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~Hakurei Shrine~ => Patchouli's Scarlet Library => Topic started by: Tengukami on June 30, 2011, 02:53:00 AM

Title: Because I'm Home - Part Two
Post by: Tengukami on June 30, 2011, 02:53:00 AM: OK, so, after a long hiatus, I decided to take a crack at Touhou fiction again. This time, I wanted to give myself the challenge of writing about a character I've never been particularly fond of but still find interesting. In this case, it's Sanae. I'm writing this as I go, without so much as an outline to guide me, which - to those of you familiar with what I've written in the past - might know is very unlike me. This is the first part. Your feedback is appreciated.

Part One (http://tengukami.blogspot.com/2011/09/because-im-home-part-one.html)
Part Two (http://www.shrinemaiden.org/forum/index.php/topic,10044.msg713682.html#msg713682)
Title: Re: Because I'm Home - Part One
Post by: Hideki on June 30, 2011, 05:24:06 AM: I wonder... Is this the same Aya that was in your other story?
Title: Re: Because I'm Home - Part One
Post by: Tengukami on June 30, 2011, 06:00:27 AM: Quote from: Hideki on June 30, 2011, 05:24:06 AM
I wonder... Is this the same Aya that was in your other story?

You mean this one (http://www.shrinemaiden.org/forum/index.php/topic,7187.0.html) (shameless plug)?

I don't know myself. Maybe! Guess we'll find out together.
Title: Re: Because I'm Home - Part One
Post by: XephyrEnigma on July 05, 2011, 02:07:05 AM: Short, but this is looking good.
I want to see more of this, especially since more could stand to be explained. (i mean, yeah the character hasn't opened up yet, that last line just means "more!")
Title: Re: Because I'm Home - Part Two
Post by: Tengukami on September 13, 2011, 03:44:32 AM: And only a little over two months later! Will have to copy/paste here until I remember my blog password ...

Edit: Found it.

http://tengukami.blogspot.com/2011/09/because-im-home-part-two.html
Title: Re: Because I'm Home - Part Two
Post by: Esifex on September 13, 2011, 03:56:39 AM: Nitori was thinking with Portals! If she found the blue crystal then she could control where she ended up.