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| helvetica:
This thread is for the lovely lady Nietz to resist the gentleman's charm of Sir Flashtirade. |
| Fetch()tirade:
Aww I have to be the guy? Well, here goes the first try. Is it by some twist of fate or someone's evil curse? Has language finally left me? Have my lips sent for my hearse? For I am plagued with such a sin that few could find worse: I can express my love for you through no form save for verse. |
| Nietz:
Well, that's nice for a first try, Flash dear. But it feels kind of canned, like you have a verse ready for any cheap floozie you find in a bar. You gotta be more creative or hard-working if you wanna win me~ |
| Fetch()tirade:
Well try this! There is no holy mount of faithful bound no response to all their pleas no phantasms of the blossoms' sight or those in dreamers' weaves no tales of the flower land no story of easter eaves no immortal and unending dark no unmarred cherry leaves no avatar of the reddest evil no unbound airborne fantasies no strength left unaccaounted for and unable to seize no polytheist underground no blood-stained melodies no magic equal rectanles no bullet photography on lunatic or any mode that can finish me with ease But somehow just the sight of you can bring me to my knees. |
| Nietz:
Well, yeah, poetic prowess is okay but... a love poem made almost entirely of negations? Reminds me of WS's sonnet 116, where he says "love" but is actually thinking of "I don't... you". Is it that you subconsciously associate me with "NO" in your mind? Considering the effort some of the others suitors are putting forward would male me feel kinda cheap if I fell for some generic verses. I would have some more words of reproval, but let's keep them for further failures~ |
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