so-called 'beast' who was in fact, not that monstrous at all."

"Who was that youkai anyway?"

"Like I said, her name has long been forgotten. That fateful day, Cirno experienced the shame of losing. But more importantly, she realized how precious her friends were to her. Cirno did, however, manage to weaken the girl enough for her to be sealed away by youkai exterminators who encountered her right after their long lasting battle. At least, that's what she thought..."

"..."

So Cirno used to be...

Suddenly I remembered that one time I was attacked by the firefly youkai, Wriggle, when I was out in the forest, looking for mushrooms. I suddenly remembered the Cirno that saved me that day. She wasn't the same Cirno I have been living with.

Wait, so that Cirno was real? It wasn't just a dream?

"The other day, when Cirno left you all of a sudden in the middle of your conversation, she saw her... She was right outside the window, smiling at Cirno as if she were thinking 'Finally, I've found you!' That seal on her had weakened throughout the years. She had been exorcised many times before in the past, but even then the seal cannot contain her for good. Right now, the seal is practically broken... She is out there somewhere... And right now, she's looking for her one sworn enemy, making sure to finish her off this time... Cirno knows that too... And she knows she's no match for her..."

Dai put her hand on my shoulder.

"The second tallest tree to the right of Cirno's house. She's hiding among the leaves. Most probably?"

She pushed me about two feet away as I lost my balance and fell on my butt.

"Ow, what gives?"

"Go..."

An array of dark-coloured, bullet-like projectiles shot out of nowhere, stabbing Dai from the back before disappearing.

I looked behind Dai and was shocked at what I was seeing.

It was a spiraling ball of darkness, about the size of that mansion down the lake.

And then a voice echoed from within it.

"So, you there, green-haired one. You're a friend of that weak ol' ice fairy, eh? I guess you know why I'm here. Any friend of hers is a target of mine..."

That voice sounded like it came from a young lady...

"Youkai of the Void at your service..."

...but...

"I need not have a name..."

...just from her voice alone...

"But if you would like to at least keep one name in your head when you go to Hell, then remember this..."

...I can feel my heart race. I can feel the fear, sipping into every vein in my body. I can feel death standing right before me...

"...Rumia..."

And with that a figure appeared from within the darkness and jumped right at Dai.

It appears to be a girl, about the age of 20, with long blonde hair and a red halo above her head. Her eyes were glowing red and she had razor sharp fangs, like that of a vampire's you'd see on television. She had black wings sprouting from her back, that of a raven's.

With a wave of her arm, she summoned a sword out of thin air, engulfed in shadows.

Dai shouted at me.

"RUN!"

Without anymore hesitation, I stood up and ran towards Cirno's hiding place.

I looked back one last time.

Without any effort, the blonde-haired girl stabbed the sword right through Dai's body.

"Don't worry... I won't kill you... yet. I'll do it as slowly and as painfully as I can..." she said with a sadistic smile.

"I'm not afraid of you!"

"I know you darned fairies can't die. But what if I rip your pretty wings off, cut out those pitiful limbs and slowly bite off that cute little face of yours? I'll savor every moment..."

"Y-you d-d-don't scare me, you bit-AHHH"

"Oh I'm sorry, my hand slipped."

From that far a distance, I could still hear Dai's screams and the sound of something being ripped, clawed or bitten off of her.

I didn't turn back. I knew it was wrong to leave her behind, but it was all I could do at that time.

"Does it still hurt? That's no fun anymore now that it's all numb. Don't worry, honey. I'll take care of the boy once I'm done with you, okay?"

I managed to get away and reach Cirno's. Now to find that tree...

I kept wiping off my endlessly flowing tears. I looked around for that tree Dai mentioned. And then I looked up for a while?

Yeah, it's the second tallest tree alright...

Two trees stood above the rest. Both at least ten meters higher than the rest.

How am I gonna climb it?

I thought for a bit...

And a sudden chilling scream pierced the entire forest and is heard no more.

I don't have any time left. I need to get her.

"CIRNO!!!"

No reply.

"CIRNO! COME OUT NOW! YOU CALL YOURSELF THE STROGEST? YOU ABANDONED YOUR FRIENDS WHEN THEY NEEDED YOU MOST! YOU-"

"Okay, okay I get it. Stop screaming already..."

I was relieved to finally hear a reply and simply turned back without a second to spare.

And then I realized, a little too late, that the voice wasn't Cirno's...

...

"Your little friend and I had loads of fun. Here, take a look at her last smile," the girl said as she took out something from behind her...

She grabbed Dai by the hair...

Her disembodied head looked back at me...

Her expression showed extreme pain...

Her mouth was wide open...

Or to be exact, her bottom jaw had been ripped off, revealing the back of her throat...

Her blood was still dripping on the ground, from every wound, every single cut on her face, and even more of the red droplets were dripping from her jawless mouth, and from her neck with her spinal cord still partially attached...

I covered up my mouth as I looked at the most gruesome scene in my life.

"I'm still hungry, though..."

She put her tongue on Dai's cheek and slowly went up her face, licking the blood on the cuts she had put on her.

She put up her index finger and to my shock, she forced it into Dai's right eye. She pulled out the eyeball and stuffed it in her mouth, chewing on it as if it were gummy worms. Really, really round gummy worms...

I couldn't hold it in much longer. I fell on my knees and I vomited after seeing that last gruesome and sadistic act of hers, which was the most disgusting thing ever. The sound of the eyeball being chewed made things even worse.

"Mmm~ chewy~ so chewy~ delicious~"

She said it in a melodious voice as if she were singing a song.

"I guess she didn't see that one coming, huh? Hahaha..."

What disgusted me the most wasn't actually the consuming of the eyeball, but what she did afterwards?

She put her face on Dai's, stuck her tongue out and started "kissing" her...

"Mmm... So this is what they call a kiss? No wonder I hear it's good, it really is!" she said while slurping all the way.

She slowly worked her way up to Dai's empty right eye socket and stuck her tongue inside. She started licking the inside, moving her tongue all around the hole, making sure it's all nice and clean?

I puked once again, unable to withstand such a disgusting act.

She withdrew her tongue.

I thought it was over. Oh how wrong I was...

She looked at me with a sinister smile.

"Do you think this next part will taste good? Hehe..."

She put a finger into the eye socket and started digging...

"Aww, it's too deep... I have to go deeper?"

I knew what she was doing and that thought alone made me barf on the floor once again.

"I'm still hungry. Oh well, I?m a little lazy to get it out of this tight hole? Very well then, it's your turn now..."

My body shivered. My legs trembled. My eyes widened.

"No... Please..."

She took small steps towards me.

Every single step puts me this much closer to death.

She curtsied.

"Oh, how can I forget my manners? People call me Rumia. Just remember that name when you're in Hell, okay?"

She smiled with her eyes closed?

I couldn't move my body at all. It didn't respond to whatever I was telling it to do.

She got closer and closer to me.

I opened my mouth but I couldn't scream. I was just too scared.

Moments later she was standing right before me. Her face was only an inch away from mine.

She pushed me down on the floor and mounted herself on top of me.

"Don't worry. If you're afraid of dying, just be strong! I'll make sure you don't die that quickly. I'll make it as painful as possible, okay?"

She unbuttoned my shirt and put her finger on my chest, slowly moving down to my stomach.

With much ease, Rumia poked my abdomen with her finger and slowly cut it open...

I tried my best but no sound came out from my mouth. My tears were flowing nonstop.

I forced a scream and finally, something that's not a tiny squeak came out.

It was only a single word. But I never expected that word to be something other than a big "Help!"...

"CIRNO!!!"

... actually, I did. Somehow I knew, deep inside, that she would come if I shouted loud enough.

I didn't have the strength to shout again.

I looked down.

Rumia slowly tore open my stomach, revealing my intestines, making sure I suffer as much pain as possible.

She looked back at me.

"Wow. Enjoying the view? Haha... You sure have a lot of guts kid. Hahaha..."

Laugh all you want, you monster. I know she will come. She'll be here soon, I just know it!

Everything started to get blur, Rumia's laughter became more and more distorted every passing second.

Cirno, I love you...

I know you will come to my rescue...

I know you will never leave your friends to die...

I know you will never abandon me...

You said it before once, remember? Before I went to bed...

You said that you'll never give me up, let me down or turn around and desert me...

You said you'll never make me cry, that you'll never say goodbye...

But most importantly...

You said you'll never tell a lie and hurt me...

I hope you don't...

I know you won't...

It may just be a joke on me that day but deep inside we both know you meant it...

Cirno...

Everything blacked out...

And then there's a sudden chilling wind...

It's so cold...

?

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Did "I" die? Was "I" saved?
Or was it all just a dream?
...
Madness?

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #87 on: April 18, 2011, 11:18:11 AM »
Short #8?9, Epilogue...

?Hey there, kiddo. What?s with all these ?DO NOT CROSS? signs??

?Oh, I heard they?re gonna demolish that shrine up there. No one ever goes there anyway. No one ever has for decades now I heard. I recall reading the news about what they?re going to build over that old, run down shrine, but I don?t really remember what, exactly. I?m sorry, mister.?

Sigh.

?So sir, can we go back now?? said the nurse, about to turn my wheelchair the other way.

?No??

?Why? We aren?t allowed to cross beyond that point.?

?Please, miss? For a dying old man? I beg of you??

?I don?t know??

?Please??

?Well, okay??

She pushed my wheelchair towards the foot of the stairs and looked at me.

I've been in a comma for a really long time. From what the doctors said, I was most probably involved in a freak accident of some sort (or probably a failed homicide, but they did mention how it was impossible for any human to cause such a wound with any sort of weapon) and even until now they still haven?t found the cause. Fifty goddamn years and they still haven?t found it?

They say they found me, lying by the roadside and someone actually called for the ambulance. They found me with my abdomen torn open by an unknown source; my arms and legs were severely damaged, and my rib cage was broken; half of it had been shattered. It was a miracle that I actually survived from the blood loss.

I don?t have any friends or family that I can remember. The doctors said my time is soon, too?

What an unlucky life I have had?

This shrine means nothing to me?

But somehow, it?s all I have left?

I just had a dream once about this shrine. I dreamt about how beautiful a place it was inside?

I had a wonderful dream about a group of new friends I made there, on the other side?

?Sir, can we go back now? There?s no way we can climb up these stairs in your current condition??

I did not heed her words. Instead I tried my best to get up.

Slowly I pushed the wheelchair to the foot of the stairs and looked up.

Sigh.

I don?t think I can reach the shrine like this. It?s nowhere in sight.

With all my strength, I pushed myself up from my wheelchair. Slowly and steadily I got up on my feet. It?s been so long since I last stood up like this.

I lifted up my right leg and put it on the first step. This is going to be really painful. They say the first step is always the hardest, followed by the second and then the third. I felt my heart race anxiously as my feet trembled. I put all my weight onto my right foot and pushed myself up.

I did it!

The nurse looked in amazement as she slowly followed me up, holding me by the arm.

I decided to take the second step. I lifted my left foot and put it on the second step. I repeated what I had just done a moment ago. I was successful yet again!

Slowly we made our way up as the shrine came into view.

When we finally reached the top, we could only stare at the shrine, devastated at its condition. It was almost in ruins. There were holes in the roof, the doors and windows were already gone and almost half the shrine had been destroyed, as if it had been razed by a huge fire.

But then, somehow, I had a hint of nostalgia at that time. Somehow I knew I would end up looking at the shrine like this.

?Sir, can we go back now??

?You stay here for a while, young lady. I?m going inside? just for a while??

?But-?

?These are my last moments. At least let me cherish them??

She wiped the tear off her face as she nodded at me.

I took small steps inside, as the floor made really loud creaking noises.

Somehow it felt nostalgic. It feels as if I?d come here before?

I moved the cobweb away and saw a statue, hidden under a pile of rubble.

I got down on my knees, put my hands together and closed my eyes?

And I prayed?

?

Everything got silent, and then suddenly I heard birds chirping outside.

?Hey! What are you doing here??

I opened up my eyes and turned behind.

?Hey! I?m talking to you, old man!?

All the cobwebs were gone. Dust was nowhere at all, as I could take long, deep breaths now without choking in it. The planks of wood lying on the floor were all gone. In fact, the whole shrine was clean!

It seemed suspiciously familiar.

?Hey!?

I looked at the source of the voice.

It was a young girl, in a red and white shrine maiden outfit. The clothes were really weird, especially her sleeves that were detached from the main clothing itself, yet they don?t fall off. However, it seemed familiar, as if I?ve seen them on someone before?

?If you?re not here to make donations, please step out!?

?You don?t happen to be the Hakurei shrine maiden, do you? Uhhh? Reimu, if my memory serves right??

?What? You know my mother? How did you-?

I was a little confused?

But somehow, it?s as if I already knew this would happen?

And then another girl came into the shrine?

I looked outside.

The girl had big, blue seraphim wings sprouting from her back and she had long, aqua hair reaching down to her knees. She was shedding tears and sobbing.

She walked towards me and as she approached me, her steps got smaller. Her body shrunk to the size of a little girl?s, her hair became a little shorter than shoulder length, and her wings disappeared and the air around her back froze, turning into six icicle-shaped wings protruding from her back.

I fell on my knees as she embraced me.

I wrapped my arms around her?

She was cold as ever?

?This is not a dream, is it?? I said as my tears came streaming down by themselves.

?It never was??

?Haha??

I wiped her tears off her cheeks.

?I?m sorry? I came a little too late? Can you stay now?...?

?Sure? at least now I know the paradise I?d been living in was never fake? at least now I can rest??

?No? please? don?t go??

I closed my eyes and smiled at her, with the largest and happiest smile I have ever given her. And with my last breath, I said?

?I love you, Cirno? even AFTER death do us part??

And even then, I could still hear her cries...

...

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So is TRUE END a HAPPY END or a SAD END? I leave it to you to decide...
« Last Edit: May 16, 2011, 09:22:22 AM by CS »
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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #88 on: April 18, 2011, 10:49:26 PM »
Wow. This is just, wow. It's 6 o'clock in the morning here, so I'm too sleepy to find anything else to say about the ending. Although, It's kinda weird how the time jumps from the time of the first generation to the second generation of Gensokyo- no, wait, it's the "dream." Nevermind.

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Re: Some Random Shorts
« Reply #89 on: April 21, 2011, 11:45:56 AM »
@Crow
I just realized I made a huge mistake in the first part. I was supposed to at least vaguely mention that the protagonist was a young man, about the age of 20 or so, but I forgot. Sorry about that, but I think the ending should be enough, though. It does have him mention that 50 years have passed so I'll just leave it at that  :derp:

And here's another random short. Although I don't really know what to do with this yet, I guess I can come up with something soon  :V

*NOTE: This is all just a work of fiction and any similarity to any real people in real life is purely coincidental.

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Short #108, Part 1(/23)

The melodious song remains stuck in my head. I just cannot force it out no matter what. Even after closing my ears, the song can still be heard.

The song was sung by a beautiful voice indeed, the voice of a goddess' you can say.

However, every passing second, everything around me grows darker and darker...

How did I get myself into this mess anyway?

----------

*Flashback to the beginning of the year...*

The school bell rings and marks yet another boring day at school.

Sigh.

I don't really dislike coming to school, it's just, well...

"Yo man!"

"Sup, bro? Great game last night!"

Sigh.

I need more friends?

Ahem. Well you see, I've been coming to school all these years with no real goal in life. I'm just planning to graduate and get a decent job somewhere and just live on like that.

Oh, how can I forget? My name is Syouji Morishita, an ordinary high school kid...

"Hey, morning, Syouj!"

"Yo..."

I slapped the guy a high five.

Oh, and this is Chucky. We've been together since our first years back in kindergarten. He's the only person who actually hangs out with me. Haha, I remember those days when we used to get into fights and say how we hated each other, that we didn?t ever want to see each other again, and we?d just somehow become friends again the next day as if the fights never happened. Ah, good times, good times?

"Okay, good morning, class-"

"Sigh. Another boring day..."

Yes, I said that out loud on purpose. I did hear some giggles here and there but they disappeared right when the teacher gave her speech.

"Okay, class. We have a new transfer student here so I hope you boys and girls treat her well..."

And then a really cute girl with long, silky green hair walks into the class. She bows politely and introduces herself with a beautiful voice, fitting for a girl with such flawless looks...

"Uhh... Hi there... My name is...?

Damn! She?s hot!

Well, I may be the class joker on certain occasions but I really regret trying to make a fool of myself just a moment ago.

Darn it, I?ve just made a really bad first impression?

Wait?

What was her name again?

I missed out that part?

Oh no?

And that was my only chance too?

?Okay, you can have that empty seat over there since there was a student who just transferred??

Yeah, I remember him?

He was a nice guy and all but he got into a little fight with a freshman student over something as petty as ?who gets to use the toilet first?.

Yeah, really childish, huh?

Well, he was really freaking rich so going to a private school wouldn?t matter much to him anyway. And with his intelligence and good looks, I doubt he?ll have a hard time coping in class and getting girls at the same time.

Damn, I feel so pathetic?

Wait a sec-?

?Hi there? nice to meet you??

She bowed again.

I forgot again?

That guy who left sat right in front of me? which means? I HAVE A REALLY HOT GIRL SITTING IN FRONT OF ME NOW! WOOHOO!

I smiled right back at her.

I turned to look at Chucky, who was seated right beside me.

I whispered to him.

?Hey, dude. Did you catch her name just n-??

He was staring blankly into space, with a slight nosebleed.

?Dude??

I shook him.

?Dude! Chuck!?

I shook him even harder, but trying not to make it that obvious for the teacher to see us.

?Hihihi??

I heard the girl giggle.

Yeah, we?re the class jokers, but this is not the time for us to be laughed at! And she is certainly NOT supposed to laugh AT us?

Damn, I?m making a really bad impression.

?

The bell rang, telling us that it was time for recess.

?INCOMING! THE HORDE!? I shouted.

Oh wait.

I slapped myself on the face.

Wait. ARGHHH!

I heard her giggling again, politely closing her mouth with her hand as she did.

So cute...

?Hey, you?re pretty funny??

?Oh? uhh? thanks? Wait, I mean- uhh??

I was struggling to talk.

This never really happened to me before.

?I? uhh??

What?s wrong with me?

?Kochiya??

?Huh??

?Sanae Kochiya. But you can call me Sanae~? she said as she smiled at me with her eyes closed.

Oh, so cute?

?Uhhh? Syouji? Morishita? Syouji is fine??

I reached out for her hand and touched her palm.

Oh, god! Her skin is so smooth I can?t even think of something I can describe it with!

I felt my heart beat faster and faster as I began sweating everywhere.

I turned to look at Chucky, who was standing by the door, staring at us.

Well, it is his job to stay back in class until everyone leaves for the cafeteria since he?s the class representative.

But then I looked again and realized he was suffering from another nosebleed again?

?Oh, and that?s Chucky. He?s our class representative, and he?s a really nice guy.?

Sanae looked at my best friend and smiled at him, making his nosebleed worse, which he had to continuously wipe off and used an entire packet of tissues just to get rid of it.

Well? this looks like the start of a good friendship with the new girl.

Who knows? We just might fall in love one day?

Or so I thought?

Not knowing the truth and dark secrets behind this seemingly perfect girl or the crazy adventures that await us?

That was something we would soon find out?

...

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I wonder how this one will turn out...  :V
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