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~Hakurei Shrine~ => Alice's Art Atelier => Topic started by: Osiris on March 16, 2013, 07:34:14 PM

Title: {Aят} A couple of my fugly art drawings ☹
Post by: Osiris on March 16, 2013, 07:34:14 PM

So, i'm new to here so i thought i'd just post a couple of my drawings? C:
Non of them are touhou related since i only just started becoming a fan of touhou a couple of days ago so yeah.
Plus i know, they suck badly. I practice hard but.. mhm.
Here they are:
Link (http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/007/2/7/aladdin_the_magi_by_rantosan-d5qqpo5.png)
Link (http://th09.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2013/008/e/e/judal_by_rantosan-d5qur6d.png)
Link (http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/011/5/b/yuno____by_rantosan-d5r53zk.png)
Link (http://th00.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/001/0/9/dundeey_nyanya__by_rantosan-d5q11jm.png)
Link (http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/359/e/7/teto__by_rantosan-d5p4wvr.png)
If you want to check out more of my drawings click on my Deviantart in my signature.
Also i accept critique so it would be nice if you would give me some :')
Once again, sorry for the fugly drawings

Title: Re: {Aят} A couple of my fugly art drawings ☹
Post by: Delfigamer on March 17, 2013, 12:30:08 AM

Quote from: Osiris on March 16, 2013, 07:34:14 PM

i only just started becoming a fan of touhou a couple of days ago so yeah.

And already is capturing MotK's AAA. You're fast guy, I must say. :V
And what does "Ayat" mean? UPD I've got it now. -_-
Okay, now it is time for critique. From what I've seen, I do a conclusion that you lack:
- proportions;
- shapes and lines;
- anatomy (collarbones on 2nd are just uh);
- good boobs.
Otherwise, good ayat. :V

Title: Re: {Aят} A couple of my fugly art drawings ☹
Post by: Osiris on March 17, 2013, 01:10:04 AM

Thanks for the critique, i'll try to improve and thanks very much :D

Title: Re: {Aят} A couple of my fugly art drawings ☹
Post by: Mеа on March 17, 2013, 10:22:04 PM

Hey welcome!
I take it you like to practice eyes the most(like me : >). The rest of the body is a bit on the less developed side, but looks good.
Just one thing I noticed was that cat girl had 2 left hands.

Title: Re: {Aят} A couple of my fugly art drawings ☹
Post by: Osiris on March 18, 2013, 03:50:53 PM

Quote from: Nia on March 17, 2013, 10:22:04 PM

Hey welcome!
I take it you like to practice eyes the most(like me : >). The rest of the body is a bit on the less developed side, but looks good.
Just one thing I noticed was that cat girl had 2 left hands.

Ah yeah i know, it was a total accident. After i finished my friend pointed it out to me T^T

Title: Re: {Aят} A couple of my fugly art drawings ☹
Post by: Teewee on March 18, 2013, 08:10:30 PM

I'd say your isn't that bad, but could use some polishing. I'd say the best part is the coloring; it's pretty charming! :) Oh, and what's your improvement regimen like?

Title: Re: {Aят} A couple of my fugly art drawings ☹
Post by: Osiris on March 19, 2013, 07:16:22 AM

Quote from: Honest Espeon on March 18, 2013, 08:10:30 PM

I'd say your isn't that bad, but could use some polishing. I'd say the best part is the coloring; it's pretty charming! :) Oh, and what's your improvement regimen like?

Dunno what improvement regimen is but i'd say its what i'd like to improve on. If it is i'd want to improve on my anatomy and hands