Well, I tried the tips I got, and made it all the way to Fujiyama Volcano! (how the hell did I...?)
I'll upload my latest EXTRA replay so I can be sufficiently critiqued and notified of suckness.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=27BL83D8
Well, I'mma give this a watch now, but may I recommend using
http://replays.gensokyou.org/ to upload your replays?
SUPER SUDDEN EDIT: Watched it. I'll give my advice, and I'll try not to do it like last time.
During the stage section, you don't tend to try to PoC unless it's completely clear. If you would become a bit more comfortable with it, you could probably score the 666 point extend by Fujiyama Volcano. I think you were some 45~ points away, so you don't need to push yourself that hard.
You also stay unfocused during a lot of the stage. Normally, this would be fine, but there are times when enemy familiars block your shots, so switching to Yukari can help you dispose of them faster.
That wave of fairies before the death fairy, the set that fires the purple bursts. You stay still while they're firing, which is good, but then you move down. This makes streaming the next wave so much harder than it could be, rather than if you stay at the same height.
You tend to perform well on Mokou's noncards, and they're straight up dodging anyways, so no need to comment.
The only thing to do better with her first spellcard is to become comfortable with slipping through the pellets.
You could probably stay focused during the second card, which would probably end it quicker. But it's also a matter of misdirecting the phoenixes a bit further apart.
Flaw of Forgiving Shrine. You handle it differently than I would, but you still capture it nonetheless.
Xu-Fu's Dimension. You capture it, but you may want to learn to turn around so you're not driven to the side where you could be punished.
Honest Man's Deah. You hesitated and moved left on the first wave. Trust your gut and slip through! But you learn this for the rest of the attack.
Hollow Tree Woo... You're awfully inconsistent. You circle around the top at first, then... Well, you see. It's just probably best for you to grind through it in Spell Practice mode until you find a path that's right for you.
Phoenix Tail. Dodge. You find gaps through most of it though, so I commend you.
Fujiyama Volcano. Ha ha! That one pattern that makes a brick wall for those trying to clear Mokou. Stay focused when you can, and grind a path through in spell practice.
Actually, my advice is crappy, but I tried.